After Awakening, He Refused to Be the Second Senior Brother Who Was an Injustice in Cultivating Immortals.

It's nice to watch, but I have a small suggestion (a little bit🤏), don't make all the female supporting characters vicious. The male characters in it are all different, and the ones that focus more on are the protagonists. There are very few female characters, except for his mother, who is quite flamboyant and protective. And the villains, except for Long Aotian, who doesn't have a role at the moment, are vicious. Female supporting characters, vicious female supporting characters, can actually create some vicious male supporting characters. The female cultivator has always been jealous of the protagonist and is a bit tired of hurting the protagonist all the time. It's okay to have some male cultivators [to send my heart], (∀) (most women are actually admirers of strength rather than jealous of it) and create some female characters with three-dimensional characters. All vicious female characters are very...

This article! ! ! ! ! So cool! ! ! ! ! At first, I thought it would be the kind of story where the original heroine had her luck stolen and had to be careful at all times. But the author wrote it so well. If the original heroine had good things, the protagonist would have even better ones. Some things also affected the original heroine's chances. The supporting characters were not too brainless. It was really good-looking!

Really enjoyed this one. There are many double male protagonists on Tomato who are soft and waxy. They are just like changing the gender of the heroine in romance novels. (I don't mean to insult women here) Those novels focus on appearance description, such as small faces, which makes me physically uncomfortable. But the appearance, plot and plot of this novel are all well connected, so you won't feel bored while reading it. (Personal perception) Moreover, this shou is not very strong at the beginning, it is not a brainless cool novel, it is upgraded step by step, and then leads to success. It has a process, unlike some novels where the shou is very powerful after rebirth or time travel, and then the attack becomes even more powerful. This book contains fighting, daily life, upgrades, romance, and some introductions to the story background or situations. I think this is a very nice novel. It's worth seeing. Looking forward to what comes next.

It's good-looking, but it's too little. I'll sit down and update it. I really like it. In fact, to be honest, the relationship line can also be pushed forward a little. Don't misunderstand me. When I say push, I don't mean to get them together immediately. After all, feelings are accumulated bit by bit. We can do it bit by bit. Otherwise, being together will be too sudden. Even if it is because of closely related life lines, it is not reasonable. What is the difference between that and forced? To be honest, if you really don't add a little bit, it will feel very abrupt. I came in because of the two male protagonists. If you want to read cool articles, just mark them without female protagonists. It doesn't mean that you have to rush to the limit, especially fast, but what I want to express is that you have to accumulate bit by bit, you There should be a little bit of increase in the process of experience. What I feel now is that once there is a paragraph, there is no increase at all, and there is a big paragraph after another. Anyway, there is no accumulation bit by bit. Some people say that if you like watching romantic movies, you can go to see Love Line. Why do you dislike it here? But damn, this is a double male protagonist. When I came to the first place, I just wanted to see the love line, but I found that besides the love line, the plot and other plots are also more interesting. But what I want to express is that the love line should be arranged in a reasonable way and accumulated bit by bit, not completely. No, otherwise you don't have that kind of love line in a large part of your middle. Suddenly there is a part where you come to engage in that love line, and it feels weird (those who criticize me have no mothers). There is no need to criticize me. I am giving advice. Of course, it doesn't matter if you don't listen. If you can criticize me objectively, don't come.

It's very interesting, and the plot rhythm is very good☺️Also, after reading so many articles, the protagonist can only feel the love from blood relatives with his mother or mother's relatives. I can only say that my father is really useless most of the time🙃

It's very good, the plot is not draggy and it goes with the flow, and the protagonist is not a coward and can be scolded at will. Another male protagonist appears in Chapter 36 (finally released). I highly recommend it. The descriptions of other characters are also quite cute. I especially like the dragon. He is cute and straightforward. I also like the protagonist. He is cool and cold but very cute in relationships, whether it is with friends. The Taoist couples are still dumb but very serious. The overall article is relatively relaxing to read. The fighting and killing is not very tiring or too bloody. It is suitable for reading when relaxing. There are many desperate straight men in the comment area. I suggest the author add a sentence at the beginning or in the introduction to prevent accidental entry. They are very desperate and wailing hahahahaha. They are as desperate as I was when I knocked on CP.

