Why Are the Scripts of the Real and Fake Young Master Different?

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you make the third update, the weak praise field begins to speak out, and the number of dead harvests begins to decrease. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates. Everyone's quick update

The writing is average to above average, and I can't say that the writing is very strong, but... The author really understands female channel. I have read dozens of female channel novels and hundreds of female channel short dramas in the past year. There is even a membership app on Douyin specifically for watching stomach-churning female pornographic stories... The authors who have dabbled in plots have actually written almost all of them here. The immediate feeling of a male channel breaking into a female channel and overturning the table This author really understands female videos. He must have a toothache and a stomachache that makes him write this novel. [Face covering] I even had the urge to write this kind of article, hahahaha... It's not a top-notch article, but it happens to hit an interesting point. Five stars for encouragement.

It's quite cool, and there are so many female videos that have been integrated. Another book title would be "I, the protagonist of a male pornographic novel, kills indiscriminately in a hodgepodge world of female videos"

The writing is pretty good, and I really enjoyed reading it. Although it contains a harem, I feel it is not suitable for a Y-type person like me. The plot of the main female channel is too outrageous. I am used to watching male channels, but this is indeed a good book. I will give five stars to encourage the author.

The liver is finished in two days, in a word. Who messed with the hero. "My surname is Su, from the Su family." [Note] [Note] Walk-in: "I'm sorry, Mr. Su. I'm one of my own. My wish since I was a child is to become Mr. Su's younger brother."

An excellent urban novel, the highlight is probably that the protagonist is all kinds of awesome ➕The protagonist corrects and defeats the bad people in certain scripts ➕The protagonist casually helps some outstanding people in the protagonist to defeat the bad people in the relevant scripts ➕Crushes or kills Karami who offends the protagonist. The disadvantage is that there are a lot of plots in various scripts in the later period, and the daily life with the protagonist's harem is a bit less. The female character may not necessarily appear in dozens of chapters.

Read 32 books. There are 71 books to be read in the future. 160 Fantasy books. Technology (Fantasy) 38 books. 26 Books of mythology. City (high martial arts/superpowers/immortal cultivation) 158 copies. 66 Books of different worlds. Thriller/Rules 27. 35 Books daily. 55 Books in ancient times/Republic of China/modern times (imaginary). 62 Live broadcasts. 104 Volumes of female deities. Zongwu 20 copies. Villain 97. Weird 48 books. Weird 40 books. 35 Volumes of alien (animal) transformations. Urban 71. 32 Movies/TV series. 45 Comprehensive comics. 72 Volumes of animation (painting). 36 Books in the entertainment industry. 32 Adventure/wilderness/survival books. 32 Copies of Acting/National Destiny. 31 Game fanfics. 18 Games (production/esports/fusion). 45 (Serious) books. 43 Copies have been removed from the shelves. It's a pity (it was discontinued for various reasons and it was a good book that was finished) 72 books. There are 37 female videos. 23 Local Sese texts (I can just bear this kind of thing myself) ૮₍ ¬ ᴗ ¬₎ა

I spent more than an hour typing it word by word on my mobile phone. Please read it carefully, thank you! I give it five stars, because I will give it five stars if I don't really like it. Maybe I can't bear it in my heart. I also know that this kind of behavior will increase the rating, but I feel very uncomfortable if I give a low rating. For this, I want to say sorry and please don't complain. Now let me tell you my review of this novel. It's hard to comment on this novel. Maybe it has something to do with the novel I read before. There are a few things I don't like. 1. Too much emphasis on wealthy and aristocratic people, especially on etiquette, will make people feel hypocritical. In addition, I prefer equality. There can be differences in levels and others can kneel and lick them, but the protagonist cannot despise others and must be equal in personality. 2. There is no need for the protagonist to hate his adopted son so much. The protagonist from the original world has this qualification, but the protagonist from time travel does not. It seems that the protagonist himself is a dove occupying the magpie's nest. The protagonist from the original world has suffered for 17 years, but the protagonist from time travel does not. In addition, the protagonist in the original world is eligible for hatred after the adopted son hurts the protagonist, because the protagonist suffers because of the fault, not because of the adopted son. The blame has its origin, and the debt has its owner. Hatred should be towards the person who deliberately wronged him. 3. The grudge with my adopted son always reminds me of the criminal gene. If you are interested, you can check it out. Can you really look at someone differently just because they will make mistakes in the future? 4 Maybe it's because I read a whitewashing novel before. The protagonist is an adopted son. From both sides, whoever says the right thing is right. On the side of the adopted son, the word "love" is a word. After more than ten years of companionship, even a stone should have feelings, let alone a person? Is bloodline really that important? The companionship for more than ten years has been real, and the parents and children are just new acquaintances, like special strangers. If you talk about money or rewards, it would be too utilitarian, and you would not treat them as one of your own. Just like your parents, they raise you without asking for anything in return. You will just provide for them in the future. The sudden arrival of parents and children is like an intruder who suddenly breaks into your own beautiful life. If it were you, you could not complain. On the parent-child side, there is the word "blood". When you are pregnant in ten months, blood melts into water. You are orthodox, but you are replaced by others. How can you not feel resentful in your heart? Later, it can be said from a utilitarian point of view. If you look at the original text specifically, I won't say much more. 5 It's a bit dark to say that I don't like people eating people, and it just makes me feel uncomfortable inside. May there be less darkness and more light in the world. 6 After my adopted son was driven away, I felt a little unhappy about burning things. This reminded me of the first economic crisis in the United States mentioned in history textbooks. Some people were starved to death, while capitalist businessmen poured milk into the river. Although I know the reason, I still can't bear to see others die. Although interests are important, there are things more important than interests. If you blindly pursue interests, you will become a puppet of money. There are also cases such as "Zhumen smells of wine and meat". I think it would be better to change money into donations to help children like the protagonist before he was found. Since he has been caught in the rain, he can hold an umbrella for others. Ahem, I may have made too many associations, please don't mind. I spent more than an hour typing it word by word on my mobile phone. Please read it carefully, thank you!

