Don't Soar, Don't Soar

Although it's a bit bloody and the plot is a bit old-fashioned, the plot of Shenhao System pretending to be a pig, eating a tiger and raising a baby is still very retro! ! However, I have to say that the author's writing style is awesome, the writing is very refreshing, and the humor is very good-looking. There are too few more! ! ! ! It's disgusting to renew for another 30 days after the 30-day cooling-off period for divorce [vomit] [vomit] [vomit] [vomit] [vomit]

Brother, I asked if I could change the title of the book. I thought it was about cultivating immortals in this city. The storyline is good, and the protagonist and supporting characters are also well portrayed. It is obviously a daily novel but not boring. Although there are bloody plots, it is not offensive! I must finish it before cultivating immortality. Come on, author, try to update five times a day What's going on? The mountain god's painting style changed suddenly from the beginning, and he became a city god and a dragon. I can understand cultivating immortality and so on, but you haven't even finished writing yet and you started cultivating immortality? You haven't even divorced yet, you've agreed to be a baby daddy, and you haven't even started writing about your children yet. You've bulldozed the city before you even understood it, and you started pushing for cultivation?

To be honest, I like this style very much. It can be relaxed and relaxed. Although the male protagonist has a system, he does not want to be a slave to the system. Although he is divorced at the beginning, he is not as blaming as others and wants to kill everyone in the world. This article uses child custody rights as a guide. During the divorce cooling-off period, the hidden charm of the male protagonist is slowly released, and it is interspersed with small ambiguities with several women, so that it will naturally make the ex-wife regret it. The writing is humorous and interesting, and the character of the male protagonist is also very successful. I hope the author will update it soon. After reading Chapter 225, I can no longer pursue him, and I still can't figure out how to separate from my wife. It's a big deal, so keep it up and watch it again. There are fewer and fewer people following up on updates. It can be seen from the data that the procrastination of the plot depends entirely on the female supporting role's own PUA. The cultivating immortality is in a mess, the feeling is smooth and there is no fluctuation, and the ex-wife is half dead. Just two words left, okay

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First of all, this book is well worth watching. I also had a tortuous journey reading this book. When I clicked on it for the first time, I saw that there were children, so I immediately stopped reading (I don't really like films with children, this is just my personal opinion). Then I really couldn't find any other books to read, so I read them as a last resort. The result was beyond my expectation. This book is really well written and the writing style is quite fluent. I also enjoyed reading it and fulfilled my wish. Once you see it, you can't stop. The pace is not very draggy either, just take what you have to take. It's not like some articles, which are about a hundred chapters long, but are still eunuch articles. However, there are still things I don't like about it. The male protagonist hasn't divorced yet and keeps dragging her away. I think this is the biggest poisonous point of this book. It makes me very uncomfortable. I don't like the character created by Miss Ruan (I forgot her name). As far as the latest chapter I have read now, she really has no independent opinion and does whatever others say. This character is really unlikable. I don't believe that others will believe in her husband. Anyway, I don't remember any of them directed towards the male protagonist. If the male protagonist had accepted it, the rating of this book would definitely be lowered in my mind. As far as I'm concerned, if you accept it, I won't be too keen on reading it. Therefore, as far as I am concerned, Miss Ruan should stop accepting her, and it is best to cut off this relationship with me as soon as possible. It is really too poisonous. Finally, if you can tolerate children and the poisonous points I mentioned above, this book is worth a try. It is a very good novel [Like] I was quite optimistic about it at first, but after reading Chapter 126, I felt like it was no longer good. The issue of breaking off the engagement has not been resolved yet. The addition of the system of cultivating immortals made my interest in pursuing books disappear. It was originally a good and refreshing article, but suddenly a system of cultivating immortals was introduced, and it ended up being suppressed. At first I thought I was a bit estranged from the beginning, but Xiu Xian directly persuaded me to quit, so I could only say goodbye to this book.

To be honest, this is not like the writing style of a newcomer. I just read Chapter 8. If it is really written by a newcomer, this book deserves full marks. Come on, I hope it will not collapse later [Like] Very disappointed in the follow-up

It's okay, but the details are too poor. No matter what the occasion, men and women use wry smiles and laughs, which is really off-putting. I have never seen so many different modal words to distinguish men and women and emotional details: sneer, laugh wildly, laugh evilly, sneer, chuckle, chuckle, chuckle, laugh, laugh, clap and laugh, laugh dryly, barely Smile, say with a forced smile, say with a shy smile, say with a smile, say with a sweet smile, say with a toothy smile, say with a grin, say with a loud laugh, say with a smile, say with a faint smile, say with a giggle Tao, said with a gloomy smile, said with a cold smile, said with a skin-smiling smile, said with a smile, said with a full smile, said with a smile, said with a smooth smile, said with a smile on his face, said with an apologetic smile, said with a flattering smile, said with a charming smile

It's very good, very novel, it's a harem story, but it's not offensive, it's nice to read.

