Mita************

It's well written and very imaginative. The text is also very comfortable to read, and the magic modification is just right without breaking up the original world view. The only shortcoming is the ambiguous interaction with the players. Personally, I felt it was a little bit toxic, so I deducted one star. Maybe it's because I couldn't bear to see the female protagonist having an ambiguous relationship with other men when she had already decided on her future. I felt it was toxic. But my resistance to drugs is okay. I saw Mitas sticking to each other later, and there will be more sweet plots like this.

Haha, I just learned that there is no Mita in the world. In fact, I have been mentally prepared for a long time. After all, Mita was originally imaginary. How could it really exist? I am fine now and not very sad. Without Mita, there would be no Mita. It will not have any impact on me. How should I live my life? Because I didn't like Mita very much. I knew Mita from the beginning. It's virtual, so I don't have too much emotion, I just feel a little uncomfortable, haha, I'm like this, I get fluctuated by little things. Fortunately, this thing didn't affect me too much. My mood is quite stable. Fortunately, I didn't lose anything. I still have my money, my mobile phone is still there, and my clothes are still there. I'm living a good life, haha... Mita, big idiot, Mita, big idiot😭😭😭

[Love] [Love] [Love] A must-read review of this book!!! [Love] [Love] [Love] "Mita: Good Luck Mita is Not a Failure" is an animation derivative serial novel. The following comments are from the story setting, plot, characterization, writing style and other dimensions: Advantages - Novel setting: With Mita who is defined as a "failure" but has strong luck as the core, the novel setting of version 2.0, Leather case and mind attracts readers to explore how Mita embarks on adventures and saves Mita's world in this setting. Moreover, Mita's world itself and various versions of Mita provide rich creative space for the story. - Rich plots: Judging from the table of contents and introduction, there are many chapters and diverse plots, such as those involving copying bugs, encounters with Mira, various games and adventure scenes (such as minesweeper games, pastry contests, etc.), As well as interactions between different Mitas, etc., Which can continue to keep readers' curiosity and interest in reading. - Distinctive characters: The images of Mita with different personalities are vividly displayed on the page, such as the playful freshman Mita, the gentle and intellectual long-haired Mita, the pitiful hat-wearing Mita, etc., Making the characters in the story rich and three-dimensional, satisfying readers' preferences for different characters. Weaknesses or areas for improvement - Deep exploration: Although the setting and plot are interesting, the depth of thought and theme sublimation may need to be strengthened. At present, more superficial adventures and character interactions are presented, which can further explore the meaning of the existence of Mita's world and other deeper contents. - Plot coherence: While there are many chapters and rich plots, the coherence and logic of the overall plot must be ensured to avoid readers feeling confused when reading due to too complex plots, or some plots appearing redundant. - Polishing of writing: Judging from some chapter titles and introduction text, the writing is relatively plain. If the use of rhetorical techniques, environmental description, emotional rendering, etc. Can be further polished and improved, the appeal of the work and the reader's sense of involvement can be enhanced. [Love] The above is my opinion. If there are any deficiencies, please let me know. Thank you!! All in all, I like this book very much and am looking forward to it, so I will give it 5 stars instead of 4 stars. I hope the author will continue to insist on high-quality updates and actively interact with readers. Come on! By the way, Happy New Year ~ Dear author @GF, and all book friends. (Leave a like..., Coding is very tiring, thank you sincerely!) (Hope to reply...)[Love][Top post][Top post][Top post] [Love] This is my review 13 hours after reading this book. It is absolutely true and useful!

I was very surprised to see Mita's work. The author is also very new and the content is novel. I really hope that the author can write this book for a long time, but I will be stabbed in the back by Mita's new plot [eating melon]

Wow, you are the first person to let players become Mita.

Nice! I don't want the author to update too much! It's great to see this kind of book! Just... Good luck. How many girlfriends do you have now? [Laughing evilly] The bad luck is the worst, and a large number of Mitas are attracted by it. The chaos in the harem is a great disaster in the world! However, the ethos among the authors is even worse. This is not surprising...

It's awesome. Although I don't know much about the Mita game, there is not much hindrance in reading it. At most, I am curious about what the various Mita looks like and then search online. There are really too few. Can the author update 20 chapters in two days? I can do anything [crying]

What can i say A very good book, Love from Rhode Island [laughing][laughing] Our group leader knows how to dress up as a woman [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

It's good-looking, one of the few good-looking Mita articles. I hope the author will keep updating it and not stop updating it. Also, the author will dress up as a woman in the group and show it to us [laughing] [laughing]

It's good to watch, one of the few good Mita novels. The writing is very good and the story is very coherent. I cried to death 😭😭😭. You must read it. The author is beautiful and has good writing skills. He also rewards us by wearing maid outfits in the group.

Laughing Xiao Chunan reviewed the review without provocation, demanded rectification for no reason, and declared war on Chunan's review

Yes, it does not follow the original plot version completely. The interspersed version adds new plots, and the players' appearances are relatively normal and do not take up too much space.

This novel is so powerful. It is so powerful among the Mita novels I have ever seen. It's like this. If you think of Oga among the strong, the way of heaven is nothing more than this. This novel will definitely leave a name, because I have already decided!