It's pretty good. It's refreshing enough. The male channel has destroyed all the female channels. The author should not poison or be a monster in the future. It's still a pretty good and refreshing article.

The book is generally good so far, but the plot in the entertainment industry seems to be purely for shaping the image of the protagonist. The plot and characters have no highlights like Jiang Yuqing, making it unimpressive and even somewhat out of touch with the image of the protagonist. But when it comes to the Kong family, the supporting characters' portrayal of Jiang's father is the finishing touch, which makes people feel as surprised as eating a piece of bread and butter after an ordinary meal. I suggest that the author change the protagonist's image to a gentle one. After all, the previous nonsensical targeting for the sake of pure plot appeal really left people with little impression of the protagonist. If the author carefully portrays the protagonist's image like Jiang's father, or even as close to Song Qianqian after the college entrance examination, I believe this book will get better and better.

Up and down Rating of the novel: ①Shangshang (a good book that suits my taste very well, as expected) Outstanding, five stars/10 points+) ②Superior (recognized as a good book by everyone, the number of updates exceeds 1,000, five stars/ 9~10 minutes) ③Shang Xia (0 good books with rigorous and self-consistent logic, good books that do not meet your taste, five stars/8~9 points) ④Above average (a good book in the conventional sense, no special features, five stars/7~8 points) ⑤Medium (the reading experience is disappointing, far from expected, difficult to objectively evaluate, one point deducted from three stars) ⑥Mid-to-lower (a work with average performance, no outstanding highlights, and no major problems, three stars/5~6 points, four stars/6~7 points) ⑦Xiashang (a novel with major flaws, but there are still some merits, one star/1~2 points, three stars/3~4 points) ⑧Inferior (a novel that is as boring as chicken ribs to read, has no appeal, and cannot bring reading pleasure, two stars/0 points) ⑨Xiaxia (a book with good writing but distorted views, harmful content, seriously affecting the reading experience, two stars/-1~-10)

In my opinion, this novel is relatively excellent and should at least be rated above 9.0, But the rating is not very ideal. I think the emotional development of the protagonist is not in line with most people's values. This passive "scumbag" is very inconsistent. Most (maybe only a small part, this is just my personal opinion) people should think that there is only one female protagonist, and that is Shen Youchu. But now it feels like it's a harem story, and it's not an old-fashioned harem story. It makes people feel very conflicted. If it were a single female protagonist, the score should go up. (The above is just my personal opinion)

It's well written. I'll give it five points first and ask the author if there will be more female protagonists in the follow-up. I feel that the current direction of the plot is that there will be multiple female protagonists. I hope the author will be wiser and stop making mistakes.

I don't know if this book shocked female fans, but it certainly shocked me. This book is worthy of being written about a male channel within a female channel, and then covering it up with a male channel. It is so unique from my perspective as a boy that I couldn't help but combine five one-star reviews into one and post it!

It's so fun to read, the author can always hit the readers' favorite points, but the update is too slow, and the most exciting part of Feudal Dynasty is gone. Hey, if you don't work hard to update, you will get 2 stars, hum.

My current impression of this book is a little shocking to the world of female porn [×]. The wealthy young man from the world's largest wealthy family has a harem in the world of female porn [√] Of course, I can't just read such a "beautiful" book. Please come and review it.

Rich families just know how to play. . . The child was transferred and replaced without mentioning it. . . You also have to find an adopted son to divide the family property with your biological son. . . . If you are ruthless and capable, you can kill your own son directly! ! ! Is this a life-and-death calamity specially reserved for his own son? ? ? ? ? Sure enough, rich people are different. . Our two poor biological parents feel that they will not be able to share the family property in the future, and they have to earn more! ! ! ! Rich people don't care whether they are their biological children or not. Just take care of yourself [cover face][cover face][cover face]

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The writing is very good, the plot is exciting, but I was anxious from the beginning of the third world. I guess it was because I didn't have enough reading or income, and I didn't want to break the chapter, so I ended it hastily, but it was still very good.

