Dou Long Yi: the Light in the Dark

This fanfic is about Dragon Fighter 1. A dragon fighter named Xu Mo and his baby Long Nanyu entered the world of dragon fights 4 years ago in the animation and influenced the subsequent plot. My book review is published in Chapter 12 of Volume 2 so far. The pace of this book in the early stages is rather hasty and feels a bit too plot-heavy. Next, the author's writing level improved significantly, and there is no longer any poisonous spots. I think the most distinctive feature of this novel is that the author has very good control over the characters in the animation, and the character dialogue and behavioral design are very consistent. Short name: Very emotional. The main style of the current novel is lighthearted and warm. The author is also very attentive to this book and is willing to listen to readers' feedback.

The writing in big letters is really good. It fits the character very well and is not embarrassing. There is no forced emotional line. Xu Mo and Nan Yu are both very good and loving. But can Xu Mo really not be cured? It's so sad. In order to protect, the damage is irreversible. Don't do it (;´༎ຶД༎ຶ`) Xu Mo and Nan Yu should always be together (;´༎ຶД༎ຶ`) What you write in DaDa is true and awesome. It is the best one in Doulong. DaDaDa is really awesome. Come on, DaDa. It's really beautiful. I wish DaDa will write more works and all of them will be good-looking. Come on! ٩(◦`꒳´◦)۶ The big letters are really beautiful! It's really great! But sir, when will you update? It's been a long time since I updated

It's very interesting, I already wanted to read more after reading a few chapters. Moreover, the author is very nice, often responds to comments, and has many cute emoticons; most importantly, the author's writing style is very good! The characters created are vivid and vivid, and there are many characterizations. Everyone's character is shaped very well! Even if you throw away who said it, you can still feel who said it! This is a very good group portrait article, highly recommended! ! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Wow, wow, wow, the author of this book is not only very good in writing, but also gentle and interesting. He will answer every reader's questions seriously (there are so many cute emoticons! I can't even take them all). The content of the article is natural and smooth, and the logic is clear. It's great! Come on, author! ! !

It's very beautiful, with lots of details. The setting of the protagonist is very full, and the insertion of the protagonist does not feel inconsistent with the original work (Is this really the first time for the author to write a book [thinking])) The light beam of responsibility matches the character of the protagonist very well. It is the first time I watch Dou Yiyi to see such a good thing [laughs]

The writing is great, especially the author of the original plot is very powerful and can write so much. This is the best Douyi I have ever seen. Because I have been diving in this book, I rarely post comments. The author's writing is really good! (◍•ᴗ•◍)

It's good to read, and it's rare to see Dou Longyi's novel (≧▽≦)

Well, I think the writing is okay, at least it's good among the dragon fighting articles I've read, and it's also a rare fighting one. I can support it (≧∇≦)/

The writing is good. I wish there were more original character plots. I really like this character [Adoration]

The characters are well developed

This book is worth reading

It feels good, everything

There are relatively few original character perspectives

Overall it's okay, just look back at it as a childhood memory

The writing is very good and the story is very warm. The dragon warrior and the baby dragon are both cute. There are really very few novels about Dou 1 on Tomato. Thank you to the author for writing such a beautiful novel [Sending Hearts]

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That's right, it's me, I'm here again! I have to say that when I opened the chapter and found Su Xia, I was confused, but I still insisted on reading! LoveKeep going, baby~

Will there be a second generation later?

I just want to say, I don't know other people's thoughts, I only know my own, and I just love to see him

Xu Xia, Su Xia, (Qi Xia) [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] The author writes well

A rare piece of pure non-movie-watching, non-soul-transporting, non-system writing. I ate so much that I was so grateful that I burst into tears [crying]. I am already a fan of Xu Mo and Nan Yu. The reliable brother is so good——[shy]

The plot is clear, the characters are fleshed out, and it's super good-looking.

It's great to watch. It adds the daily life between the twelve-star dragon and the baby dragon that was missing at the end of the anime.

It looks good, it looks good, the protagonist has a full personality, and the writing is also good, so can't you really do ten chapters a day ❤❤❤QwQ

Super nice. It tells the story of Dou Yi.

The author writes really well, perfect childhood memoriesヾ(´∀｀.ヾ)

It's rare for someone like Dou Yi to support me with 5 stars. The writing is okay, but I feel it's a little lacking. Will the author update it?

It's really good-looking. I don't know why the rating is so low. The main character's style is very warm. He is a big brother-next-door type of protagonist. He is very gentle. The protagonists and the fighting dragon are very cute.