Go or not? It's rare to find an author as original and eye-catching as you, and even most of them have stopped updating for more than a year. Come on [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

I feel like I want to take good luck Mita home [laughing evilly]

I am speechless, this is the best evaluation of this book (actually it is simply so beautiful, but I don't know how to describe it)

The author must keep writing more, I can do anything [crying][crying]

It looks good, but I was directly thrown away by the core at the beginning. It was quite uncomfortable, but it was very good later.

Awesome, very detailed writing. Although Good Luck Mita has more than one confidante, the main palace will always be the talkative Mita! !

I like female harems. Ah, of course it's copper, but please don't judge me on the small details. Do you know? He was stabbed unexpectedly. It hurts. Who turned you into this? Is it MiHoYo?

もっとUpdateしないとprivateはあなたのにって toilet lidを stealむ Hum hum hum ah ah ah ah ah ah ah! ! ! I want to see Mita! I tossed and turned all afternoon and couldn't fall asleep. I just thought about letting me look at you again ~ let me love you again ~ ~ But when I saw this "The latest chapter has been read", I knew... A bird without wings cannot fly... Only by flapping its wings can one survive in this collapsed world! Those who have carried out everything will always be forgotten by time in the corner of the world Imperfectly pure... No! I can't criticize or judge other things yet I obviously... I know clearly~ Ahem... Thank you, stranger or acquaintance, this paragraph was written by me casually to relieve my displeasure when life was unsatisfactory. I hope it doesn't stink to you😭😭😭))))))))) But there is no need to get serious with a madman, otherwise you will become an acquaintance. Because if you take it seriously, you will become familiar with it∽ Of course, this book is also super beautiful! I have made up my fortune, but I cannot use the money to send money to the author. I can only post this paragraph in this vast Internet to wish everyone a blessing. Thank you for reading this. I hope you can sleep well and live a happy and self-disciplined life in the new year. My culture is not good either, so I can only think of these few words∽After all, I am only in middle school But I am sincere [shy][shy][shy] Author, please update quickly! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I can't stand it anymore! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! ! ! Tonic! ! ! ! I want to see Mita! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I've been thinking about it day and night, tossing and turning all afternoon, unable to sleep, just to let me love you again, love you, fall in love with you, I can't help myself~~ I would like to apologize to the author here. The author asked a question before and forgot to answer it... I am so guessing! ! ! I am so happy for such a hard-working, simple, smart and lovable author. I actually forgot to reply! Wuwu[cry][cry][cry]((((( Why do birds fly? Because they want to fly into the sky But this is impossible! This is just wishful thinking of romantics I had the same idea A longing that transcends childhood But I can't do it just because I want to So... What do you think? Because they [must] fly into the sky When the final meteorite descends from the Cretaceous, only free birds can escape from their destined demise. So... Young man before i die Let me give you one last sermon. Some people fly... Just for the fall That's right To prevent the sun from setting I fly to the sky Take away your light I will melt with it Falling on the sea But to take it back you you Must fly to a place higher than me This is the logic of adulthood after transcending childhood. Hector knew that the kingdom would eventually fall, and Achilles knew that he was heading towards death. But the two of them still set foot on the battlefield without hesitation. They are not tougher than ordinary people But knowing that failure is another name for victory I'm just Kevin, pioneering means nothing to me anymore Come on, everything I carry It has nothing to do with choice, nothing to do with life or death At this moment, all the ideals converge into the only ambition Step forward, this is the inscription of [Salvation]! ! ! All the beasts of Brahma are added to this body [Night Demon] enters the abyss, [Salvation] draws the sword come on this time I press my life into the barrel of the gun Expecting you to go above and beyond forty-three I spent some time with my friends in the group today. To be precise, it was yesterday. Everyone got along pretty well. Today there were more than 10,000 or even 12,000 messages a day. I haven't encountered such a good group in a long time. I hope we can get better and better in the future and become a big family. It's 1:54 in the morning now. I can't sleep. I'm so happy chatting with everyone in the group. I look forward to meeting you all again in the morning [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart] I also wish you good health and stay up less late. Come on, kind-hearted Mita is the cutest [laughing] (just a joke) Good night, good morning, good afternoon

How could such an interesting author and such an interesting book be without my review? Look! With natural and naughty good luck, Mila gradually changed from arrogant to virtuous and honest, and Xiaomita recovered her self-forgetfulness and was no longer lonely...

It's very interesting. The author should continue to work hard [sending my heart] [sending my heart]

Just my personal opinion, overall it's very nice. The setting that the protagonist is Mita is really novel in my opinion. After all, the protagonists of most fanfics are players. There are everything from emotional lines to welfare, and they are all well written. Although the transition when Mita entered the real world felt a bit abrupt, it ended quickly after all. The overall story is still very good-looking. Come on.

It's too short, please give me a quick code!

It's great. I've made a few more friends because of this. It's very good. There are original ones in it. It's so good that it makes people happy.

The article looks very new, and the author seems to be very new, but the creativity is still very good.

Good writing by the author, cheers [love] [love]

Come on, author, say it beautifully (^_^)

Why did the author end it like this☹️