Come on, author. This is the first book of this type that I have read. It is very interesting. Come on, as long as there are no poisonous points, I will keep reading. 5 Stars

The writing style of Seven Shades of Gray is smooth and natural, and the descriptions are delicate, vividly showing the characteristics of each world. The rhythm of the plot is also well grasped, and the tense and exciting plot is interspersed with relaxed and humorous moments, making the reader's mood fluctuate along with it. The characterization of this novel is very successful. As the male protagonist of the book, Su Mo comes with three entries from the system: "photographic memory, distinguished background, and striving for excellence." Moreover, he is also very good at learning a new skill a week, and after learning it, he breaks his head with everyone in school without saying a word! Using his own wisdom, he can always find ways to solve various problems, and he has good intentions and sincerely thinks about the heroines. The female protagonists also have their own characteristics. They are no longer the same silly sweet or cold goddesses. They have their own ideas, characters and pursuits. With the help of Su Mo, they gradually grow into independent and confident women. Apart from the fact that the relationship is not specific, it is a pleasant book.

I like the plot of forcing a handsome girl to lower her head [laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying]

I've seen a lot of sex-changing endings in certain music here. Good luck to the conscientious authors!

I'm going to die, I actually saw countless female videos in a cool article about a male protagonist [face covering] The writing style is also very good, and it is all kinds of classics. And the combination is very good, absolutely. I watched it all night and couldn't stop [laughing] This book is very suitable for male readers who like to watch female videos, as well as female readers who are tired of watching female videos' routines. Push one. [Learned]

It's okay. It's much better than that kind of anti-conventional female video that sells dog meat over someone else's head. At least the people around the male protagonist have normal IQs.

After watching it, overall it is quite good to watch. The attacks are crisp and decisive. There is no such thing as consuming your luck first and then taking care of the protagonist. Still very good. I just don't understand the rules of nosy. Sometimes the protagonist will deal with people who seem to be evil. Some people really deserve their punishment, but some people really don't need it. Then the "evil" reason given by the author is also quite far-fetched. The bottom line is somewhat low. Then, the existence of rewards for changing the plot is really low. It is said that changing a plot point is an entry, but the four worlds add up to do so many things, and the reward entries can be counted on 10 fingers (all are clearly useful entries, and useless entries are not mentioned). The presence of the system is also very low. The more the plot is written, the more invincible it becomes. Basically, there is no need to write in detail, but at least the causes and consequences are given. The ending also felt very sloppy to me. I also didn't understand the purpose of the system that gave the protagonist a golden finger. All I can say is that this is a cool article. If you don't look too closely. It's quite nice to be able to withstand some poisonous spots.

Fast time travel, different fast time travel, writing and plot are pretty good. The plot length of each world is a summary of the female channel, with the most in the city and the ancient times, and the others are dispensable. The setting of the protagonists in the urban world perfectly fits the essence of the female channel. The protagonists' punishment is to become invisible in front of the world. I have seen the setting of the fairy world many times. It seems to be a relatively classic female channel article, which can be regarded as a classic. After all, female immortals do not want to climb to the top step by step before falling in love. Going down to earth and experiencing tribulations is simply the core skill of female channels in cultivating immortals.

I'm thinking of a script, starting with: I want to have a love with you that will never separate. Ending: Watching a girl in a wedding dress kissing a boy who has eyes for her at the wedding venue. Standing in the audience, the boy smiled and naturally expressed his true feelings: "In the end, I didn't expect that I would be the first to leave." He only had eyes for the girls on the court. Even though he was smiling, the tears in his eyes could not fool anyone. I can only tell myself in my heart: "I can't give her the wedding she wants, and I can't be with her for a long time. I can only wish her happiness!"

It's definitely the best among True Young Master's stories.

The walls in the hospital have heard more prayers than the church, the bed in the hotel has heard more lies than the prison, the school has witnessed more sincere confessions than the wedding, the soldier has heard more vows of alliance than the priest, leaving can see a person's heart more clearly than meeting, separation can witness the love of two people better than getting along, and the wind in summer is more bleak than in autumn. The warm sun in winter is warmer than spring, the love before death is more sincere than the love before wedding, white chrysanthemums witness more love and longing than red roses, April Fool's Day confessions are more sincere than Valentine's Day confessions, there are always more regrets in funeral homes than in churches, more beautiful stories are written on car windows than in the distance, and there are always more separation hugs than when we met. There are always people who tell the truth with April Fool's Day lies. They stand up to answer questions in class and hear "answers" that are more perfect than a perfect crime.