Sixty chapters, this is a very good book I have seen on Tomato so far. The writing is smooth and the characters are plump. Although the plot is a bit old, the author has a good grasp of it. There is no brainless slap in the face or hysteria. It is very comfortable to read. Good luck, author!

This is a novel that will make you laugh and stay up late reading every word. To be honest, the rating is low. I personally think it can be given a ten points. Of course, some people may not like this type of novel. The author writes so well. Can anyone tell me if the author has any other works? Thanks. Today is the first day of the Lunar New Year. I watched it and finished it at 05.16. Still unfinished...

This book was so exciting that I didn't sleep until three o'clock. The male protagonist is humorous and has a high emotional intelligence. The writing is so smooth that I can't stop reading. The female protagonist eats more and faster. The four stars are mainly due to two small shortcomings. First, the female characters are a bit homogeneous, and their personalities are relatively strong and proactive, which is a bit overlapping; second, it is too fast, there is not enough ambiguity, and the emotional scenes are not deep, but it is very good to watch as a piece of music.

Okay okay. Recommended, there are too many female protagonists, but their backgrounds are perfectly depicted. If I were to mention all the female protagonists at once, I can't describe them all, but if you only name one female protagonist, I can tell you the background of this heroine right away.

It's quite bland, with a little extravagance in the daily routine. It doesn't make people feel overly exaggerated or boring. It really makes people interested in watching it. The reason why it is four stars instead of five stars is because there are two problems. The first one is that I have never understood why the ex-wife line is still hanging on. The cooling-off period is over. Get the divorce certificate quickly. It doesn't matter if you regret it after it's over, but it's disgusting if you regret it and don't get the divorce certificate. The second thing is that I don't quite understand that the male protagonist doesn't seem to have any anger at all. It seems that except for the ex-wife, anyone who has some connections can beat and scold the male protagonist, and there is no need to be reasonable. Even if it is a harem story, it won't be like this.

My sister-in-law is very easy to use, does not cover my feet, washes very clean, the foam is very dense, I bought three packs, the quality is very good, consistent with the seller's description, the children especially like to eat, the pattern is very good, the fabric is comfortable, the size is standard, I bought it, the quality is very good, consistent with the seller's description, the children especially like it Happy to eat, the fit is very good, the fabric is comfortable, the size is standard, the cup does not stick and lasts long, the orange color is more white, the hair is smooth and not oily after washing, the screen is clear and runs smoothly, sensitive skin can use it without any pressure, the grip is comfortable and does not hurt the gums, I will put a few copies every time I cook, I am very satisfied with this purchase. Exactly consistent with what the seller described, very satisfied, completely exceeded expectations, the delivery speed is very fast, the packaging is very careful and tight, the logistics company's service attitude is very good, the delivery speed is very fast, it is a very satisfying purchase. As soon as I opened it and saw the packaging, it was so cute and I loved it! The price is good and the quality is good. I am not trusting it. I have bought it three times. The quality is very good. It is consistent with the seller's description. The children like to eat it. The fit is very good. The fabric is comfortable. The size is standard. The toothbrush does not hurt the gums, it is very clean, and it rebounds quickly. The quality is very good, it is very comfortable to wear, and the toothbrush rate is 100%. I add a few drops to every stir-fry and wash it very clean. Moreover, this phone case is cheap and good-looking, so I take two pieces every night. Within a week, my son said that I had become much prettier and that he would buy dog ​​food from this store in the future.

It was really fun in the early stages, but it got a bit slow later on. It's difficult to write an article about urban immortality, so it's difficult to write it here. But it's really gratifying that I was able to read it all. In my opinion, it is already a masterpiece. The author has no bad endings, which is more than 90% of Tomato books, and the story is very complete. Let's not talk about the advantages, but let's talk about the disadvantages. The funny points are repeated too much later, the heroine is more homogeneous, and the author's writing skills and ideas are not amazing enough, so I'll lose one point. I hope to see the author continue to improve in the future, thank you. All in all, it's a good story, and as the score says, it's not bad.

It looks good. Also, when will the two sisters meet? [Shy] It's all the same, so many women are almost repeating the same storyline [awkward laugh] It's okay at first, but almost the same formula is repeated in the back, which makes my head hurt.

The plot is relatively daily and the atmosphere is relaxed. It is one of the few genres that I like more. Tomato rarely has this kind of writing. I rarely give five stars, but this time I really want to give it, and I hope the author can maintain his level and continue to write more.

I haven't seen a book in many years that can write urban harem stories in such a fresh and refined way that people don't feel bored. The story has constant ups and downs, and the descriptions of various storylines with different outstanding girls happen naturally, smoothly and tastefully. The common sense of life is also reasonable. The author either has rich life experience or has spent a lot of time searching for information online. Anyway, good luck to the author! Don't let it end. This book will definitely be a masterpiece as long as it maintains its current level.

