During the Night of Double Cultivation, the Book of Heaven Said It Possessed the Wrong Body?

I don't know why no one watched it. The writing is good and the plot is good. These two points alone surpass 99% of Tomato's articles. There are basically no cliches and the supporting characters are not brainless. There is no villain who is jealous of the male protagonist and wants to live or die because of the female protagonist. As for what was said on the first floor about all the hardships and hatreds, to be honest, there is indeed some pressure, and sometimes I even feel a little uncomfortable. But compared to other novels where parents died in an accident, and they thought there was a mastermind behind the scenes, and worked hard to find out the truth, I think compared with those, this bitterness and hatred are nothing at all. In addition, the author's writing is really good, I hope not to stop updating [Please update more]

Surprisingly, this book doesn't look like it was written by a newcomer at all. The emotions, combat, and writing are all top-notch. The plot is not sluggish and the rhythm is very good. The first copy ends around 60 chapters. The suspense at the beginning and the climax at the end, as well as the words between the lines, bring you a sense of depressing crisis. It is gripping and a good reading experience. It is very enjoyable. The pace is too fast and does not allow the reader to relax at all. You reminded me of the water shear at the starting point.

I kind of know the taste of Beiyou (I don't think I like it, so don't criticize it). Please don't stop the author. It's too difficult to find a book that suits your appetite [please update] Unlike new authors, which old ones are reincarnated. . . . .

Undoubtedly Full marks, must be full marks. This is my feeling after reading the first volume. To be honest, such an excellent work received less than 8 points, which is a pity. Compared with online articles, the pace is slightly slower. But for the traditional cultivation of immortality, the pace is okay and it is very comfortable to read. The author should have made an outline and put some effort into it. The emotional drama is so delicately written that one cannot help but suspect that it is a female author. Each character is well written, and some scenes will make people feel emotional even if they have not experienced it. The question is, after all, this is a harem story, how should we deal with the harem issue later? If you simply say "the heroines only care about what the protagonist thinks, it doesn't matter whether there are other women." This can also solve the harem problem, but it will be inferior to the delicate emotions and good writing mentioned above. Looking forward to the follow-up plot Speaking of the protagonist, the character is very good. A genius who is close to an ordinary time traveler. He is indeed not as good as the son of luck in terms of luck, but he is worthy of the fact that the time traveler itself has the ability to learn, so the protagonist has a strong understanding and is very comfortable to read. It's just that the part where the protagonist suddenly gets involved with Jiuyi Pavilion does feel stiff. Although it may be the result of a double break with the Girl of Luck, it also feels uncomfortable (after all, the protagonist's spiritual power is not as good as the Girl of Luck. They didn't break the spiritual root, but the protagonist did it?) Looking forward to subsequent patches. To be honest, this work gives people the first impression that it is the reincarnation of a boss, but the author said it is the first one, which really makes people look forward to what surprises the next work will bring.

The characters are well drawn, the plot is arranged, and the writing is okay. (More than 80 chapters so far) I feel that there are no obvious poisonous points, and there are some thunderous points. (High-quality grass, recommended to give it a try) However, there are a lot of female protagonists appearing in less than 100 chapters (currently there should be 5), and I am afraid of the author and can't control it. Moreover, the plot unfolds a bit tightly, and there are a lot of foreshadowings buried. It may be impossible to finish it in two or three volumes.

It's a good book, but the main character's level is a bit low. Although he has strength, his low level is not very good.

How can I put it this way? Let's just say it's good to watch. I think it's okay, but it's mediocre. And there is a part in the front that feels like a mystery novel, but it seems a bit tense. But, there are definitely a lot of problems, at least from what others have complained about. I also feel the same, and the author has his own thinking, which means that it is difficult for us to influence the author's judgment on the plot he wrote. For example, how should I put it, we think there is a big problem with this paragraph, but the author sees it from his own perspective. He thinks it is okay, and when reading the comments, the author also defended it, but after reading the likes, it is obvious that the author did not successfully fool the readers, hahaha. How to put it this way, I haven't read a lot of it so far. As far as the front is concerned, the pace of this book is not fast, and it may not be that refreshing at the same time. However, reading this novel while listening to my favorite songs makes me feel happy. At least the first part of this book gave me a good sense. I hope I won't change my evaluation of this book in the future.

The writing is very good, the combat power is not as bad as the cool novels, the fighting is not very mature but it is still very good, and the car can drive very fast where it should be driven. Overall, it is very good among the new Tomato books.

The thinking is clear, and the emotional lines are overly natural. The writing reveals the oppressive feeling brought by the rules of the jungle in this world. It can be said to be one of the best fantasy books with many female protagonists.

