Shuangjie 1V1.
The female detective met the female forensic doctor.
"Hello, Doctor Shi."
"Hello, officer."
As a young police officer who traveled through the book, Guan Wan'er felt that the heroine in the original book was a bit strange.
"Forensic Doctor, why are you always close to me?"
As a forensic doctor, Shi Qingnuan should be calm, but when she met the female detective, she had to get close to her.
"Officer, you smell so good!"
They went through one case after another and finally found the "real murderer" who killed Guan Wan'er.
Reader comments
This novel is the second work with two heroines that I have devoted my efforts to writing, and I have always been in love with writing about two heroines.
If I were asked to recommend between two works, I would choose this one without hesitation.
Looking back at my first novel with two female protagonists, frankly speaking, it has many unsatisfactory qualities and it was a slightly immature attempt in my creative process.
In the process of writing this novel, I often fell into a wonderful creative whirlpool.
Sometimes as I write, my mind will suddenly go blank, and those previously carefully conceived plots seem to have been quietly erased by time.
So, I had to reopen the outline and try to find traces of inspiration.
But how could the few words in the outline satisfy my desire for details?
So, I simply started from the first chapter and carefully recalled every word, trying to make those past thoughts come alive again.
However, in the midst of such repeated chewing, new inspirations are like buds breaking through the soil in spring, inadvertently poking their heads out of the soil.
These new ideas are like bright stars, adding a different kind of brilliance to my creative journey.
Therefore, compared with the first work, my satisfaction with this novel has made a qualitative leap.
I feel from the bottom of my heart that this novel is well written, and every word carries my love and persistence for the story.
But I also know that the road to creation is long. Perhaps as my skills improve, when I look back at this book again one day in the future, I will find that it still has a lot to improve.
However, those are all chapters in the future, and at this moment, I just want to share this current joy and satisfaction with you.
In this text, I ramble on about every detail of my creation, perhaps a little incoherently and incomprehensible.
But in the final analysis, there is only one thing I want to convey: I am sincerely satisfied with this novel, and I fully expect you to enter this story world of two heroines with me and feel the joy, anger, sorrow and joy in it.
I hope you will like my thoughtful work, and I look forward to your valuable opinions and suggestions, so that we can witness my growth and progress together.
[Shy][shy][shy]
This one is obviously much better than the first novel in terms of writing and plot. Please keep writing, I hope you can read Lily. If you like all Lily novels, don't write anything that is not interesting. I can pinyin it myself. I feel that the relationship between the two people has gradually improved. It is obviously better than the previous one. In fact, don't write too brain-burning things like solving crimes. I don't understand things that are too brain-burning. This is just my own idea and has nothing to do with others. Hahaha
How shameless
Close your eyes😌😌😌
See heaven😇😇😇
That's where your smile is hidden😁😁😁
I dodge countless hunters' guns🎯🎯🎯
Drive away the sadness crawling out of the grave😢😢😢
For you😨😨😨
I turned into a werewolf🐺🐺🐺
For you😱😱😱
Caught crazy 🤡🤡🤡
For you😰😰😰
Wear a thick disguise👹👹👹
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Changed my heart💀💀💀
Can we meet again🥺🥺🥺
I have prayed hard in front of Buddha for thousands of years🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️
How many lives are you willing to use🥰🥰🥰
In exchange for our lifelong love💞💞💞
I hope I can move God😭😭😭
Can we meet again🥺🥺🥺
I have prayed hard in front of Buddha for thousands of years🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️
But before I stepped across this Naihe Bridge🎭🎭🎭
Let me kiss your face again😘😘😘
Is there a possibility? The murderer behind the scenes is Shijia's old man? It may also be a trap set up by Pang Zhi to seize the property of the Shi family. It is also possible that some former enemy of the Shi family came to take revenge! That's why they exchanged their two children. If they really came for revenge, then the murderer would tell his children after he recognized his children later, and let his children be his traitors or kill his parents with his own hands! But according to this plot, it should be impossible to happen. Of course there are other possibilities. Of course, there is also the possibility of the old man of the Shi family, but I can't guess why he would do this? ? ? It is even possible that the murderer behind the scenes may know the truth of the world, and the so-called God may be connected with the murderer behind the scenes, and there may be a cooperative relationship between them, so the genius will affect the original heroine, but the appearance of the current heroine affects the game he set, and it is possible that the current heroine will be targeted in the next plot! ! !
Of course, there may be someone with higher power than the Shi family. The person behind the scenes is either the old man or the murderer. The old man of the Shi family is still normal, but he may be faking it! ! !
It's quite good-looking, but could it use less rhetorical techniques and describe the characters' appearance less?
I am a sixth grade primary school student. Author, sometimes your writing is very similar to what our teacher said is an excellent composition.