It can almost be regarded as a micro-group portrait novel without CP images. The concept of the world line is very broad and deep. There is also a lot of content. One opportunity and one secret realm are intertwined. The writing style is also good. ⚠️If you like to watch cp, you can avoid lightning. I have read 512 chapters and cp has not been together for more than 20 chapters. Almost none. If there are people, there are very few. Many of them are about the two sides missing each other and meeting each other. It is almost like a lover missing. It makes people want to see the next development, but it is also very unbearable. There is no feeling of two men at all. It's very strange that there is CP but there is almost no writing. If there is only a little bit of writing, it feels like the two male protagonists are hanging in front of you and you continue to read. It is equal to Chapter 512. The only place where you can see the two male protagonists is the little bit where the two become Taoist couples. ❗️If you like to watch without cp, you can watch it. You only need to skip a little bit and it will not affect the rest of the article. At least the first 512 chapters are like this.

At first, I thought this book was the same as other rebirth stories. It was a slap in the face + doting on the attacker + being robbed of opportunities + making progress all the way + sweet, greasy, and mean life. But the result was completely different. This book is a bit like a group portrait. Just the fact that multiple novels and humanistic versions of Long Aotian gathered together in this book to compete with each other for luck is better than other rebirth stories with fixed routines and no new ideas. It's a big improvement. Secondly, the emotional line between the male protagonists does not occupy most of the plot. The plot is still a little more career-oriented, and the plot supplements are also perfect. There is no cliché plot in other novels where you fall in love at first sight after seeing the love and being attracted by some magical operation that is different from others. Then, the plot is not embarrassing, and there is no situation where I need to skip many chapters to avoid embarrassment. Highly recommended, it is a breath of fresh air in the rebirth world. It is the only novel that I can rarely read and follow up. (Everyone has different thoughts and different choices of reading articles. My words only represent my personal opinions and views.)

The writing of the article is delicate and the characters are vivid and lifelike. The vivid three-dimensionality attracts people's imagination, and there is nothing too angry or aggrieved. The plots are intertwined and the suspense is just right. Every time I feel bored, I just jump to another perspective without being abrupt and just right every time. It's a group portrait, and there aren't many love scenes, but it's still the finishing touch, and there will be no misunderstandings. Very sweet. Sometimes it seems like there is no emotional line, although it doesn't have much impact. But I also hope to see sweet love [laughing][laughing][shy]

It's so cool! ! ! I thought he was the type who pretends to be a pig and eats the tiger, and is careful to use his strength in the later stage, but I didn't expect that the protagonist will just do it when he encounters trouble, and take revenge on the spot! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

This is so good for kids. It's so cool and it slaps everyone in the face. I've always wanted to read this type of article and finally found it today ❤️

After watching it for a while, it was pretty good. There is basically no poison. The emotional description is indeed delicate and thoughtful, and the logic is not broken. The author must be a good hand at writing female videos. I feel that Ji has been around for too long, and the world of immortality is not so stable. At first, I just thought that men and women can redeem each other. In Qiu, there will be gentle Taoists who like me, and they will become stronger together like best friends and brothers. I really didn't expect to become a Taoist couple. Of course, it may also be a curiosity. I can't stand it if I have a normal sexual orientation. I resigned. Good luck.

The plot is very interesting. Qiuqiu is really beautiful and strong in force. He has taken back everything that was taken away and he is a character who does not suffer any loss. If someone wants to kill him, he will kill him back. I really love it! When thinking of Ji Xueying, she will remember that in modern times, she had a beautiful family and parents who doted on her. She was once a pure and harmless girl. However, after traveling through time and being favored by heaven, her smooth life amplified her greed and made her selfish. She was bewitched by Su Ling'er and did many bad things. The tragic ending was her own fault.

It's very interesting, but the other protagonist has shown up now. I want to see them fall in love [Blow a kiss] [Please update]

It's really good to read. I found this book in a book shortage. The plot is not too boring, and the love is not too sweet. (It feels like a career-type person who is also in love) It is really one of the few novels that I feel comfortable reading. I loved this book so much, but it was a little short and I accidentally finished it. [Shy][shy]

It's very good-looking. Unlike most of the two-male protagonists, there are relatively few emotional lines. I like the main immortal group portrait very much. This kind of very sensible and youthful atmosphere will not get too entangled with the father, junior sisters and brothers mentioned above. They are just passers-by in the autumn and autumn, like passing clouds.

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Overall, it's pretty good, but there is a part in the middle that's really embarrassing to watch. That's the emotional scene, which is not very well written and a little awkward. The rest is pretty good, and the plot is also very interesting.

