Naruto: a Novel Written by Obito Himself

It's great. It's rare to see a fan on Tomato whose characters are so consistent with the original work. Although sometimes the comments section is messed up for no apparent reason (such as Shisui x Anko hahaha), the writing is really good [like] and it's not a fast food article. It really thinks about how to achieve the goal from Obito and Madara's pragmatic perspective. To the end of world peace, but it is not the kind of fanfic where the Holy Mother is about to die. He will kill if he should. The situation of the ninja and the thinking of the ninja. Some debates about justice and stance are difficult to see in other Naruto fanfics. There are really not many authors who are willing to write a novel about Obito's rebirth seriously these days without making bad jokes! Highly recommended reading! !

A very good article about taking Lin [crying]. The plot is not procrastinating and is reasonable. But it would be nice if the progress of taking Lin can be faster. For example, when Yuexia hugs Lin, she can write a kiss or something. Also, I don't like Terumi Mei to have sex with anyone [crying] Even if Terumi Mei is written off to death [crying] [crying] [crying] I have Terumi mysophobia. I hope the author can consider this kind of solo recommendation [almost crying]

It looks good, but the sensational part is a bit awkward. Although it is indeed a childish language that can be spoken in a relationship between a man and a woman, but...[Face covering]

It's very good-looking, and Obito's character is well-characterized.

The perspective is novel, the writing is fluent, and there are no unacceptable points... These are not reasons for praise! The most important thing is to update your teeth five times a day!

It looks good, exactly how I understand Obito to be.

It's interesting and can be watched, but there are still some shortcomings. For example, the fighting scenes are mediocre, but the characters are well described and the characters' personalities are not ruined. Come on, I'll probably get a rating of about 8.5 If I stick to it and finish it.

Apart from anything else, the author who can update five chapters a day is really awesome, even though the writing style is a bit concise. [Shy][Blowing a kiss][Flowing a kiss][Flowing a kiss] Although I have not watched Naruto, this article builds the world of Naruto from Obito's perspective. It feels very restored, including the characters, events, environment, and some core ideas in Naruto, which are all very accurate. After all, Naruto is a classic work of Japanese comics, so it embodies the unique depressive and dark style of Japanese comics in many aspects of the world view. This article did a good job in dealing with the protagonist Obito and the world view in the early stage, but in the later stage, there was a change in the handling of the relationship between good and evil. I want to cheer for the author here. It can be seen that he has been working hard to maintain his strong imagination and enthusiasm for a long time. I believe the author must love Naruto very much, right? But I hope the author can regain the enthusiasm he had in the early days. In any case, to be able to create such exquisite works under such a grand worldview is already a rare good book for Tomato [Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

You are so diligent, author. I haven't seen an author who updates five times a day for a long time! [Blow a kiss] And the quality is very good, very beautiful, highly recommended! [Congratulations] As long as the author keeps writing seriously, he will continue to follow up until the end! [Top post][Please update]

Very, very good Dailin Rice 😋 It's delicious. However, I feel that the quality is a bit ups and downs. In some places, it is written about fairy grass and most of the grains. There are some places that are more poisonous and need to be pampered. I doted on Xiaodu and skipped it without affecting the whole book at all. The thing about Xiaodu is that some local characters are OOC, such as Kushina/Provocative Lin/xxy Sasuke, and then Lalang balanced a lot of emotional scenes😇xyy Sasuke was really scared to tears But the author's writing style is very good and the emotional drama is very delicate. I like Obito the most. Dai Lin 99

The one with the best performance of Obito I have ever seen, I really like it.

First of all, the reviews are great, and it's not unreasonable for the ratings to be so high. The portrayal of the third generation and Danzo is relatively three-dimensional, and there is no political game as heavy as other Naruto stories. The method of saving the world is also relatively novel, using chakra as energy to develop productivity. I hope the author can make the article longer. I really want to see the plot of the Naruto era and the Boruto era [crying]

I really like this book, especially every time I describe Obito and the people around him, my eye circles are really red. As a fan of Naruto, I really love the author [Blowing kiss] [Flowing kiss] [Flowing kiss] [Flowing kiss] [Flowing kiss] [Flowing kiss] and the various connections to the main plot are very good😭😭 😭How come there is such a good author? I love it so much [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] I like every task so much. I will give you a reward later. I hope the author can feel my emotions. Happy New Year [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love]

I secretly read this book in the dormitory. The relationship between Obito and Lin really made me cry. TT The writing and logic are very good. This is the best Naruto novel I have read so far. I just want the author to stop disappearing. [Sending my heart]

I was very shocked when I watched it. It's not the kind of story that follows a cliche plot. I feel that the author is very creative. This shock is no less than when I watched "Double Divine Power" a few years ago. You must work hard, author, give him a good ending.

The plot is quite good and the characters are created very successfully. It would be better if the writing could be done faster. If you don't code the characters, the author will send you a razor blade. Well, let's change the cover. A good novel must have a good cover.

Some of the author's theories are interesting. It also perfectly makes up for the plot holes in Naruto.

