I Transmigrated to Douluo Dalu as Ning Rongrong's Biological Older Brother
穿越斗罗之我是宁荣荣亲哥
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- Ongoing
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- 95k Words
- Updated
- 1y ago
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- Fanqie
Synopsis
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A 100,000-Year-Old First Soul Ring in Soul Land
Soul Land Novels: Parts One, Two, Three, or Four, Anything Goes
Looking for books like "Douluo: Sign-In for Twin God-Tier Martial Souls from the Start". Fan fiction or stories with original characters, please.
Douluo or Battle Through the Heavens Without Wish Fulfillment
No female-oriented wish-fulfillment stories. The protagonist shouldn’t step on others or snatch their opportunities, and should forge a new path of cultivation. Meeting two of these three criteria is enough.
I Want Every Novel About Douluo!!!
What Douluo Dalu books do you all recommend?
Pure Douluo, Only Ning Rongrong in the Harem
Fans of “Bibi Dong,” Come Take a Look
Douluo Continent, Douluo Continent
Please, Douluo Dalu: Conquer Xiao Wu from the Start
Douluo Dalu: Ning Rongrong’s Older Brother
Douluo Dalu, One Heroine, Zhu Zhuqing or Ning Rongrong, System Novels
Any Douluo Dalu System novels with a single female lead, either Zhu Zhuqing or Ning Rongrong?
Douluo Dalu: Female Lead Xiao Wu Gets Pregnant with the Protagonist’s Child
Looking for Books with Ning Rongrong as the Female Lead
Torture Tang San, Beat Up the Master, Join the Consecration Hall, and Become Its Beloved Darling
The protagonist should be powerful and seize Tang San's opportunities along the way. If there's a female lead, she mustn't be a pushover: she should kill whoever needs killing. The divine position should preferably be the Asura God. If there's a male lead, no harem, and preferably a twin martial soul. No more than three martial souls, or it won't be any fun.
A Douluo World Transmigration Story: Crushing Tang San and Pairing Up with Zhu Zhuqing
Tang San’s Sister in Douluo Dalu, Super Powerful, Multiple Martial Souls, Everyone’s Favorite
Douluo Dalu, Original Female Lead
Douluo Dalu: Looking for a Protagonist Who Is the Disciple of Sword Douluo, With an Amber Sword Martial Soul
Douluo Dalu Fanfic: No Sycophancy Toward the Protagonist, with a Darker Tone
Looking for Novels Rated 9.9 on Tomato!
Reader comments 37
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The first person is all you. In the protagonist's interactive plot, does "you" refer to the protagonist, the narrator, or the elders teaching the protagonist, which makes it impossible to enter the plot. This should be the author's debut novel.
The content is quite good, I just hope the author can unify the pronouns 🤦
It's really uncomfortable to watch in the first person. The subject matter is good
A reminder to the newcomers coming later. Don't be fooled by the content in the introduction. It said there were multiple female protagonists. After reading it, one was confiscated and one was missed. The protagonist is only 15 years old, has no system, comes with twin martial arts, a sword, and a nine-treasure glazed tower. He is 15 years old and 62 years old, and his hips are too tight. As a protagonist, he does not even have a god-level martial spirit or a prehistoric martial spirit. How can he still be worthy of being the protagonist? You are Lin Fengzhi's son, so it's okay to have a Nine Treasures Glazed Pagoda, but your other martial spirit should be set to a god-level martial spirit. In the end, you set a sword, which is barely comparable to Sword Douluo's Seven Killing Sword. Moreover, you wear the title of multiple women, and the character is a eunuch. If it were 15 years old in other fanfics, it would have been Contra and collected a lot of women.
The person pronoun is very awkward, it seems like AI, the following is the expansion of this paragraph [what] [what]
A strong flavor of word play 🙂
The personal pronouns are used indiscriminately, without segmentation, and it is self-obscene. It is too awkward to read.
Personally, I think it looks great and I highly recommend it! 😳
I feel like the author is writing an essay, but I still give it 3 stars. The subject matter is good.
You can see if this person's pronoun can be changed? The second person view is quite uncomfortable.