Articles written before the plot of Five Stars for Cultivation is released Erxing made the following plot of cultivating immortals nondescript. At first, I thought it was just some inconspicuous little magic embellishments, but it suddenly changed halfway, and daily life in the city turned into a fantasy cultivating immortals. This doesn't match up at all.

The previous writing is very good. Although the plot is very old, it is also very interesting in the author's writing. It is quite refreshing not to watch these old things for a long time. But in the end, the more characters were written, the more they were written, and they all had the same characteristics, which was too flat. The latest element of cultivating immortals has been added. Although being ranked in the immortal class has been foreshadowed for a long time, it is still a bit unexpected. Of course, it may be necessary for the plot. Without the addition of immortality, the plot would really be difficult to follow. All in all, it was a very enjoyable reading experience for a few hours, thank you to the author.

If you want me to say that the progress of divorce can be speeded up, and you can also be included in the harem after divorce, don't you say one sentence? Don't miss the good girls, don't let the bad girls go. Besides, this is a cool article, so don't ask for too much, just one word of cool and it's over.

Although the plot is quite cliche and bloody, but then again, the author's writing style does not feel stiff at all, but has an extremely smooth and comfortable feeling. It makes me giggle while holding my mobile phone. In short, it is a good material for dreams! Love to see more! ! !

Don't be misled by the title of this book. You must read it clearly before you come in. Let me tell you my opinion. This book is generally pretty good. As for the systems and tasks that appear in it, everyone just treats it as something with a low sense of existence. The first point is you. This is the most important point. This book is just selling people on top of each other. It writes about urban imagination and is actually here to collect harems. I have read Chapter 90 now. So far, there are about four, five, five or six women in the book. Then I jumped to read it again, and there were one or two more women in the back. So if you like harem novels, this is an okay novel. If you don't like it, you can leave it out.

I gave it five stars because it's funny. The same writing style (same author) as those two books by Lin Shaowen and Zhao Xiyan is another reason It's more about supporting the same author! But urban novels, especially those involving cultivating immortals, I don't like this type of pretending to be pigs and eating tigers. Urban harem flow is so normal, you have money and looks, it doesn't matter how many women you hook up with, but every woman can't have some provocative protagonist with cats and dogs, right? If you have the strength, you have to pretend to be low-key, but the things you do are not low-key.

I am a bookworm, and there are not many books that I can read without abandoning. This book is just what I want. The review is hasty. It started out okay, but later on I felt that the character setting was quite awkward.

Overall, it's good, and it suits my taste. The protagonist is quite humorous, but he has a bad habit. He smokes everywhere, in front of his daughter, while eating, and even when eating out at buffets. He is a heavy smoker.

The main character is simply Joey Boy, filling every passerby with joy wherever he appears.

If it's not too short, I'll make a wish for you with seven stars. I apologize for my previous rating. I gave too much and I couldn't hold back anymore. Starting from Chapter 175, you can change the book, because the rest of it is about cultivating immortals. I really can't hold back [face covering]

After watching part of it, (perhaps the subsequent plot will affect my judgment) at present, I personally don't think there is any big problem with Ruan. She may not want to live a rich life (I read various comments about her problems, but I don't quite understand them. They say that I see the shadow of my ex-wife in her, etc., Which is quite speechless). It mentioned that the original owner played games after get off work. The book said that he had no ambition, but in fact, I feel that Ruan wanted his family's life to be more energetic, instead of boring and numb at that time (this feeling is very uncomfortable, and he is becoming more and more confused about the future, just like Groundhog Day, people's cognitive functions will be damaged) In the previous comments, you can always see netizens scolding Ruan. Many of her behaviors have been given negative things. It cannot be denied that she has bad things. But from a normal perspective (if you're thinking about reading Shuangwennan's novel, don't worry), the protagonist actually has more problems (of course, it may be because he is not the original owner) Why doesn't the protagonist communicate? Maybe it's just for the sake of the plot, otherwise such a powerful person (in his previous life) would really not be able to handle this kind of thing? I don't mean to criticize the novel, after all, I also like to read refreshing novels. I just feel a little bit after seeing all kinds of negative comments. I hope everyone can add some thoughts in their lives to make family relationships better and better. Occasionally bring small gifts to children or family members, which can be small toys, roadside snacks, or a bouquet of flowers [Cool] Also, communication is really important! Whether it's fiction or reality! Say it! Tell me! ! Oh, the biggest problem is that she was described so badly at the beginning, that she brought other men with her (this is indeed quite poisonous). But it seems that the author may have wanted to write her away directly at the beginning or to have the feeling of chasing her husband to the crematorium, but then the writing seemed to go astray [awkward laugh], resulting in a contradictory situation for this character.

This book is not that kind of harem novel. The writing feels quite reasonable. And as for the bad points, well, 69 pictures is considered a watershed. Overall, I like all the 69 pictures before and give it five stars.