Very pretty. In the first few chapters, I also wanted to complain about how the policeman was just a nymphomaniac. Later on, when he started solving crimes, it was so good that I became anxious along with it. There is plot control in the early stage. However, I found that my intuition is not generally accurate. I felt that something was wrong with that person from the beginning. Later, it turned out to be [cool]
This novel is the second work with two heroines that I have devoted my efforts to writing, and I have always been in love with writing about two heroines. If I were asked to recommend between two works, I would choose this one without hesitation. Looking back at my first novel with two female protagonists, frankly speaking, it has many unsatisfactory qualities and it was a slightly immature attempt in my creative process. In the process of writing this novel, I often fell into a wonderful creative whirlpool. Sometimes as I write, my mind will suddenly go blank, and those previously carefully conceived plots seem to have been quietly erased by time. So, I had to reopen the outline and try to find traces of inspiration. But how could the few words in the outline satisfy my desire for details? So, I simply started from the first chapter and carefully recalled every word, trying to make those past thoughts come alive again. However, in the midst of such repeated chewing, new inspirations are like buds breaking through the soil in spring, inadvertently poking their heads out of the soil. These new ideas are like bright stars, adding a different kind of brilliance to my creative journey. Therefore, compared with the first work, my satisfaction with this novel has made a qualitative leap. I feel from the bottom of my heart that this novel is well written, and every word carries my love and persistence for the story. But I also know that the road to creation is long. Perhaps as my skills improve, when I look back at this book again one day in the future, I will find that it still has a lot to improve. However, those are all chapters in the future, and at this moment, I just want to share this current joy and satisfaction with you. In this text, I ramble on about every detail of my creation, perhaps a little incoherently and incomprehensible. But in the final analysis, there is only one thing I want to convey: I am sincerely satisfied with this novel, and I fully expect you to enter this story world of two heroines with me and feel the joy, anger, sorrow and joy in it. I hope you will like my thoughtful work, and I look forward to your valuable opinions and suggestions, so that we can witness my growth and progress together. [Shy][shy][shy]
This one is obviously much better than the first novel in terms of writing and plot. Please keep writing, I hope you can read Lily. If you like all Lily novels, don't write anything that is not interesting. I can pinyin it myself. I feel that the relationship between the two people has gradually improved. It is obviously better than the previous one. In fact, don't write too brain-burning things like solving crimes. I don't understand things that are too brain-burning. This is just my own idea and has nothing to do with others. Hahaha
How shameless Close your eyes😌😌😌 See heaven😇😇😇 That's where your smile is hidden😁😁😁 I dodge countless hunters' guns🎯🎯🎯 Drive away the sadness crawling out of the grave😢😢😢 For you😨😨😨 I turned into a werewolf🐺🐺🐺 For you😱😱😱 Caught crazy 🤡🤡🤡 For you😰😰😰 Wear a thick disguise👹👹👹 For you🤗🤗🤗 Changed my heart💀💀💀 Can we meet again🥺🥺🥺 I have prayed hard in front of Buddha for thousands of years🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️ How many lives are you willing to use🥰🥰🥰 In exchange for our lifelong love💞💞💞 I hope I can move God😭😭😭 Can we meet again🥺🥺🥺 I have prayed hard in front of Buddha for thousands of years🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️ But before I stepped across this Naihe Bridge🎭🎭🎭 Let me kiss your face again😘😘😘
Is there a possibility? The murderer behind the scenes is Shijia's old man? It may also be a trap set up by Pang Zhi to seize the property of the Shi family. It is also possible that some former enemy of the Shi family came to take revenge! That's why they exchanged their two children. If they really came for revenge, then the murderer would tell his children after he recognized his children later, and let his children be his traitors or kill his parents with his own hands! But according to this plot, it should be impossible to happen. Of course there are other possibilities. Of course, there is also the possibility of the old man of the Shi family, but I can't guess why he would do this? ? ? It is even possible that the murderer behind the scenes may know the truth of the world, and the so-called God may be connected with the murderer behind the scenes, and there may be a cooperative relationship between them, so the genius will affect the original heroine, but the appearance of the current heroine affects the game he set, and it is possible that the current heroine will be targeted in the next plot! ! ! Of course, there may be someone with higher power than the Shi family. The person behind the scenes is either the old man or the murderer. The old man of the Shi family is still normal, but he may be faking it! ! !
It's quite good-looking, but could it use less rhetorical techniques and describe the characters' appearance less?
I am a sixth grade primary school student. Author, sometimes your writing is very similar to what our teacher said is an excellent composition.
Very pretty. In the first few chapters, I also wanted to complain about how the policeman was just a nymphomaniac. Later on, when he started solving crimes, it was so good that I became anxious along with it. There is plot control in the early stage. However, I found that my intuition is not generally accurate. I felt that something was wrong with that person from the beginning. Later, it turned out to be [cool]
Believe me, my bag will look good
It's great. Come on, the author is awesome.
I can't say it, but in a word, it looks good!