An ordinary migrant worker travels through Yi Nian Guan Mountain. He originally planned to die alone, but as the story progresses, he meets the person he wants to spend his whole life with. He thinks he is about to reach the peak of happiness and happiness, but it turns out that he is not the one. So he should set a small goal for himself and survive first. This article is Qian Zhao's CP article
Reader comments
The writing is so good and very real. There is no cheating or taking it for granted. Liudaotang itself is a guest intelligence agency. It is impossible for the heroine to gain trust as soon as she comes. The suspicions and suspicions at the beginning are very reasonable. The heroine is not strong in martial arts and has no background, so she can only survive. Later, the heroine integrates into it bit by bit with wisdom and modern foresight. The ending was quite satisfying, it would have been nice if there were more extra chapters.
I think it's very interesting. It rationalizes some behaviors on TV and makes people feel that it is a real world. But I feel that there are not too many details about the development of relationships, I don't eat too much candy, and there is no urge to watch the corners of my mouth turn up and roll around on the bed [shy]. The author's description of emotions feels a bit... It's a tough job, but overall it's pretty good. I like it. I hope that the next book will have more descriptions about emotions. This book has emotional descriptions, but it feels a bit weak in action. I didn't feel that there was that um... Pull in their language and behavior, that kind of feeling of you coming and going... I don't know if I expressed it. But this is my own feeling, thank you to the author for your hard work [Like][Like]
So pretty! After reading this article, I felt that it was very reasonable and logical, and I also felt that some modern common sense collided with ancient times. After the heroine communicated with the protagonists, the protagonists were not the ones who couldn't listen to what they said, so the thoughts of the protagonists might change with the arrival of the heroine. From the time when the heroine first entered the Six Paths Hall, and later she slowly wanted to use her own strength to leave a way out for the protagonists of the Six Paths Hall, I was really happy. I hope the author will update more!
Although I don't know who the CP is yet, he should be one of the five people in Liudaotang. I like this article very much, so I recommend it. I will follow the author's updates every day. Come onｸﾞｯ!(๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧
It's really beautiful. I admire the growth and thoughtfulness of the heroine. It's not just a story about love or rescue. Although there are cheats, it's not as extraordinary as the heroine. The heroine is just an ordinary person trying her best to change the ending while preserving herself. It's really cool. Not really, it just goes with the flow and acts in accordance with the character's logic. The emotional description is not sweet and sweet but it is also very natural. Qian Zhao's description is also different from other characters I have seen before. It feels very novel. In short, it is quite comfortable🥰
Everything else is fine, but the segments are too long, which makes me feel a little uncomfortable [face covering]
It's very beautiful, I don't know why not many people see it.
The logic is very strong, and it is not entirely based on the plot. Everyone's character image is very strong, and it is completely beautiful. (Well... I am not very good at Chinese, so I tried my best)
It's super, super cool. It's the most logical piece of Guan Shan fan fiction I've ever read.
Very nice, I like it very much
Very beautiful, the ending is wonderful
Very nice! Very exciting!
I watched it for two days and finished it.
You must keep writing, I will go back to school in two days and I won't be able to catch up on updates every day [I'm about to cry]
Super invincible and beautiful! ! ! ! ! ! !
Not only is the logic rigorous, but it also fills in many loopholes in the original drama!
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! !
Show them all to me! ! !
It's so beautiful, but it's a little messy
I hope the author can mark the details with CP, otherwise I really won't be able to make π_π. Big cheers for the author
Super nice. Come on, author! Come on!
Overall it's okay, but some parts at the back are a bit awkward, but it's still worth watching.
It's very beautiful. I saw it when I was in a book shortage. I hope the author will update it more.
This is the ending I was looking forward to, it's so beautiful [Adoration]
It's nice to watch, and finally it's not stupid. We are all ordinary people. How can we become so awesome once we travel through time? In such a powerful real world, ordinary people are not
It's super good-looking, and all the male and female protagonists have online IQs! The writing is very good! ! ! !
It's very well written, cheers up
The process and ending are both good
Very good, well written.
Good looking, like old money
Dear author, come on, you are great!
The plot is okay and the characters are well restored
Good-looking. This is really good-looking. It's not like other articles.