I feel that the author of this book wants to have both a relaxed and cheerful astringency, but also the depth of obsession with destiny. This feeling that may stab you in the relaxed and cheerful atmosphere is difficult to comment on (I hope that the author will not write too high in the future and the style of painting will change to the direction of traditional fairy tales [laughing])

It's so good. Why is it only rated 7 points? New book issue [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

I regained the feeling of reading fantasy novels in 14.15 Years. The rhythm of the story is different from the regular Tomato novels. It's just that the emotional excitement between the male protagonist and the female protagonist may be a bit "easy". I don't know if this is the right way to describe it? However, the plot of the male and female protagonists getting along is quite logical. Overall, it's pretty good.

It's rare. There are currently 16 chapters. The imagination is online, the emotions are delicate, and the characters are successfully created... I go, it is the best one I have ever read, but I also have a feeling that this book is afraid of eunuchs. After all, the best books I have read before are also eunuchs.

A good book about a fantasy harem. Except for Lin Xuezhi, who is a bit free, the others are good. The author's writing is exquisite. The coquettish Yun Mengyao, the quirky Ming Guang who plays with herself as a success or failure dog, the gentle and virtuous Lin Xuezhi, and the male protagonist who is a time management master and language artist are quite interesting₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑

The novel is very interesting. Author bacteria, where is your group? [Shy]

It's rare to spend a chapter or two purely describing key emotions. When it came to casting a new heroine, she was a bit of a scumbag (the third heroine was Lin, the first two were very good), and I felt like I wanted to seduce her as soon as I met her. After that, Qianqiu had just separated from the first two heroines, and one of them even broke an arm to help him save the other heroine (although it had no impact due to the physical recovery, it also caused the physical problem to break out in advance, resulting in the need to return to the family early), Houqiu wanted to buy a gift for the girl he liked (No. 3). The development of No. 3'S relationship was too sudden (mainly because the protagonist's feeling of wanting to flirt with her when they met was too strong). The two previous heroines and myself almost died. We didn't want to improve ourselves, so we asked the fortune teller what gifts to buy! It conflicts with the previous rationality (before the plot started, No. 1 Was worried about becoming a Taoist couple now, so the protagonist limited his current behavior to the friend level). But the emotional scenes with No. 1, Who occasionally has outrageous actions, and the clingy No. 2 Are really good, and the wisdom shown in the calculations during the fight is also very enjoyable. At present, I feel that the emotional development with No. 3 Is not well written, and the other parts are perfect. Why can't I follow up on the review? I just read the summary of the first chapter and once again lamented that the emotional scene with Yun and Guang was so well written. The author also has strict characters and logic in their relationship. The rating is still low now.

Nothing wrong with it, I like such delicate writing style, a little sweeter😋

This is not a novel, but a 'mirror palace' built with words: the male and female protagonists are mirror images of each other, and the multiple female protagonists are like kaleidoscopes that reflect the faces of all living beings. After you pass through the layers of illusion, you will eventually see your own reflection.

Is Li Lili one of the heroines? If not, forget it.

I feel pretty good. Chapter 23 Jing Meng really shocked me. I feel Chapter 23 is really well written. Boring, tasteless, and a pity to abandon. I don't know why I just can't get interested in reading. The first 50 chapters are okay, but the further I go, the less interested I am.

It's very good-looking, not too bad at all, and you can watch it as a martial arts movie in the early stages. The emotional transition with the heroine is pretty good, but the certification of the heroine is a bit hard to explain [face-covering][face-covering][face-covering]

Accelerate, accelerate, accelerate, fast forward to Haixuan, who has spread all over the sects, why are you so plain in the back [angry]

I've just read a dozen chapters and it feels like a game style. Is there no sequel to the protagonist being assassinated in his own sect?

Not bad, not bad, not bad. It's very interesting. The writing is to my liking. I can't fault the plot. It's just that not many people are watching it. I hope I can continue to watch it.

It's a very good-looking and novel fantasy novel. The game style and the cultivation of immortality are well integrated. Although the plot is a bit confusing in some places, the overall flaws are not concealed. Recommended for those who like relaxing, sweet stories, games, and otherworldly stories.

It's a fairy tale, one of the few that doesn't look drowsy, I like the setting of reading books all night, it's sexy but not pornographic. First class setting

It's a very good novel. The description of the battle is very detailed. It's a bit of a torment for tomatoes. The strategy is not very profound but it is logically consistent and very reasonable. It's an advantage in terms of emotions. It's written very delicately and relatively naturally.

The evaluation is, I didn't skip chapters

Able to see, not brainless, with education and training [adoration][adoration][adoration]

Good for you, well written 👍