The Mediocre Man’s Game: I Sound the Retreat in the City

"Tidelight" On the sea level after a heavy rain, The first beam of light emerged from the gap in the clouds, The waves are all illuminated, There are still a few strands that I hold carefully in my hands, When I raise my head and look up, The glare makes me yearn for it even more, What a longing to fill with courage, Every incredible time, I know you are always with me, No amount of hurt can erase the belief in the promise, Jump into the deep sea and let the tide swallow me up, Through the black vortex, The tide ebbs and flows. If there is light, I will not be lonely. The end of the sea is you, The most beautiful flowers bloom. Memories come with laughter, Until the break of dawn, I know every minute is important, The sun leans on the sea level, You shine brightly in the tide, I long to reach out and hug you, Jump into the deep sea and let the tide swallow me up, Through the black vortex, The tide ebbs and flows. If there is light, I will not be lonely. The end of the sea calls me, Jump into the deep sea and let the tide swallow me up, Through the black vortex, The ebb and flow of the tide make me feel less lonely when I have the light. The end of the sea is you, The most beautiful flowers bloom.

I think it's still worth reading. The subject matter is very novel and the writing is okay. I would like to make a small suggestion to get into the theme as soon as possible. That is, try to compress the first three pictures as much as possible, or set up a suspense to hook the readers. I think the first 8,000 words are a bit boring. It's very good for a newcomer to write novels like this. Keep it this way and don't make any messy poisonous points. I think there will be no problem if 200,000 to 300,000 people read it 👍 👍