My World: the Road to Immortality in All Realms

(Superior + Medium) 9-1 points, mark,,,,,, Modifying the character is unnecessary, the subject matter is well chosen, the writing is average, the overall quality is good, the details are average, the plug-in design is good, and the character of the protagonist is standardized. ─────────────────── Rating of the novel: ①Shangshang (a good book that suits my taste very well, unexpectedly excellent, five stars/10 points+) ②Superior (recognized as a good book by everyone, more than 1,000 updates, five stars/9-10 points) ③Shang Xia (① A good book with rigorous and self-consistent logic, ② A good book that does not meet your taste, five stars/8-9 points) ④Above average (a good book in the conventional sense, no special features, five stars/7-8 points) ⑤Medium (the reading experience is disappointing, far from expectations, difficult to objectively evaluate, ① three stars x points, ② minus one point) ⑥Mid-to-lower (a work with average performance, no outstanding highlights, and no major problems, ①three stars/5-6 points, ②four-stars/6-7 points) ⑦Xiashang (a novel with major flaws, but there are still some merits, ① one star/1~2 points, ②three stars/3~4 points) ⑧Inferior (a novel that reads as boring as chicken ribs, has no appeal, and cannot bring reading pleasure, two stars/0 points) ⑨Xiaxia (a book with good writing but distorted views, harmful content, seriously affecting the reading experience, two stars/-1~-10)

Well, it feels like a very good book. The design is very good in all aspects, and it is of satisfactory and high quality. The current gimmick is not as attractive as the previous Back Room, but it is okay. The theme of cultivating immortals, well, there are not many novels that can be written with new ideas, so I am more optimistic about Zhutian. The character design of Zhutian, especially Lao Huang, is very warm and just right, without being a stallion or a sudden clown. In terms of plot, there will not be any plot that particularly deceives the protagonist, or operations that force the combat power. I'm still optimistic about this one. It's the third MC Huang's book in a row. It feels like there has been a lot of progress. The first one I read was about the collapse of combat power or the chaos of the world. The second one, The Back Room, is already of excellent quality. I'm still quite optimistic about the third one. I would also like to raise a point of concern here. Currently, Lao Huang's basic base is MC. This is already his third MC novel in a row. I don't know how long this kind of creativity can last. But benevolence sees benevolence and wisdom sees wisdom. This book has just begun, and you can look forward to the next plot. I was bullied by a bunch of people when I made suggestions before. No, if you think my suggestions are not good, you shouldn't just scold me directly. Let me put it here, if you have an opinion on my evaluation, you are right. The internet is like this, but I don't read the replies anymore.

The quality of Lao Huang is as stable as ever. The protagonists are still the Yang brothers. 3 To 5 chapters are updated every day, which is relatively large among all authors. The protagonist's golden finger is a fusion of MC and 7-Day Kill, with MC accounting for the majority. The first time he traveled directly to Uncle Jiu's world, he became a disciple of Uncle Jiu, the Saint Master of All Realms. Later, when I was digging a basement to plant things, I accidentally traveled to a different world through the ladder going down. And can be accessed via a ladder. Now the plot reaches the point where the protagonist discovers A Chinese Ghost Story, a world where gods and Buddhas have disappeared and order has collapsed. Then he took a bunch of people from Maoshan, including the fairies in the sky and the gods in the underworld, to conquer the world, which is in progress. The plot is very interesting. Highly recommended.

I found that I like watching Yang Tao but don't like watching Yang Bo [face covering] It's probably because Yang Tao's plot is mainly based on the MC main world before he starts to radiate to all the worlds, while Yang Bo only enters the world and uses his MC ability. The difference in perception makes me uninterested. But Lao Huang still wrote very well [love] [like]

Invincible is cool, so far it has no bad points, it's just a bit short, just like the author.

It's good, but the setting of Seven Days to Kill is hard to understand for those who have never played it. Especially the skill book, which has a bone in the front. I flipped through it for a long time and couldn't figure out where it was. Later, after combining the context, I found out that it was a branch of the skill tree.

It's great. So far, Huang's book is the best MC text in Tomato. If you don't agree, please give me a chestnut and I'll take a look. . What are you doing? . I finally saved up for several days, but in the end there were only a dozen chapters, not enough to read, not enough at all. . Hurry up and post a thousand and eight hundred chapters. . Speed. . . I have read through your books two or three times, and there is a shortage of books @ Mou's Persistence

[Laughing] It's pretty good, both in terms of writing and plot. However, the prejudice in people's hearts is a big mountain. When most people have this prejudice, "private goods" is an axiom. Silence is the limit, and it would be inappropriate to say more. There are many books in my bookshelf now but I am just too lazy to delete them. After the awareness is established, you will see that these are all tasteless. Even boredom. That's it! That's it!

He always looked good when he was old.

