Surviving on an Oxygen-Deprived Alien Planet, Does This Thing Also Play a Role in National Destiny?

There are too many branches in the first 20 chapters, the progress is too slow, and there are too many introductions. I wanted to give up at one point. Fortunately, the author realized the problem and corrected it later.

There are disadvantages as well as advantages. After all, there are few people writing about Hypoxia, and there are also few people reading it. First of all, the slow pacing and plot processing problems in the early stage, as well as the distribution of perspectives. Giving passers-by too much time in the early stage resulted in it looking like a pseudo-group portrait. There have been modifications later, but the understanding of the hypoxia game itself is a little less. For example, it is stated that after building coal to generate electricity, you should make smart batteries, prepare circuits, and temperature. Instead, I did not prepare for a natural gas mission, which disrupted some layouts. Now I have only perfected food, simple toilet cycles, and exploration. Of course, the biggest problem is caused by too few updates.

It's okay, but the early progress is too slow. Writing usually revolves around the protagonist. If you want to write about other supporting characters, you have to arrange the protagonist first and then write.

It seems that there are only a few people, but in fact all the people who play hypoxia are here [laughing evilly] [like]

Personally, I think it's okay, but I was stunned when I saw the weight of the blocks that fell during the excavation. It's 1,000 kilograms [cover face] [cover face]. It's hard to guess who picked it up [cover face] [cover face]

I bought all the DLC for Hypoxia, but my hand always crashes and restarts. I hope this book can teach me.

It is very interesting to write. I hope the author can write it to 1 million words [shy][shy][shy]

Not bad, this progress should be a little more than the number of words in the finished book

There are not many books on this track, so please contribute.

It looks good, but there are some things I don't quite understand.

It looks good, but can we speed up the progress... (Was it so slow in the early stage? I don't feel it)

Very well written, keep it up

It's quite interesting so far

The second book of Hypoxia is good to read

The writing is good, but it's a lack of oxygen [thinking]. In short, it's too stable (referring to this game event). Personally, I feel that the super magic and famine events produced by the same company will be more fun. Or it would be better for Worldwide to adopt this model. It feels like it was written purely as a popular science article.

It looks good. Although I don't play hypoxia, the introduction is very comprehensive and can be understood even if you are not familiar with it. When I read it, I felt like a mechanical aesthetic of MC playing industrial modules.

Come on, update. You've been updating every two or three days so early. I feel like I'm going to cut it.

The writing is pretty good, but judging by the way the author is looking at it, he probably plans to finish it in two or three hundred chapters. It's good to watch, but there are relatively few people playing Hypoxia, so I haven't seen much. Also, I've been raising it for so long and you only updated 5 chapters? It's not like I haven't updated in a month. Isn't it because the author has entered the palace?

More details than other novels.