The Cousin Gently Hooked Her Hand, and the Cousin Moved Up

It's super, super good-looking. Every story touches my xp🥰🥰🥰. Cousin and cousin, they are a perfect match. They have no resistance to this kind of subject matter. They don't abuse the heroine. They are very sweet. The hero is also very quick to move. There will be nothing wrong with it. The cruel part, most of the authors will reply to every comment, love it😘😘😘, let us support this author together🥺🥺🥺, you must keep writing, it is best to update twenty chapters every day🥺🥺🥺

[Learned] I think I quite like this subject matter, and the four stars are worthy. I don't think it's okay to use vernacular and occasional Internet slang. After all, ancient people's speech is not all obscure classical Chinese and poetry, but it is true that many words are inappropriate. My little suggestion is to make the dialogue between the characters clearer. Sometimes too many words are added, which may cause semantic duplication. Maybe this is my first time writing an article. I will practice more and accumulate more experience in the future. Fortunately, the subject matter and content are novel, so I can read it. Dear author, please come on [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

It's very beautiful. I especially like the ambiguous pull between the heroine and the male protagonist. I like the fishing-type heroine. The author is really enthusiastic and patient. He has replies to every comment. Finally, I will update it soon [please update]

After watching The World, I gave it a five-star review [laughs]! The whole process is sweet and cruelty-free. The male protagonist falls in love at first sight and falls in love with her again. The female protagonist is cunning but her "strategies" are so natural that no one else notices. The female protagonist is really smart. I, who always like to help others build castles, didn't feel any discomfort at all [blowing kisses]. The author is also very active haha ​​[I learned it], I hope that the male protagonist will always be noble in the future🙏🏻.

It's quite interesting, but it's not what I thought it would be like a quick travel novel. It's a story about cousins ​​in a small world. They don't necessarily mean they are related by blood, but they are indeed cousins ​​in the title. The sweet love is very interesting. I didn't really like the penultimate heroine, so I skipped half of it. The main reason is that the heroine was initially set up by her parents, and even though she knew the heroine didn't like it, she still helped her. My cousin was always pretentious, and he was the heroine, but the heroine was also very girly at times, which seemed a bit contradictory to me. In the last world, I may have preconceived the character of the heroine. I always thought she was enthusiastic and public. I subconsciously thought her hair was all red [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]. The character of the heroine attracted me, she is a bit yandere.

Overall, it's still very sweet, and the scene descriptions are also very vivid. The only shortcoming is that the characters are not diverse enough. For example, in the first world, in my eyes, Yuyan is just scheming to make Song Yu fall in love with her, and has no other characters at all. I suggest that the author can also write about the male and female protagonists facing each other. In life, they have different ways of dealing with things, and add some other characters to them, such as Yuyan. The author writes that she is a weak but scheming girl, but she should also add some other characters, such as "being liked by small animals", "not afraid of danger when facing danger" or contrast, so that the characters can be written more vividly.

A particularly good-looking book. I like this type and the male and female protagonists with this temperament. The contrast and pull are very strong. The emotional lines of each story are also very natural and delicate. And each story is neither long nor short, so it is suitable for people who are impatient and will not feel too short. I highly recommend [Send Heart][Top Post][Top Post]

Come on! Wenwen is very beautiful! Based on my experience of reading novels for more than ten years, this book is worth investing in! It's a good read, I love it, I like it [Adoration] The theme is novel, each small world is an independent unit, and the heroine's character is different in each world. It feels like opening a blind box, and it's exciting and exciting [laughs] Even if I skip watching, it doesn't affect the reading experience at all. Of course, I have read them all. I like the heroine who is intelligent, clever and scheming but does not lose her own principles the most. It is very beautiful, I personally like it! The writing style is good, but there is still room for improvement. I believe the author will write better and better! The description of emotional development is very delicate, keep up the good work! Book fans are always here, working hard to update, I love you [blowing kiss] It's a potential stock!

Um, are you done yet?,, I still want to read it,,, I really like this kind of innocent heroine who looks like a little fox inside. Each male protagonist has a different type. [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss] And this author is so good. Basically, no matter the protagonist or the supporting character, the ending is perfect,,,

It's very nice to read. The author is also very nice. He will read every book review patiently and listen carefully to the readers' opinions. The novel has a compact structure, vivid plot and delicate emotions. It is highly recommended [Send my heart] [Send my heart]

Good looking! So pretty! I just finished reading the first short section, and I said it touched my heart so much. It is very layered and methodical, and it is the best way to attack my heart! The author writes well, I really like this type of writing! Love it! It's the author's wife who needs to update quickly, please update more often, I'm so hungry! Rice rice! Want more!