The protagonist setting is very strong. Although it is not invincible at the beginning, it is still invincible in the same realm from the beginning. If you like reading cool stories, you can give it a try. I personally don't like it very much. If you want to control it, you can read it. I feel that the two sides are not very equal in my current opinion. I feel a little bit cold. I feel that this book will be better if it has no CP or the emotional line is better described. I think that the setting of love disaster in this article should be as long as the other party does not die. The author only said that in the story line where they did not fall in love, the death of one party will soon follow the death of the other party. It did not explain that the death of one party was caused by the lack of love. So I don't think Leng starts to be so enthusiastic about the person he is in love with, and due to the large gap in cultivation between the two parties, I think normally they should be like Qin Shu at the beginning of the book, and then they start to fall in love slowly. The progress of the love line in this book is a bit fast in my eyes. There are also some "straight men" I met while reading the book. I would like to say that the double male protagonists indicate that the main characters are two boys. The label "double male protagonists" does not indicate whether it is love or friendship. It is okay for those straight men to think that the two male protagonists are good brothers. It is just because they don't know that this is a female video. To add, I think Leng Xingyun should have appeared when Qiu Heng was about to die, or try to avoid the problem of Qiu Heng's death in the beginning. I think the author should add to this part of the setting why Leng Xingyun was so enthusiastic. Could it be that he fell in love at first sight with a minor who he had never met. I will continue to read this book, hoping that my questions will be answered in the following chapters. I have read Chapter 148 so far. I hope that in the future, I or others will give me answers.

I like it very much, the plot is not draggy at all

It's quite interesting and exciting. It's like a combination of male and female videos, taking their advantages. I just hope that this style can be maintained in the future and not be unfinished. Come on and update! There are only four stars because I feel that it doesn't have that amazing feeling that makes people shine.

It's really good to watch, it's good to watch, it's good to watch, because it's a plot, because I feel that there are very few emotional lines, more emotional lines, more emotional lines, please. It's really good to watch. I hope they both love each other, dote on each other, like each other.

It's so good-looking. The protagonist's name is so nice and normal. I like to call him Qiuqiu~ Hehe, and there are many normal people. They are not all happy, but they are really not aggrieved. On the contrary, the villain has a lot of funny moves, and the comment section is full of comments. While watching it, I often laugh and gloat, etc. I continue to look forward to the next Qiuqiu~ I also like the character of Qiuqiu's future Taoist monk. They are so perfect for each other! The author is great, no kidding, one person writes in blood, please update 800 chapters a day🙈[Sending heart][Admiration][Blowing kiss]

The writing is good and very interesting, but I always thought that the two male protagonists told the story from the perspective of the two protagonists. I didn't expect that the two male protagonists were in love. After discovering this setting, I was immediately confused. Who would have thought that I was on the wrong channel [face covering] [face covering] [face covering]

I still gave it five stars, but I want to say that I really felt that there were too few scenes. It was really just a background, not as good as the dragon. Moreover, I feel that the personality is a bit thin and not particularly three-dimensional. For example, when Qiu's family members call him Qiu, I feel that they are more affectionate, but I don't know why it seems to be incidental when I come here. Maybe I am sensitive, and in terms of getting along with each other, I feel that they and Qiu have a sense of life. , Gradually, we have established a good relationship step by step, but it feels like we are just talking about love, and there are not many life-oriented things, such as NPCs coming to check in and be a good partner, and I feel that I am not tired of him at every critical moment. It is really like a long-distance relationship, haha, all relying on a "mobile phone". Although it is said that the world of cultivators cannot be together all the time, I feel that there is no interaction in dozens of chapters, which is very hard for me. Sometimes I feel that I don't care (I am sensitive). I hope to see them fighting monsters and interacting together later. Haha, this seems to be the first book I have read in which the main characters do not fight monsters and level up together. I said there is something missing. Wow, the author is begging you, can you not fight monsters with Long and the others every time? I want to see the protagonists together. Please.

This book is really good. It contains Qiu Heng, and sometimes the contrast is particularly good. The character is very obvious. The structure of the book is very good, and the suspense is kept just right.

The subject matter is quite new, and the description of the protagonist is quite good. The protagonist does not have the heart of the Virgin or anything like that. The author's writing is still very good, but the writing style is a little bit off, and it looks a bit dizzy, but from your point of view it is still very good, the characters are quite distinctive, and the descriptions in all aspects are also quite good.

It looks good. It would be better if the emotional line could be detailed a little more about how Leng fell in love with Qiu. The early stage was very bland and I felt that Leng's "onslaught" after coming out of the tower was a bit sudden. It's weird, but the flaws are not hidden. The plot is great and the upgrade line is very attractive to me.

It's a super interesting novel, please update it more often😊! Give the protagonist more protagonist aura➕Goldfinger➕luck. (🈶A perfect ending) (Sweet love story about two male protagonists who don't abuse each other [sending my heart])

Nice! ! ! I really like Qiu Heng, so cute [Adore][Adore][Adore][Admiration] The little sword spirit is also so interesting [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]