One second, Sa Deming was still showing off Kailiu's big lump; the next second, he had traveled to the world of armored warriors.
The good news is that he is a cosmic being, the immortality that Qin Shi Huang dreamed of, and even the dog on the roadside is not uncommon here.
Bad news, he is a soldier captain of Yanxing, and the old Lufa thieves have already attacked him.
Sadmin:…
Why don't you run away and stay here for the New Year?
As a result, he fled to the blue and white planet under the wanted pursuit of Ares forces.
Lufa Old Thief: Who are you? General Yanxing? If it is broken, how can it create virtue?
Yandi Lao Da: No, why didn't I know that I still have a general like you under my command? Even more despicable and evil than Lufa?
Fei Shaoge Youli: Don't ask me, I'm just a passerby.
Li Haotian was confused: I will definitely use the future - wait, with him here, do we still have a future?
Xiaogang: I'm not good at it. Two fists can't beat four hands. My mother said so!
An Mixiu covered his chest with his hands and said proudly: Let me fight for justice again!
Armor reinforcement team:? ? ?
King Louis: Shet!
Finally, his most loyal comrade-in-arms America congratulated the galaxy: Welcome our most noble king!
[No system + Not invincible in the early stage + Slightly funny + Flame Star heroine + The plot will be derived in a reasonable timeline, there will be no magic change OOC + There is no big devil with morals, the evil villain is not the Holy Mother (abuse the protagonist group + abuse the villain group, regardless of the protagonist's handsome appearance, I don't like the armor and the ghost demon) + Kill the wage earner Lufa, plunder the crystal, I am the most handsome boy in the galaxy]
[I emphasize again: super evil, fried chicken is bad! ! !
[Armor Erxingtian]
Reader comments
The front foot said that Gorfa would focus on the three families and not get close to them easily, but the back foot went to the welcoming Teppanyaki restaurant because he couldn't control his mouth.
Also, the character of the protagonist doesn't seem to have lived for more than 2,000 years, but other than that, there's nothing too toxic about it.
Thousands of years of living in vain,
The setting is novel, the characters are fleshed out, and the plot is perfect. Now let's look at Kaiji's independent world view and see the quality after leaving the plot and the earth chapter.
(Upper and lower) five-star purple, level 10
Sense of substitution B, attraction B, plug-in B, setting B, writing B, imagination B, rhythm B, main line C, character A, logic B
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#Objective evaluation. If you have different opinions, you can evaluate it yourself. This way it should not be blocked.
1. Recommended Evaluation Criteria·Ninth Edition Revised
(1) Evaluation items
1. Sense of immersion: The attraction at the beginning and the foreshadowing of the world view.
2. Attraction: follow-up attraction, follow-up reading.
3. Plug-in: The golden finger is reasonable and functionally innovative.
4. Setting: background credibility, system self-consistency.
5. Writing style: Does each paragraph promote the development of the plot?
6. Brainstorming: Whether each small story is connected to the main line.
7. Rhythm: Are you tired of reading or feel that the word count is low?
8. Main line: Whether all plots revolve around the core goal.
9. Character design: Is the protagonist's behavior consistent and whether the supporting characters are impressive?
10. Logic: Whether making money, cultivating, etc. Are consistent with basic cognition.
11. Extra points deduction: balance the scores of the first 10 items, data, economy, structure, three perspectives, supporting roles, time, geography, knowledge...
(2) Evaluation grouping
1. First impression: sense of immersion at the beginning, subsequent attraction
2. World background: reasonable plug-ins and background settings
3. Content: Writing • Promote plot, imagination • Secondary innovation
4. Structure: Rhythm • Overall coherence, main line • Close to the center
5. Details: Persona·Character design, logic·Consistent with common sense
(3) Rating of recommended evaluation items
1. Highlights: S-level 4 points, A-level 2 points
2. Standard: 1 point for Grade B, 0 points for Grade B
3. Defects: Grade C - 1 point, Grade D - 3 points
3. Rating of online articles
(1) Up, up
1. Red+: Total score is above level 30
2. Red: Total score is 26 or above
3. Red-: 8 items A
(2) High-quality and bright web articles
1. Orange+: Total score is level 22 or above
2. Orange: Total score is 18 or above
3. Orange-: 5 items A
(3) Shang Xia·High-level online articles
1. Purple+: Total score is 14 or above
2. Purple: Total score is level 10 or above
3. Purple-: 8 items B
(4) Upper-intermediate and high-level online writing
1. Five-star blue+: total score is level 6 or above
2. Five-star blue: total score is level 4 or above
4. Five-star green: 5 items B
(5) Zhongyi·High-standard online articles
1. Four-star green+: total score is level 2 or above
2. Four-star green: total score is level 1
3. Four-star white: 10 items C
(6) Middle 2 and 2·Standard online text
1. Samsung White+: Total score -1 level
2. Samsung White: Total Score -2 Level
(7) Middle and lower three•Flawed web articles
1. Samsung Gray+: Total score -3 levels
2. Samsung Gray: Total Score -4 Level
(6) Xia Shang·Web articles with great flaws
1. Samsung Black+: Total score -5 levels
2. Samsung Black: Total Score -6 Level
3. One-star black +: total score -7 levels
4. One-star black: total score -8 levels
5. Two-star black: 10 items D
One star is an invalid rating, two stars is the lowest rating
(7) Medium•No rating (lower middle to upper middle)
(8) Inferior • No grading (middle to lower to lower)
(9) Xiaxia·Malicious
1. The first stage: total score - below level 10
2. The second stage: total score - below level 20
3. The third stage: 10 E
It's insidious enough. It can be said that it is currently the only armor book that does not follow the explicit process.
