Lord: the Succubus Paladin's Pioneer Journey

When you update the author, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be magnified. Astringency will be criticized. When you watch the second watch, a little patience is born. Students, the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are at the third watch, Wei Mo praises began to flow, and the number of dead harvests began to decrease. When you are five o'clock When , readers' support spontaneously formed, and the voices of praise became louder and louder bright. When you were at the tenth watch, the great Confucian scholars' debates were deafening and tolerant. The attitude is implemented internally and externally. When you were twenty, the bookworm's memories There is a place for you, even in this long life, your name will always be there It will leave a dazzling mark. When you watch a hundred times, their The praise is deafening, and they will even tell you to take a rest and recuperate. Body. Updates may not solve all problems, but 90% of them The problems above all come from insufficient updates.

Author, you are so miserable. Your rating is so low. I want to touch you and comfort you [blowing kiss] This book is one of the best I've read. Although I'm a newbie, I like the writing style. So far, I haven't seen any big poisonous points or problems. Although I can only read it daily, it still allows me to remember the content of this book even if I read it for a week (just take me as saying that the characteristics are relatively distinctive). I don't want to say anything about the rating, that's it for tomatoes. I read through the 55 reviews of this book one by one. Those negative reviews are either because the little head dominates the big head, and when I see the succubus, I want to write about succubus; I can only talk about environmental issues. I hope the author can stick to it. There are many new authors like you on my bookshelf who have stopped halfway. [Cover face]

Elf Queen, Silver Dragon, Vampire Queen, Night Elf Queen, Medusa, Female Goddess, Duke and Widow... Come and have some

At the beginning, the succubus sends the stepmother away? Not... Send a succubus stepmother at the beginning? Nor... I admit that I clicked on it after reading the wrong title, but the highlight of this novel is really not Se Se [Thinking] The plot unfolds slowly, after all, it has been 100 chapters, and the lord has not yet obtained his loyal territory, but the foreshadowing has almost been done, and there should be a fierce conflict next. Some of the settings of Succubus are quite interesting, and they haven't fallen into a spiral of stacking values. The author is also quite interesting and interacts with readers' interesting comments. Celebrating Chapter 100 and looking forward to the next better plot.

It's super cool... The author's driving skills when driving a black car are quite high... I look forward to the unfolding of the subsequent plot... Keep up the good work, author... [Laughing] [laughing] [laughing]

Is it okay if the pace is faster? It's a bit too complicated. Is it okay to get to the Undead earlier? (Just a personal opinion, I hope the author will think about it carefully)

Knight is not discriminating, I read it, it's very interesting, I like Succubus! Hahaha.

At least I still think it looks pretty good after seeing it.

Sometimes we need to improve our lightning protection awareness

More than thirty chapters have passed and I haven't started yet...

Not bad, I should be planning a novel with at least one million words

It's a bit new [laughing evilly], but it's very good [you taste it carefully] [you learn it].

The writing is quite good, although it is a bit watered down, but the combat details and Western fantasy settings are well grasped. There are many character names that were copied from Game of Thrones and World of Warcraft, and some of the holes in the main storyline have been filled in. I look forward to the follow-up performance.

@ULTIMATE BLUE-EYE Please change your age quickly, otherwise the report will be accurate.

What's going on with this rating?

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Alas, what should I say? I've read more than 20 chapters now, and I haven't started yet. If you look at the catalog, you'll probably get forty or fifty tickets when you set out.

I feel like the early writing was okay, please give it a try, author.

Not bad, the pace could be faster

Very good, one of the few good books in Western fantasy

If this book could be finished, it would have a rating of 9.5 Or above. It is really wonderful.

The writing is quite good. You can write at your own pace. You still need to write the foreshadowing and details that should be included.

It seems okay so far

I think it's pretty

Very well written, good luck to the author

Come on, the author is great

Come on, come on, come on

Better looking than similar ones

Please let me know when I'm going to change the book and continue writing.

Come on, I think it looks good