It's so pretty. It's so pretty. It's totally in line with my taste. The girls in it are all good. They're all good babies [shy][shy][shy] I've only watched the first world now. I love it so much! ! Why are so few people commenting? It's definitely not a waste to come and join in. And I also like the author's writing style very much. I must finish this book [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]

It's very interesting, especially the chapter between Yan Wubai and Shen Huanyan. It really makes people feel the same. You can imagine the scene of the two people having a warm conversation, and feel the joy of cp. The emperor really loves him, and the heroine is also worthy. Although she is not a strong woman, she is The heroine really deserves the emperor's favor, especially because Yan Wubai understands Jiaojiao, so every time he answers Jiaojiao, he deliberately says "empress". He is not sure what will happen in the future, so he gives Jiaojiao power and status, as well as his son who is established as the prince, and feels that love is beautiful.

The story is good, but the writing is better than the introduction. Personally, I feel that the writing is not very immersive and needs to be improved. Some sentences are a bit unclear and the emotional penetration is not very strong. Personally, I feel that emotions can be substitutive, and the rest is innocuous. You need to bring some emotion into your writing so that readers can empathize. Even if readers without emotions read it, they will not be able to get too deep into the story and remember the features of the book. I hope the author will work hard and look forward to reading your article next time [love] [love] [love]

I like every article very much, especially Jiaojiao and Zichi. When Jiaojiao's heart beats, I'm even more excited than Zichi. Little Sun and Little Balsam Blossom (although Zichi is vigorous and resolute, he has lost his mother, concubine and father since he was a child and is not a good thing). They are the best match!

I like this genre very much, and the setting is also very good, but some details could be refined. The world behind is not as attractive as the world before, but it is within the acceptable range. The world of female supremacy is purely physical and status-sexual, which made me a little uncomfortable to read. The whole story is pretty good.

As an old bookworm, it is really difficult to come across a book that is so relevant to me. Recently I have become obsessed with sweet stories and have read a lot. This book is really logical and the heroine is not stupid. It is still being updated... The author works hard ฅ˙Ⱉ˙ฅ

Just this cousin cousin is so cool! This orthopedics department is so cool! I saw it directly at 3 a. M., It was really beautiful! The heroine is the kind of scheming baby, and the hero loves her so much. So sweet to me~

Beautiful (very loud!!) So sweet, clean, no bitch, very doting, the baby girl is super cute and very scheming (praise) I will keep chasing her, keep up the good work

It's super beautiful. Cousin Super beautiful [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]

Very nice! ! ! Big! ! Be literate! There is depth! There are words to make sentences! Very gorgeous! Worth a visit! !

It's very interesting, but the world is a bit monotonous, either ancient or modern. I want to see the end of the world, the cultivation of immortality, the ABO world or the Republic of China world...

After watching the three planes, I realized that the heroine is not the same person. But it's also pretty and sweet. The previous heroines used small tricks to seduce the male protagonist, but the third one is super cute. The male protagonist can hear the female protagonist's thoughts and is so doting. It feels like the male protagonist is seducing the female protagonist.

It's particularly beautiful. The author's words are beautiful and warm. The writing style is really good. There are no messy plots such as female rivalry. The male and female protagonists in each unit are very sweet. The emotional descriptions are particularly delicate. The warmth and happiness in the family really touched me. I like it! !

I read the first story. It's very interesting. The writing is very good. The descriptions between the male protagonist and the female protagonist are particularly touching. The ambiguous look between the two is very sweet. Come on, author!

The author's writing style is young but very delicate. It really makes my heart warm when I read it [crying]. I really like this kind of plot that seduces the male protagonist and takes the initiative.

It's very interesting. It's a sweet story. The male protagonist dotes on the female protagonist, and the female protagonist is also very smart. She's not just silly and sweet. This is very interesting. I like the scheming strategy hehehe🥰🥰🥰🥰

It's a very good book. The plot is not procrastinating. There is a story, but it is more about the sweetness of the male and female protagonists. Each one has a side story. Every little story is complete. The author Baobao's writing is mature and not embarrassing at all. It is a particularly good book. The author Baobao is often online and is the most active person I have ever seen. It may be because there are not many people reading it now, and the rating is a bit low, but it is good to read! ! ! ! Come on, author! ! !

It's good to watch, and I can clearly feel that the writing style has been greatly improved. What I like most is the first half of the second unit. The subsequent plot is too flat and boring. I personally don't like the plot of the kiss before we got together, but the setting is very good.

Wow! Really, this, absolutely, so paranoid, I really like it [Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post]