It's very interesting. There aren't many novels about Obito, let alone those about Obito's twin Kamui. It's not enough. Originally, I thought I had a way to obtain Obito's Eternal Eye, but as the author, you have your own ideas, so I won't go into details. Some of the settings in the book are quite reasonable. And another point is that the real Susanoo is not called the complete body, but the perfect body.

"Obito" Uchiha Obito: an unforgettable character In the work "Obito", Uchiha Obito is an unforgettable character. He is not only a fighting machine, but also a person with a deep inner world. First of all, Obito's fighting skills and strategic thinking are amazing. He is able to quickly analyze the situation during the battle and formulate the best tactics. His ninjutsu and taijutsu are also very good, allowing him to repeatedly perform extraordinary feats in battle. However, Obito is more than just a fighting machine. His inner world is equally rich. He has deep feelings for his friends, loyalty to his family, and a desire for peace. These emotions make his characters more three-dimensional and allow readers to understand him more deeply. In addition, Obito's growth process is also very touching. He grew from a little ninja to a great ninja. In this process, he experienced countless hardships and setbacks, but he never gave up his beliefs and pursuits. Overall, Obito Uchiha is an unforgettable character. His fighting skills, inner world and growth process are all deeply moving. I believe that everyone who reads this work will be moved by his characters.

At first, I was attracted by different ideas, but the more I read later, the more I felt that it seemed reasonable to analyze it from another angle. When I watched the anime, I only knew about passionate justice. It seemed that I really didn't think about the root cause of this series in detail. It was like the pride of the five major countries. I didn't think about the foundation of the entire anime from the most fundamental level. It feels very good

Yes, the content is good. I prefer to read it.

The overall idea is good. It's not about the old time traveler destroying the ninja world. It's also a good idea to use Obito as the protagonist to go back to the past with memories and make amends for his mistakes. However, the overall guilt chapter is a bit too much and drags out, and there are too many chapters that Lin has to take home to sleep. Although the ninja world is precocious, this is not how it is written [awkward laugh] It feels like your character Obito just keeps telling people around him that he is a beast and then doesn't take any actual actions. To sum up, the topic is novel and attractive, but the writing is a bit unsatisfactory. Please keep improving [Like]

It's really beautiful, and each character's image is delicately portrayed. Different from other Obito fan novels, this one shows Obito's courage to admit the mistakes he made and to protect the promises he made. Overall, it is the best one among the various Obito novels I have read.

Personally, I feel that this book, apart from being shorter in length, has the potential to be as good as a masterpiece. It is more daily life, the content of the battle is just right and not too much, and the description of the mouth escape is particularly powerful. Boruto does not write it directly, and it beats all Otsutsuki in seconds. The linkage of dragon veins and time and space is also written in the hearts of the readers. It perfectly predicts what the readers want to see, and there are no conspiracy theories. Except for the death of Danzo, everything is basically clean. Obito has never seen any novel written better than this one, and the ideas are very novel. It's just because the previous name was really not very good, it was called "Obito, this time I really give Naruto a warm baby". There are no flaws in the whole process, and you can eat it with confidence. This article is still a sweet article. The rebirth of Ten-Tails Obito has the feeling of being in control of the overall situation, but not from a God's perspective. It is very good. I directly read the entire book in 5 days, 7 hours a day, and also included various things without CP.

Yes, it is one of the few novels that I have read up to the latest chapter. It has very few poisonous points and is worth reading. Chapter 280 and the previous chapters collapsed, it made me furious [laughing awkwardly] At this time, Lin had already slapped little Obito on the face. After beating Little Obito, she threw herself into Little Obito's arms with tears in her eyes and said, "I'm sorry, I hit you. It's obviously not your fault. Obito, please hit me." [Love] It's so good, so good🐢My favorite episode

A very good novel, much better than most rebirth novels that only know what they are doing because of what they are holding back.

This is the best article I have ever read so far. The first few chapters are not good, but the later chapters are particularly good. Although the writing about Konoha and the Five Great Nations is a bit dark, it gives people a very real feeling, and the originality and restoration are also very good. Even though the ending is a bit too hasty, I have written everything I can, but I still want to see Obito elbow Ōtsutsuki [laughing]

The opening double Kamui + Flying Thunder God, to be honest, Hollow ✓ + Flying Thunder God ✓, this is so bad, but I really feel the author's intention in it, and Naruto is also happy. The protagonist is Obito, which has no influence at all, and Itachi and Shisui. To be honest, all my regrets have been rounded up for me. It's very cool. I strongly support the author's books! ! ! Later there is the collision between the original world and the current world. Obito's affectionate and single-mindedness is something that many people cannot possess. I really like the character of Obito. This is the first fanfic I have read that I think is good, because I have not read Tatsumaki Dai's novel. I will read it when I have time. I hope the author will get better and better [Adore][Adore][Adore]

It's quite good. I cried when I saw the part where Obito talks about the future. [Crying] If the original work is like this, it seems to be quite good. Anyway, it's very good-looking.

Compared with other novels, this film is filled with a lot of dialogue content. This form is rarely seen in online articles, but more often seen in anime or wit-fighting anime. However, there is nothing wrong with this. It is just a different form. Once you get used to it, it is quite comfortable to watch.