Lao Huang is really persistent. Two days ago, he replenished the first two books of Lao Huang's "Love, Hate, and Enmity" between the two brothers Yang Bo and Yang Tao. It can be seen that Lao Huang's writing is getting better and better, and his personality is getting better and better. At that time, I was very diligent in updating, because the disadvantage was that there were many people who were hasty and careless about the data, but now I don't have this problem. I have built a fan base and my writing skills have improved. The one in the back room was the first old pornographic book I bought. What is the number of Yang Bo now? The 18th or something. Anyway, all in all, the more you write, the better!

Good looking I have read 4 of Lao Huang's books. I finished reading the other two books completely and read them on another account. Happy Lantern Festival to all my pretty boys and girls! Remember to eat glutinous rice balls

It's quite interesting. The beginning of Uncle Jiu's World. In the later part of the plot, Maoshan, whether he is an immortal in heaven or an official in the underworld, are all pulled out by the protagonist to shine [laughing] [laughing] Later, he goes to other worlds, receives the underworld of A Chinese Ghost Story, and moves all Maoshan's uncles to occupy the land [laughing] There are other worlds, almost all of them are immortals, fantasy, martial arts, fairy swords and the like. It's beautiful, that's it. In the later period, there is Cthulhu or Cthulhu. That thing is so hard to read. Fortunately, I haven't written about that world for too long. It's so weird that my head hurts from reading it. Overall, it's a good read. I still have a hundred chapters left to finish it. I won't read it for now, so as not to run out of books. Lao Huang, Lao Huang, please hurry up and write a new book. I will update a million words a day [laughing] and I will be able to read new books [laughing] [laughing]

It's pretty good, what should I say? This book is actually quite satisfactory, although there are a lot of worlds in the back that are too complicated. I only wrote a little bit and then changed the world, and I felt that the combat power increased too quickly. This book is still worth reading and deserves a five-star rating on Tomato. I can give you 80 out of 100 points. It is not easy to write a book, but I suggest the author not to overwhelm it. For example, in the world of tomb robbers, there is basically no follow-up after writing the beginning. The whole world is covered in one stroke, and I just saw this and don't know what will happen next. The previous article is actually pretty good.

Personally, I feel that it is very well written and enjoyable. I have followed more than 300 chapters from the first chapter, but there is one thing: is Journey to the West a bit too much? I don't know if I've watched it too much, but it's not as good as the previous ones. I hope the author won't write Journey to the West again. It's too boring. Instead, write about other anime worlds, even if that anime world is weaker and can't help the protagonist. Although the protagonist doesn't have a harem, he can have fun [smile]

The writing is very good, but the updates are not very powerful. Who can read it if only three or four updates a day are enough? Can you imitate others who update hundreds of times a day?

Suddenly I discovered that I like to read all Lao Huang's books. This new book is very good. It's the familiar Wanjie, but a different world. In short, Peripheral Goode [Like]

It's very good. MC's writing is getting more and more interesting. There is a female protagonist, but there are not many emotional scenes. At first, I thought it was all a mess of emotional lines, so I gave up on it once. Just skip it in the next one or two chapters when writing about daily life. The female protagonist has few opportunities to appear, and they are all dealt with. Except for the back room in the previous book, there are more offspring to tie up. I still hope to maintain this rhythm. Just have a bunch of tool men and beautiful girls to mess around. It is better to maintain this rhythm. Just don't write too many emotional lines, and don't suddenly create another offspring. I still hope that the heroine will not be written, and the protagonist can be more romantic.

The characteristics of Lao Huang MC's classic Wanjie will not be weakened! Not weakened! It's good-looking and it's old Huang

Novel subject matter: Combining Uncle Jiu's movies with online literary elements such as Zhutian Infinite Streaming and System Streaming to create a unique Uncle Jiu fanfic that evokes readers' memories of classic Hong Kong films2. The setting is interesting: the protagonist either travels through time or is reborn, possesses various cheats, such as systems, spaces, special abilities, etc., And slays demons and demons, practices and upgrades in the world of Uncle Jiu. The plot has ups and downs and is full of imagination3. Distinctive characters: The protagonists have different personalities, some are decisive in killing, some are witty and cunning, some are sentimental and righteous, and the supporting characters are also outstanding, such as Uncle Jiu's masters and apprentices, various monsters, monsters, etc., The images are vivid and impressive1. Compact plot: Some works have reasonable plots, fast pace, and wonderful copy design. They reproduce classic scenes from Jiu Shu's movies and add original plots to give readers a sense of freshness2.

Lao Huang's new book is so valuable that everyone can understand it

It's good to watch, but there are a lot of worlds, and each world has no ending. The protagonist has not forgotten Uncle Jiu, and will think of his master when there are good things, and even takes the master away. The little world likes Doupo and Tang Seng. Tang Seng stood up. Unfortunately, he could not live up to Tathagata or Qing in the end.

