Homes in the Alley: Holding the Hands of Pin Xixi's Unrestrained Life

I haven't watched the TV series, but this is the second fanfic, and overall it's good. Pig's feet, don't always think about doing business, that is, you will be doing business in 10, 85, 86 years. There is no need to be afraid. Don't always think about lagging behind others. If you can catch up, you will catch up in 10 years. If you can't catch up, you will still not be able to catch up in 20 years. If you do this business secretly, you will not make as much as you can go to the south in a month. Why bother?

It's quite interesting, although I haven't watched the TV series. I didn't watch much until the end, I just skipped and watched. Feel unattractive

This book is very good. Compared to Tomato's other alley fan fiction, it is less violent and bland. The life setting is also more realistic, and the writing is good.

Age is a drawback, and I am quite big. Later I saw that the author tried his best to revise the article; When I looked at the articles in the past, the proportion of entertainment was too high, either writing songs and comics, or on the way to participate in activities; In addition to the slower pace, the writing is still good and refreshing. The author is playing and developing, and he is very good to the two girls Song and Wu. I suggest that they be included later; Li Jia's design at the back is pretty good, but the protagonist still encounters too few women. Even if there is no harem, it is still possible to write more content in the back; It is recommended that the author write more content, not limited to people in alleys. The map in the whole book has basically not changed, and it is all maintained by techniques. I don't know if it will be good to continue writing in the future; Finally, I wish the author good fortune in all seasons [Like]

It is a very good book, but the initial age of the protagonist is really flawed. I will subconsciously ignore the age of the protagonist after reading it and read it as an adult. I suggest the author really change the age and update it quickly.

I feel that this alleyway fanfic is quite well written, and the period stories are milder. Now I can no longer stand those extremely violent period stories. The greatest advantage of the author is that he releases updates from time to time, and publishes more than ten chapters a day from time to time. He is definitely the most diligent author among them.

Let me test, is this author so awesome? Update 20 pictures directly

The previous ones were all good, but after arriving in Hong Kong, I don't recommend them very much.

It's quite good among alley fanfics, except that the protagonist is too young, maybe the author did it for comic effect!

I read the first few chapters and they looked pretty good. It's about who the protagonist is. Who should the author choose? (The following is the reader's own opinion. In fact, using Li Jia and Xiao Ting is more cliche. It would be good to choose another character from other film and television dramas. I think Lina in Elite Lawyers is good [laughs evilly] This is my selfish intention)

The description is very warm, the story is very clearly advanced, and the emotions are well told. I recommend reading it. It basically completes the regrets in the original work, but I think the height setting of the protagonist is a bit strange, and the protagonist's emotional line is a bit lacking.

Although they are the same people as Alley People, they later changed to Urban Shang Haiwen. Although the writing is good, it is not very friendly to readers who want to read it as a fan of the Little Elephant family. This thing has to be different from person to person. However, leaving aside the urban content in the later period, the fanfic content in the early period is actually quite good, and it can be regarded as a good book.

8 Years old is a poisonous point. But the writing is interesting

Can you strengthen Wu Shanshan's plot? It's a bit lacking.

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Good guys, 22 chapters updated at a time! I thought it was a dream in the middle of the night, but I didn't expect it to be true [Like]

Finally the score is up [you taste it carefully] I'm here to join in the fun. I originally wanted to give it an 8.5, But the author updates more than 20 chapters for bonuses from time to time. Forget it, I'll give it to him [laughing]

It's not that aggressive, and it doesn't open too much. It can be used, and it's more than just food and grass.

I have read 140 chapters so far. This five-star review is for the author to write the real place names. Appeared in Suzhou, Shanghai and Nanjing. Unlike some places like Suzhou, Jinling and Magic City, or simply Jin City, Su City, H City There are too many misunderstandings about the height setting above and it takes up a lot of space. The following is my favorite article on urban entrepreneurship. The author has a wide range of knowledge. It is recommended to just start a book about rebirth of the 1980s and 1990s and the creation of great entertainment, Internet technology and entrepreneurship.

Needless to say, the value of twenty-one chapters a day at this time, and twenty chapters a day at a time Finished spreading flowers [grass has been planted]

Good book. There are very few fan fictions written by people in the alleys. There are only a few excellent ones. If you don't agree, come and argue! 😕

Beautiful! Really, read it all in one go

At first I read it out of boredom because the rating was so low. I didn't expect that the writing was very good and it took me two days to finish reading it. It was not enough to keep me entertained. The content is interesting, not like other farming methods, and not like those crazy cheaters and not very violent.

At present, the biggest disadvantage is age.

I wanted to give it five stars, but I was afraid that the author would be too proud to work on the new work! Work hard, boy

After arriving in Japan, I felt like I was in a tape period.

Did you fail to plan for today? Just like last time, I accidentally posted it. You are dishonest. You have so many stocks.

If you are loved, your flesh and blood will grow like crazy!

I originally wanted to give you four stars, but I still gave it five stars hoping for more.

It's not bad. It can be opened. It's not as scolding as other Tomato books.