Fellow Time Traveler: Why Can You Be Admired by Thousands of People?

The first good review, I'll do it myself [shy]! I like to play with abstraction [awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh]

The setting is quite novel, and the writing is not bad. The good thing is that the female characters who appear next to the protagonist are as vigilant as ever. They will not believe it from the beginning, unlike some Long Aotian novels where they believe the women who come to them out of nowhere. The bad thing is that many of the villains in it are women. Although they are all killed later, I still want to have more male villains, not just women.

While you are adding new things, you can learn from the original book about Trolls, where blood and wars, all races fighting for hegemony, heroes rising together, the protagonist stands out, and the most important thing is that the author writes boldly.

Overall, it's okay. I hope the protagonist won't be merciful to the mermaid in the end. After understanding the whole story, I just feel that I really deserve to be unable to leave the water after the second level.

Yan Yuan is your subordinate, not your brother. . .

111. Why can't I see my comments?

It's beautiful, everyone comes

It looks good, are there any other similar themes?

Give a good review. The book is gone. I wrote hundreds of comments about how lonely it is here. [Laughing][laughing][laughing] It feels good to see this place, please give me some comments, don't give it up.

Nothing to say, come on

18,000 People read it, why are there only these few comments? When I saw the mermaid, I thought it was a female supporting character, but then I sent it directly.

That's interesting, why is the rating so low?

I think it's okay, but why is the rating so low?

It's okay. Some aspects still need to be corrected.

It's a bit interesting, let's take a look

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I'm very excited, the author, please give me a lot of encouragement

I like to read books about lords, but I don't know how to write reviews, so I get good reviews [face covering]

This book has clear logical thinking and is well written. The author's writing style is also relatively good, and the characters are also distinctive and distinctive, but it is a bit too short.

Very nice book, super good

Fortunately, the settings are integrated in a novel way. Sometimes the pace feels too fast There are a lot of things that were skipped before they were written. The world view is huge, and there are still many things that need to be paved.

Very good, considered as food and fodder

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

I like books with ideas

It's okay to read Chapter 90

The writing is very good, but the upgrade speed is a little faster. Are you worried about writing more than 2 million?

The plot and theme are really good, but for my taste, there are many places where the sentences don't make sense and there are typos. It would be better if they could be corrected.

Very pretty, don't be a eunuch

Not bad, the lord becomes stronger article