Reborn: Making Money, Not Making Love

So far, the writing is good, and the ordinary daily life is occasionally arranged with dramatic conflicts as a refreshing point. Partly exaggerated, harmless. The disadvantage is that the word count is small and you need to wait. As long as it is updated continuously and the main plot is not broken, it can still be regarded as a small masterpiece.

Can you write less about your wife in your previous life?

Yes, after rebirth you should live a casual life. If it comes back to feelings about family and country, please cancel the comment.

The plot is quick and slow, and the characters are described in detail! 👍

True, many words from the heart

Except for the spoofed names of the supporting characters, everything else is OK. The protagonist created is also brave, resourceful and not brainless.

It's really beautiful, good luck to the author

The logic is clear and the emotions are okay. Looks great, come on

It's super looking so far!