It feels better than most of the invincible stories that overwhelm combat power. Although the early stage is a bit dull, it is overall better than those cookie-cutter Kaiji fanfics.
The main character in the prequel has less appearances, so it is relatively dull, but the postquel is very good. I personally think it is a rare masterpiece among Kai Er, and the characterization of the characters is also quite good. This book is considered a masterpiece among all armor fans.
Finally it's not the beginning of the Nether Demon
The front foot said that Gorfa would focus on the three families and not get close to them easily, but the back foot went to the welcoming Teppanyaki restaurant because he couldn't control his mouth. Also, the character of the protagonist doesn't seem to have lived for more than 2,000 years, but other than that, there's nothing too toxic about it.
Thousands of years of living in vain,
The setting is novel, the characters are fleshed out, and the plot is perfect. Now let's look at Kaiji's independent world view and see the quality after leaving the plot and the earth chapter. (Upper and lower) five-star purple, level 10 Sense of substitution B, attraction B, plug-in B, setting B, writing B, imagination B, rhythm B, main line C, character A, logic B ─────────────────── #Objective evaluation. If you have different opinions, you can evaluate it yourself. This way it should not be blocked. 1. Recommended Evaluation Criteria·Ninth Edition Revised (1) Evaluation items 1. Sense of immersion: The attraction at the beginning and the foreshadowing of the world view. 2. Attraction: follow-up attraction, follow-up reading. 3. Plug-in: The golden finger is reasonable and functionally innovative. 4. Setting: background credibility, system self-consistency. 5. Writing style: Does each paragraph promote the development of the plot? 6. Brainstorming: Whether each small story is connected to the main line. 7. Rhythm: Are you tired of reading or feel that the word count is low? 8. Main line: Whether all plots revolve around the core goal. 9. Character design: Is the protagonist's behavior consistent and whether the supporting characters are impressive? 10. Logic: Whether making money, cultivating, etc. Are consistent with basic cognition. 11. Extra points deduction: balance the scores of the first 10 items, data, economy, structure, three perspectives, supporting roles, time, geography, knowledge... (2) Evaluation grouping 1. First impression: sense of immersion at the beginning, subsequent attraction 2. World background: reasonable plug-ins and background settings 3. Content: Writing • Promote plot, imagination • Secondary innovation 4. Structure: Rhythm • Overall coherence, main line • Close to the center 5. Details: Persona·Character design, logic·Consistent with common sense (3) Rating of recommended evaluation items 1. Highlights: S-level 4 points, A-level 2 points 2. Standard: 1 point for Grade B, 0 points for Grade B 3. Defects: Grade C - 1 point, Grade D - 3 points 3. Rating of online articles (1) Up, up 1. Red+: Total score is above level 30 2. Red: Total score is 26 or above 3. Red-: 8 items A (2) High-quality and bright web articles 1. Orange+: Total score is level 22 or above 2. Orange: Total score is 18 or above 3. Orange-: 5 items A (3) Shang Xia·High-level online articles 1. Purple+: Total score is 14 or above 2. Purple: Total score is level 10 or above 3. Purple-: 8 items B (4) Upper-intermediate and high-level online writing 1. Five-star blue+: total score is level 6 or above 2. Five-star blue: total score is level 4 or above 4. Five-star green: 5 items B (5) Zhongyi·High-standard online articles 1. Four-star green+: total score is level 2 or above 2. Four-star green: total score is level 1 3. Four-star white: 10 items C (6) Middle 2 and 2·Standard online text 1. Samsung White+: Total score -1 level 2. Samsung White: Total Score -2 Level (7) Middle and lower three•Flawed web articles 1. Samsung Gray+: Total score -3 levels 2. Samsung Gray: Total Score -4 Level (6) Xia Shang·Web articles with great flaws 1. Samsung Black+: Total score -5 levels 2. Samsung Black: Total Score -6 Level 3. One-star black +: total score -7 levels 4. One-star black: total score -8 levels 5. Two-star black: 10 items D One star is an invalid rating, two stars is the lowest rating (7) Medium•No rating (lower middle to upper middle) (8) Inferior • No grading (middle to lower to lower) (9) Xiaxia·Malicious 1. The first stage: total score - below level 10 2. The second stage: total score - below level 20 3. The third stage: 10 E
It's insidious enough. It can be said that it is currently the only armor book that does not follow the explicit process.
It feels better than most of the invincible stories that overwhelm combat power. Although the early stage is a bit dull, it is overall better than those cookie-cutter Kaiji fanfics. The main character in the prequel has less appearances, so it is relatively dull, but the postquel is very good. I personally think it is a rare masterpiece among Kai Er, and the characterization of the characters is also quite good. This book is considered a masterpiece among all armor fans.
Finally it's not the beginning of the Nether Demon
Not bad, pretty good-looking.