I like you so much, the updates are super fast. It would be great if there were more chapters, hehe
Yes, let's look at Guanshan from another angle. The ending is good👌🏻
The writing is so good and very real. There is no cheating or taking it for granted. Liudaotang itself is a guest intelligence agency. It is impossible for the heroine to gain trust as soon as she comes. The suspicions and suspicions at the beginning are very reasonable. The heroine is not strong in martial arts and has no background, so she can only survive. Later, the heroine integrates into it bit by bit with wisdom and modern foresight. The ending was quite satisfying, it would have been nice if there were more extra chapters.
I think it's very interesting. It rationalizes some behaviors on TV and makes people feel that it is a real world. But I feel that there are not too many details about the development of relationships, I don't eat too much candy, and there is no urge to watch the corners of my mouth turn up and roll around on the bed [shy]. The author's description of emotions feels a bit... It's a tough job, but overall it's pretty good. I like it. I hope that the next book will have more descriptions about emotions. This book has emotional descriptions, but it feels a bit weak in action. I didn't feel that there was that um... Pull in their language and behavior, that kind of feeling of you coming and going... I don't know if I expressed it. But this is my own feeling, thank you to the author for your hard work [Like][Like]
So pretty! After reading this article, I felt that it was very reasonable and logical, and I also felt that some modern common sense collided with ancient times. After the heroine communicated with the protagonists, the protagonists were not the ones who couldn't listen to what they said, so the thoughts of the protagonists might change with the arrival of the heroine. From the time when the heroine first entered the Six Paths Hall, and later she slowly wanted to use her own strength to leave a way out for the protagonists of the Six Paths Hall, I was really happy. I hope the author will update more!
Although I don't know who the CP is yet, he should be one of the five people in Liudaotang. I like this article very much, so I recommend it. I will follow the author's updates every day. Come onｸﾞｯ!(๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧
It's really beautiful. I admire the growth and thoughtfulness of the heroine. It's not just a story about love or rescue. Although there are cheats, it's not as extraordinary as the heroine. The heroine is just an ordinary person trying her best to change the ending while preserving herself. It's really cool. Not really, it just goes with the flow and acts in accordance with the character's logic. The emotional description is not sweet and sweet but it is also very natural. Qian Zhao's description is also different from other characters I have seen before. It feels very novel. In short, it is quite comfortable🥰
Everything else is fine, but the segments are too long, which makes me feel a little uncomfortable [face covering]
It's very beautiful, I don't know why not many people see it. The logic is very strong, and it is not entirely based on the plot. Everyone's character image is very strong, and it is completely beautiful. (Well... I am not very good at Chinese, so I tried my best)
It's super, super cool. It's the most logical piece of Guan Shan fan fiction I've ever read.
Very nice, I like it very much
Very beautiful, the ending is wonderful
Very nice! Very exciting!
I watched it for two days and finished it.
You must keep writing, I will go back to school in two days and I won't be able to catch up on updates every day [I'm about to cry] Super invincible and beautiful! ! ! ! ! ! ! Not only is the logic rigorous, but it also fills in many loopholes in the original drama! Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! ! Show them all to me! ! !
It's so beautiful, but it's a little messy
I hope the author can mark the details with CP, otherwise I really won't be able to make π_π. Big cheers for the author
Super nice. Come on, author! Come on!
Overall it's okay, but some parts at the back are a bit awkward, but it's still worth watching.
It's very beautiful. I saw it when I was in a book shortage. I hope the author will update it more.
This is the ending I was looking forward to, it's so beautiful [Adoration]
It's nice to watch, and finally it's not stupid. We are all ordinary people. How can we become so awesome once we travel through time? In such a powerful real world, ordinary people are not
It's super good-looking, and all the male and female protagonists have online IQs! The writing is very good! ! ! !
It's very well written, cheers up
The process and ending are both good
Very good, well written.
Good looking, like old money
Dear author, come on, you are great!
The plot is okay and the characters are well restored
Good-looking. This is really good-looking. It's not like other articles.
I like you so much, the updates are super fast. It would be great if there were more chapters, hehe
Yes, let's look at Guanshan from another angle. The ending is good👌🏻