I Am Wu Dunru in the Divine Sculpture

The author's writing style is good, not traditional white writing, and the design of the golden finger is also reasonable, not a brainless plug-in. But there are also some minor pitfalls. In the latest chapter, "Bearing the Adopted Father", even though I know it's a joke, I'm still a little nervous about it. It depends on how it unfolds later. It's good to suppress first and then rise, as long as you can play it well.

The rhythm is comfortable, neither impatient nor impetuous, and the writing is rigorous. It is refreshing without being brainless. The logic of the characters is smooth, and some shortcomings are acceptable. It is currently the best work in the martial arts section of the Tomato platform.

It's pretty good, very detailed, and some of the plots are quite passable, not dull. From the description of the Wu family at the beginning, etc., It can be seen that the author has put some effort into it. He has some knowledge of the history of Dali, and at least he has carefully researched the information. This is rare. In the later period, I basically fully developed my ideas on some details of the original work, and the writing was good. Because this type of fanfiction must avoid too many connections and similarities with the original work, this will test the author's pioneering thinking and require you to be able to show off the details of the original work. Nowadays, a large number of authors write this kind of works, desperately trying to circumvent the limitations of the original works and strive to break through. But it is a pity that Mr. Jin Yong's knowledge of Chinese studies is so terrifying. It can be said that he is the most arbitrary person in traditional martial arts novels. If you want to completely break through him. How difficult. There are often some works that strive to be new, but the novels, plots, characters, and philosophies they construct are far inferior to the original works. At best, they just interchange and change the plots of different characters, but they will be like a tiger but not a dog. The author does a good job at this point, expanding on the details, like the bravery of moving around in the land of dimensions. Of course, there are still flaws, and the structure of some sentences is a bit childish, but the flaws are not hidden, and the score can be higher.

It's been a while since I've watched it, but it's a good time to watch it again. There aren't many new ideas written by the fans, most of them are the same as the original ones, and it will become boring after watching more than one. Only fans who write new ideas can initially catch their attention. Fans with smooth writing and far-reaching ideas are worth reading! A good fan will be more outstanding if you read more chapters. The basics of this book are 4 stars, and I give it 5 stars. I look forward to the follow-up being unconventional and worthy of the name of 5 stars [laughs]!

Opening this book is like stepping into a whole new world. The plot written by the author has ups and downs, and there are surprises hidden in every page. I couldn't stop and read it in one breath. The characterizations in the book are amazing! Everyone has a distinct personality, as if they jumped out of the page, and accompanied me to experience thrilling or heart-warming stories. While reading, I was completely immersed in them, and I truly felt their joy, anger, sorrow, and joy. The author's writing style is delicate and beautiful, and every word is just right. Simple stories become vivid in his writing, and reading is like savoring a beautiful poem, which is endlessly memorable.

I personally think it's very good. I started reading it after not many words. 5.6 Is definitely low. Wu Dunru is definitely a good starting point. The plot is also very smooth. There are no bad points at the moment.

Anyway, I see that it is basically the original work now, but with the addition of a stronger protagonist, the story line will probably not change? At least I'm still upset that my mother is gone, but I kind of understand that the main story line remains the same. The styles are different, but I've watched a lot of people who are reborn and start a harem, so it's okay to watch this kind of narration. Anyway, I watch them while working, so some of them are good.

I hope the author will keep updating it. This is really a martial arts novel that can be read into a book. .

Must 5⭐️ A martial arts novel with a very strict structure. From the current point of view, it contains both the plot of the original work and the author's own ideas. The golden finger also assists the author's growth. The proportion is just right. Looking forward to the author's updates.

The writing is smooth, the plot is reasonable, and there are not many flaws. If you keep writing at this level, the score will definitely rise to 9.2.

The perspective of the Condor Heroes Dawu Dunru. The writing is smooth. No logical flaws. The Goldfinger arrangement is not brainless. The rating of 7.1 Feels like it's underrated. I've read dozens of chapters and I'm currently accepting it well. The whole book can be called a comprehensive book.

The author's writing is good, the logic is online, the plot is reasonable, and it is frequently updated.

A good book, without too much violence. Jianghu is not about fighting and killing, but about human relations.

It's really good~ It didn't hinder Yang Guo and Little Dragon Girl. The length of Yang Guo was appropriately limited in the whole story. It was also gradually determined that the protagonist was the most powerful setting. The language was also very fluent, but the ending was a bit rushed. Keep up the good work, author! ! !

Tomato is a rare and good Jin Yong martial arts fanfic. It has no frivolous thoughts, no obscene language, does not treat women as toys, and has no fancy system of divine assistance. It writes about martial arts practice in a down-to-earth manner, and it does not brainlessly criticize someone or a certain sect. It even has some heroic and righteous feelings. I hope the author will stick to himself, come on.

It's good to read. Come on, the author.

It's beautiful. I haven't seen this type in a long time. I hope I won't stop updating🔥

The author's writing style is good, the structure is clear, the plot is compact, one after another, and has a very good foundation. It does not seem abrupt, and many explanations can be justified. It is a good work, and it is worth reading if you like martial arts.

The description is eloquent and has the style of Jin Yong

I just want to see Goldfinger torture the host

Okay, I've been chasing

It looks good, cheers for the author [Adoration]

Not bad, I won my heart

I personally think it's worth watching.

I think it's ok, it's really ok, I'm not asking for help, please come on, author! !

It's been a while since I've seen Appetite [Like]

The narrative is reasonable and unfolds slowly, but it's just a little lacking.

Good book, alas, there is nothing to read when it is exciting. Too little, not enough.

It's beautiful. I'm an old bookworm. It's great to practice quietly.

Five-star praise support! Come on author