Saving That Short-Lived Man

A very interesting and novel story about ghosts and immortals. The male and female protagonists have distinct personalities. The writing mainly focuses on the female protagonist. The writing style is good. There are many foreshadowings and the plot is layered. The sourness and dependence in the relationship are well written.

It's really good to watch. It revolves around a so-called "change of nature and destiny" Xie Langwu. The death endings of his previous lives were led to reincarnation by Guiyu again and again. The story unfolds from there, accompanying him. There are not many chapters where Rong Yu and Gongzi appear, but their roles are successfully created. Personally, I feel that the connection between Rong Yu and Xie Langwu is slightly lacking. At that time, Rong Yu and Xie Langwu always felt that Guiyu was looking at other people through him, and who was the young master in her mouth. Demons and ghosts are often associated with the evil of innocence and lack of heart. During the relationship with the young master, Guiyu began to take shape. Later, in order to get rid of the evil of innocence, she became a demon and cultivated immortality. However, she seemed to have forgotten many important things, such as the fading handwriting on the bluestone grave that could not be read. For example, she should also have a family to return to. The story of the young master and Guiyu has now become distant and blurred in time. Two or three things about the underworld, why Guiyu can use demons to cultivate immortality, why Guiyu attracts souls to thank Langwu every time, the "His Highness" of the Nine Heavens, the so-called bad fate, and the so-called "changing fate against heaven", all signs reveal that everything is extraordinary. In this life with Guiyu accompanying Xie Langwu, our little bitter melon finally gained something 😢 and no longer had nothing to cling to. It's just that this life seems to be too short. Guiyu's feelings only showed up a little bit. Xie Langwu Gaba died again. It's super good-looking. It's so hard to find stories with good writing style and good writing style in Tomato. I can't understand why the platform doesn't promote such high-quality articles with novel themes on the platform. Wow! Wow!!! ✊✊✊[Loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving]

I like subjects like this very much. The writing style is also good. It feels very similar to Dan Qing Shou's style.

It's very interesting to read, and the writing is very good, especially after the first volume and the second volume. When I first started reading it, the heroine kept talking about the children, which actually made me a little nervous, but I persisted and found that the writing was really good. Now that I've read the ending, I'm still unsatisfied, but it's okay to leave such a blank space. I can imagine that Rong Yu wants to be tied to Gui Yu every day, and is coldly jealous every day. It's been a long time since I read such a long fantasy with such immersion. I didn't expect to find this great article. I'm looking forward to the author's next article [Blow Kiss] The setting is super awesome and inspiring. I turned to the comments below. It is true that there are too many system articles on Tomato at present. They are all the same and I don't want to read them. This kind of thing is refreshing. I was also attracted by the setting. Unexpectedly, the storyline is also very good 🥰 Highly recommended!!!!

The setting is really good, but there are also problems. The plot is too jumpy. I saw that some readers have raised it before. This problem is really serious. I hope I can change it when I am revising the text after it is finished. Other than that, I think the writing is good. It is very small and fresh. It is much better than the kind of system that goes through the book. Five stars for encouragement. Well, after reading it, the writing at the end is much more coherent than the previous one. Why is our Ah Rong still so pitiful?

It's been a long time since I've seen this kind of novel plot. I read a lot of chapters in the middle and I can't remember the previous plot clearly. But I love it, but the author is too slow to update. I'm really fed up with the pain of following the series. Also, many places written by the author are very metaphorical, and I can't guess whether it's foreshadowing or not. It's a bit hard to understand, so I'm looking forward to the next plot that will reveal the answer. Don't push me to write it quickly [please update]

The full text is tentatively set at 400,000-500,000 words. It won't be a trap. You can clear mines but don't attack. Please~

It looks good but not many people seem to see it...? I'm begging you all to go and see it.

The high quality is rare in tomatoes, but it looks a bit foggy at the front 🤦, but the context is quite clear at the back, and I feel like there needs to be improvement here. The writing is very good and the subject matter is very novel. I look forward to the author's next work.

The writing is good, but the correlation between each chapter is not strong. The plot is novel and interesting, so the author must stick to it. 😁😁😁😁😁😇