Dressed as a Rebellious Disciple and Imprisoned by the Master

The emotional line of this book is very beautiful, it expresses love passionately, resolves conflicts with restraint, and well handles the uncomfortable feeling that "substitute literature" often brings to readers. The ending is a little rushed, and the final climax is very weak. The author hurriedly filled in the holes and ended it, maybe because he didn't want to write it. But this thing is just wishful thinking, as long as lovers get married eventually.

This system is really powerful, and the aspect of protecting the heroine is the best I have ever seen. I like the character of Master very much, but it would be better if the yandere value was lower. He always relies on force to oppress the heroine, which is a bit unbearable.

Very nice, I like it. Thank you to the author for writing such a beautiful story. It feels like they are people in the real world. We all live under the same starry sky. Everyone has their own story, waiting for us to discover.

This type of article, in my opinion, has been written by many authors with good writing skills, but this author has highlights and innovations. In fact, I think there are no problems in reading most of the article. You can just like the characters and so on. The main thing is that at the end, I feel that there are a little less things explained and there is no more improvement, so I feel that it ends suddenly and is a bit confusing. Apart from this, I think this may be the reason why this book has a lower score. Of course, it is possible that the author just wanted to write a shorter article. In my opinion, this important step of becoming a Taoist couple has been omitted. Well, there is actually a contract, but it is still missing.

My little Feng Feng, awesome Klass, okay, does the author know how good his writing is? Even after reading it, my depressed child is not odious. I just want to watch this thing 200 times a day. It's awesome. The bean bag tells the author tomorrow's sports lottery numbers. The author is awesome. OS finally allowed me to read the beautiful Lily Master and Disciple article. It must be highly praised and supported. It's not ugly at all. Xie Dang Qiu Shen Luo Shen is awesome. Wolf Xi is awesome Klaas. It's awesome, ok, I directly wish the author that one one will get one, two two will get four, four forty six, seven seven forty-nine.

Throughout the book, the writing style and ideas are acceptable, at least it is one of the rare novels that I can listen to with my heart. However, the emotional line gives people an inexplicable feeling. In a sense, it should be regarded as two people falling in love at first sight, plus lusting after each other. And the most difficult thing for me to understand is that the heroine is set up at the beginning of the book. She has reached the peak of her combat power, but she is restrained everywhere. It feels quite inexplicable, and the author may not have described it well sometimes. Her combat power makes people feel that she is strong and weak at times. In short, this article is only suitable for simply looking at emotions, not deep thoughts. In short, it is okay to throw away your head and read it [Like]

Excellent product, excellent product. I like it very much. You must read it. The system is not very tricky. I like the heroine's outlook and thoughts very much.

Everyone, please read it. The relationship between the two people is very clearly described. After the master found out that he fell in love with the apprentice, he did not hesitate but quickly recognized his own feelings. Later, he discovered that the apprentice was not the original one, and he also recognized his own heart in time. The apprentice has also been seducing the master, relying on the master's love for him, doing whatever he wants (doing whatever he wants to the master.) A particularly delicious book

To be honest, I really like this novel. The main CP definitely has nothing to say, but the deputy CP is a bit off-putting. To be honest, I personally hate using other means to change people's emotions. Even though it was later explained that the dosage was very small, and I was tempted, I really couldn't accept it. However, this book is about the main CP after all, so there is no doubt about his perfection [Love] [Love] [Love]

Wow, it looks good, but I feel like I'm on the wrong side of it, holding high the banner of being No. 1 In the next year [making a face]

In fact, I prefer to see apprentices who are timid, weak, and respect their teachers. But after reading this book, I think I also like the character of the protagonist. Although he is brave, he is also timid. Haha, but I am Amway

The book is really beautiful and the writing is very good [please update] So when will that annoying system be taken offline?

Good-looking, good-looking, very good-looking~ Very sweet, very sweet, very sweet~ Recommended, recommended, highly recommended [love] [love] [love]

Shen Luochen [Love] Xie Dingqiu Shen Yuexing & Xu Tianmian Good-looking and good-looking [learned] [learned] [learned] 2025.8.4

It's okay, it's worth watching, there are some weird points below, but it's acceptable to me, so it's okay. 1. The heroine is not the original soul. The original soul made a deal with the system. 2. The master is very kind to the original heroine, but it is not love, but a lot of possessiveness.

It's beautiful, especially the dragon and the master and apprentice are very xp to me! Although there are many books like Master and Disciple published, they are still endlessly sweet.

It's so good. It's the first time I'm so looking forward to the novel update. Please don't force me to update it soon. I love this master so much. This description is amazing. I accidentally opened it. In fact, this is the book that I think of Bai Yueguang. It was the first time I read two heroines. For this book, I searched Tomato from social software and downloaded it. It is so good.

How can I look so good! ! ! ! ! ! Wow wow wow wow, I can't calm down after watching it, why is it so beautiful! ! ! ! ! ! It's just a bit short, but I still want to see their daily life😭😭, master and apprentice are awesome Klass, watch it well, watch it, watch it, watch it, watch it, watch it, watch it, watch it, everyone who sees this comment should go and read it, school starts tomorrow, I stayed up late today to read this book, I felt so good, I didn't even want to start school, I thought about it, how can it be so good😭😭😭 I still want to watch the extras😭😭😭

It's very good. The heroine's emotional line is very smooth. If it only focuses on love, it would be a very good novel.

It's really beautiful! I have basically read all of this writer's works with dual heroines.

It is too sweet! Watching it in the middle of the night, the corners of my mouth turned up and I couldn't suppress my shyness. In my opinion, this is a top-quality work! Super pretty! [Blowing kiss]

If you like pure love, you can rush! This one is really beautiful. Both of them have unreserved and pure love for their lover! I really like this kind of setting. Although the relationship is unequal in the early stage, they are equal in the later stage. Moreover, Shen Luochen is extremely fond of Xie Dangqiu in the early stage! Really sweet! ! !

It's good. I recommend it. I've read a lot of Lang Xi's novels.

It's so sweet. The front of this book is full of knives, which is scary. In fact, there is only a small knife. It's sweet from beginning to end. It's beautiful! [Shy][shy]

It's okay. It's pretty good. It's good. The ending is pretty good. The ending is okay. It's not terrible.

It's good to watch. There's no plot involving too many swords. It's good.

The character of Master in this book is my favorite

Average, no big problems to see

The story has a tight rhythm, a clear main line, and a slightly rushed ending.

It looks pretty good at the moment. As long as the future development doesn't go in a crazy direction, I will keep chasing it.