Damn It, I'm the Girl Next Door to Brother La

Currently, I am following Brother CP/CB, whichever one is very interesting. This is one of the most eye-catching God of War fan works I have read in a long time. Both the logic and the emotional lines are just right. The writing style is natural. There is a display of "brotherhood" in the book. It is basically pure love💕💕. The use of original characters is also just right. The author is the type who likes to interact with book friends. He is a very, very good author. I really appreciate it. What stood out to me the most was that the character Yun He did not blindly follow the rhythm of the original protagonist, nor did he rely on "predicting the plot" to gain a sense of presence or make drastic changes to the original work. Even with the system, Goldfinger drives very restrainedly, not at all abrupt, and feels very comfortable. On the contrary, Yunhe himself has become the real protagonist - he has his own intelligence and methods, his own story and bonds, and the high-spirited, frivolous and energetic young man is vividly written. The descriptions of some daily fragments are also very life-like, relaxed and natural, and the reading is particularly immersive. All in all, this is a really great fan work! I am already looking forward to the author Baobao writing original works in the future. If I have time, I will come and produce food for Brother Yun Hela. The writing is really touching! I like it very much!

Nice! The writing is also good, and the protagonist Zhao Yunhe's character feels very three-dimensional, which is great! Good news: the characters are three-dimensional and the designs are great. Bad news: Because the character is so three-dimensional, I don't want him to be trapped in a fanfic. I feel that he deserves a brand new book. The fanfic feels like it's a bit restrictive to him. Anyway, the character design is very exciting. I haven't seen such a cool protagonist in a long time. In terms of the emotional line, it's okay to say that the cp is dragging the brother, or it's okay to say that there is no cp [thinking] It's quite exciting, hehe:-P

It's so good-looking, so cute, I really like Yunhe's character, he must be a low-ranking one😃😘

I particularly like the sweet interaction between Yun He and Brother Drag. This is the only protagonist I know of who not everyone loves yet. It's not part of the official version, it's really, really beautiful! ! ! ₍₍٩( ᐛ )۶₎₎♪

It's so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, I like it, I like it, I really like the character of the male protagonist, and I also like the author's original plot. It's very interesting. Yunhe and Brother Yan are fighting each other, and I like the relationship between them. But when will we go further? Brother Yan is definitely on the left. I've seen more than 120 pictures. When can they really be together? I thought they would really kiss in that picture. I'm going crazy. I think the setting of the relationship between Apollo and the male protagonist is quite interesting and a bit exciting, but I still very much hope that there will be no knife. Our little lovers are happy together. I hope that our Yunhe will soon become stronger. I also hope that with Yunhe, the endings for us Wang Mian, Zhou Ping and others can be better. The author is really great! Keep up the good work and don't interrupt the update. Please use more brewing and less glass slag.

Author, your writing is really great, no OOC, but I have a question, are Brother Yan and Zhao Yunhe's relationship lines brothers or lovers? [What] Please reply please [crying][crying][crying] I originally came here for the two male protagonists. The author's writing is really delicate and he has shaped the protagonist's character very well. The same goes for other characters. I have read this for more than 60 chapters and it has not collapsed. Even the minor supporting characters are very vivid. It's just that the presence of the system is super low in the later stage, and the protagonist's upgrade is relatively slow, but it's still very good-looking (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡. It's very fun to watch, especially the protagonist who is very accurate with guns. I really like this setting! I hope it will be a two-male protagonist. After all, Brother Drag has such a strong sense of presence that he kisses both of them every time. Hope it comes true [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]!

It's really good-looking, the protagonist doesn't have so many hangups, he has a growth process, and the emotional line is also very interesting. So can you please update ten chapters to scare me? ૮₍ɵ̷ɵ̷̥̥᷅₎ა, But it seems that you haven't been feeling well recently. You should pay attention to your health. It doesn't matter if you update after your health recovers.

It's even, delicious. There are many original plots and new ideas. The writing is smooth, the characterization is very lovable, and the protagonist is so cute, I just love it. The system feels like a legacy left by oneself, such as myself in the last reincarnation. Because it is very kind, there is also a feeling of hatred that iron cannot be made into steel. It feels like killing the mystery to extract power and restore it, and when the time comes, the Dragon King will return to his throne! Everyone's relationship development is also very smooth, and there are no inexplicable and endless love-loving plots for the time being. The author promised me to write ten chapters a day, okay? I'm in a hurry (climb into the author's draft box). But after seeing the author's picture, I realized that Xiaohe is born with this Parisian dyeing version of black and pink gradient. Is he born with it? It would save money. Parisian dyeing is valuable ()

It's really well written, and it's by far the best I've read among all the God-Slayer fanfics. It didn't feel awkward. The plot is very natural. It's a little bit cool and a little bit sad, but it's not boring. The protagonist's personality is also very touching, and Cp is super hospitable and polite [adoration][adoration][adoration]