Rating(superior) Personal feelings: I love reading it. The jokes are so interesting. The writing style 🖊️looks like someone who has written several books. Objective evaluation, if you have different opinions, you can evaluate by yourself 1. Internet article rating (1) Shangshang (a good book that suits my taste very well, unexpectedly excellent) (2) Superior (recognized as a good book by everyone, the number of updates exceeds 1,000 (3) Shang Xia (good books with rigorous and self-consistent logic, good books that do not suit your taste) (4) Above average (a good book in the conventional sense, no special features) (5) Middle-to-lower (a work with average performance, no outstanding highlights, and no major problems) (6) Xia Shang (a novel with major flaws, but there are still some merits) (7) Xiaxia (a book with good writing but distorted views, harmful content, seriously affecting the reading experience, and making people physically uncomfortable) (8) Medium (the reading experience is disappointing, far from expected, personal experience) (9) Inferior (novel that is unattractive to read, no evaluation) 2. Evaluation of online articles (1) Based on the evaluation of the first nine items, additional points may be deducted for other items. (2) Sense of immersion: interlocking, rapid resonance, and immersion (3) Plug-in: cheat settings (4) Setting: world background, training system... (5) Writing style and detailed description: standardized and smooth, with appropriate style (6) Rhythm and overall description: relaxation and suspense setting (7) Imagination·Plot expansion: Surprisingly innovative and self-consistent logic (8) Character design·Main characters: three-dimensional and full, growth and changes (9) Main line·Close to the center: clear and attractive (10) Logic: plot logic, detail logic (11) Extra deduction points: data, economy, structure, three perspectives, supporting roles, time, geography, knowledge...

The protagonist's experience in Uncle Jiu's world is written in humorous language, and the MC skills are diversified. The protagonist is still very powerful. However, the new world and new events advance too fast, losing the story of the new world and becoming just a background for a week-long tour. Then there is the confusion of combat power. This is also the shortcoming of Zhutianliu. Generally speaking, Lao Huang is still the best storyteller. Five-star praise.

The writing is superb. This is the first novel I have read from beginning to end in one go on Tomato with more than 500 chapters. Normally, if I read other novels, I will easily get bored if they are longer. I want to change to other genres, but not this one. The plot is fascinating. Although I have never played the game Minecraft, it does not affect my reading at all [I learned it] [I learned it] [I learned it] The most important thing is that the author has good writing skills [Like] [Like] [Like]

It's very good. The plot is very exciting. It allows Yi Xiaochuan and Gao Yao to swap their lives and stab the Western saints to death, as well as the ancestors of Maoshan. However, the content of each world is a bit lacking and not enough to watch. You can finish the plot of each world. I am a collector and a fun person. It is so exciting.

It's good-looking, and the male protagonist is particularly realistic. When I first found this book, it was like I suddenly saw a piece of jade in a pile of essays and wanted to see a warm house on the snow-capped mountains. It was such a surprise. It can be summed up in two words, beautiful

The whole book is quite interesting and I feel like I can keep writing it. I felt a little uncomfortable in some places while reading it. There were a few paragraphs in the middle that were dull and a little uncomfortable at the end. Where are there a few other places where two employees are recruited? I can't accept this kind of plot where the spirit of the tomb robber has revived and the official wants to hire you. I also feel that the protagonist is too upright. I don't really like this kind of protagonist. I still prefer the villain. The protagonist seems to be easy to talk to. There are some places where I feel more uncomfortable. There is a rural miracle doctor. There is also the feeling of wanting to hire you. The part where you traveled through the world of immortality and then came back and went to college and then the army asked you to be an instructor. Who said it wasn't written like this, but you know if you read novels, you can think about a lot of the plot after listening to just one paragraph. It's okay. I'm still listening [laughing]

Lao Huang said that he personally expressed great praise, and his writing style is as brilliant as ever. He is trying to read all of Lao Huang's books.

Core item: Lao Huang. What? Are you saying that Lao Huang is not the author? That's true, but it's also unlikely. I can only say that Lao Huang is old [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly] Okay, here's my review. Classic outfit: MC➕Do not suppress➕Wanjie. MC is Lao Huang's strike zone, and Yang Tao was very good in the last book. This book combines MC with cultivating immortals (Nine Uncles), and the world view is different from the previous one. This book does not focus on the personality and rules of MC itself, but combines them with cultivating immortals. I feel that it is trying to change a new idea, with MC as a supplement and spells as the main focus. But MC's own rules are still too supermodel. So it can still be regarded as Lao Huang's usual cool writing style. By the way, the seven-day killing system is also sewn into it, but it looks very cool. I can give it an above-average rating.

Huang's book is as good as ever, with novel themes and good writing. It is considered one of the better ones among the astronomical books. At the end, it also picks up the previous ones and serves as a link between the past and the next in the entire series. I hope to continue to work hard.