Quickly Wear: I Cheat and Become the Heroine in Various Worlds

I can feel that the author wants to write a plot that flows quickly, but there are many shortcomings. First of all, the background of C and the heroine may not be explained due to foreshadowing issues. But it is obviously just a logistics system that can do nothing at the beginning. Later, in order to complete the plot, many functions are inexplicably upgraded. It can monitor, upgrade, and anthropomorphize. It is unreasonable and seems to be round. The second point is that all plot advancement is presented through dialogue. The large-scale xx said xx said xx said. This is especially obvious for people who listen to the novel. The emotion of the plot is greatly weakened. The third point I want to show that the male protagonist is strong and powerful, but all the problems in the whole story are solved by the so-called female protagonist. The male protagonist is just a supporting role, and the way the female protagonist solves problems is very immature. In the interstellar chapter, I obviously want to show that the female protagonist is mechanically proficient. She can solve everything one by one with a few lines of dialogue. But in the end, the experiment needs to be demonstrated to convince the public. As a technician hired by the marshal, the male protagonist still has to question him, which means that the male protagonist has nothing to be convinced about. It is contradictory. It seems to be a lot of redundant paragraphs. So far I have seen this. I am a bit allergic to the narrative technique xx said xx said. My reading ends here. Best wishes [currently in progress]

The article is very shallow and the heroine is very pretentious

I haven't finished reading it yet--Senior, the junior sister chapter almost made me suffocate to death. I finally couldn't bear to watch it until almost 20. I couldn't stand it anymore so I skipped it [face covering]

I'm so sorry, little junior sister😔