Super handsome boss! [Admiration] I am looking forward to the second volume. To be honest, I have read it before. I have read this book on the homepage a long time ago, but the rating was too low at that time. In addition, the fanfics of Zhanshen at that time either had explosive plots or poor writing, so I ran away after seeing the ratings. I feel very regretful now [palms face], but I don't seem to regret it that much, because I don't have to wait for the update after just watching a little bit. Anyway, I have read Chapter 180 [Blowing Kiss]. I hope the boss will update it well. If there is really a love line... I am really looking forward to it (actually, this is the point)

So pretty! ! ! It's definitely the one I've read, so it's on the top of the list of God-killing fanfics! The plot is explosive, there's no OOC, and the writing is amazing! It's not the kind of tycoon, it's systematic but very short, the growth style is not exaggerated, it's fun and comfortable to read, the characters are full, amazing!!! The emotional line is a super bonus! Love me so much! The author should update quickly, there are too few, don't stop updating (づ ●─● )づ

It's really good to watch ^ω^ Although I came in to watch it because the title sounded like it had two male protagonists. Later I found out that it seemed to be a male video, but Brother Shen and Yun He were really good at fighting each other. As for some plots, I really enjoyed watching it. The protagonist is also very strong and very smart (which means smarter [laughs] ][Laughs][Laughs][Laughs] I haven't read the original work, only the comics and anime. This one has a lot of original plots, which are really interesting. And then there's the plot where I'm really looking forward to Yun He and Brother Shen meeting again hhhhhhhhhhhhh. I want to see the two of them kiss. Kiss[laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][shy][shy][shy][shy]Finally, I hope the author has a good rest and does not need to rush to update. After he has rest, he will update us with better content.

It looks good. Although it is a fanfic, it feels like a new work to me. The modifications and additions in every place are very good and will not make people feel abrupt. It is not the kind of traditional fanfic that keeps cheating and everything goes smoothly. Every character gives me a good feeling. The protagonist has his own ideas and is not a good person from beginning to end. Also, although the author said that the emotional line between the protagonist and Brother Drag does not have much to describe, but I still like this kind of letting nature take its course. Every place reveals a touch of sweetness. It is the type of fan fiction that I like. I highly recommend [Shy][Shy]

This book is completely different from the title. At first I thought it was a heartthrob type, but later I found out that it was not the relationship between the two of them. It was so slow, and many other plots were added, and it did not completely follow the same line. It had its own line. It was good-looking. This feels like the best fanfic I have ever read.

Very good, very good. This is the best emotional line I have read in all the God-Slayer fanfics. In some of them, I don't even want to say anything. I use the character as a leather jacket😶. I hope I can grasp the character's personality and not collapse. I don't know if there will be more than one of the God Ruins. I actually don't want to read one that is too big. I feel like one or two is about the same. If there are more, I feel like it will collapse.

It's so good, and the combat power is not broken. I've read a lot of God of War fanfics. The protagonist is invincible at the beginning, or becomes invincible later on, and then kicks the protagonist, punches the gods, and then becomes invincible. Then they start talking about the emotional line, or splitting up the official version or something. It's great. I like this kind of story that neither destroys the combat power nor the official version. Come on! I want to like it a lot

The content is interesting and not as general as other books. Although there are a lot of changes, it feels good. I don't know why the rating is so low, but I really recommend it. I didn't want to read it until I was halfway through it, but this one is really good. The author has a lot of imagination. There are also some funny passages. It feels like a new book. Most of the characters have not been mentioned in the original book. There is also a very close relationship with Brother Yan.

It must be two male protagonists!!! I beg you! This is one of the best books in my bookshelf! I beg you two male protagonists!

It's good-looking, it's a growth story, the protagonist is not invincible from the beginning, it's very good-looking

It's really good-looking, with a smooth plot and very distinct character traits. It's much better than the God-Slaying fanfics I've read before (I'm not saying other God-Slaying fanfics are not good, it's just based on the ones I've read before). Although the emotional line between Commander He and Brother Yan is not reflected in the article, it is still very enjoyable. And it was a really enjoyable book to read along the way. The author did not say before that this was a dual-male protagonist. I initially read it as a male comic novel, but as I read it, I fell in love with the two of them, Military Master He and Brother Yan. The author also clearly stated at the end of the first volume that he would write about emotional lines, but at the moment, the main focus is on the plot line. Let's talk about the plot, it does not blindly follow the plot line of the original work. It just adds some training camp training that does not appear in the original work without affecting the original plot line, and integrates them with the original work very well. And the second volume has added a lot of original content of his own, as well as some things about the gods, and the brother of Military Master He Chuanqian, Sleepless, also appeared in the article, and the author also said that Sleepless played a very important role in Volume 2 (no spoilers, you can read the rest for yourself, it is really very interesting) Some people may not understand why the author did not arrange for He Military Advisor to rescue Zhao Kongcheng. The author also gave a response, and Cangnan Shen Zhan He Military Advisor and Brother Drag did a very great thing. You can go and see it. (No, I don't know what to say. I have never written such a long book review. I used to give 5-star reviews directly, and then there was no comment or anything. This is the first review of this book to be so long. The main reason is that the author's writing is so beautiful) (After the author finishes writing the second volume, I will come back to supplement the book review.)

Personally, I feel pretty good, but there are some places that make people want to skip over them quickly, which is a bit boring. But the emotional line is advanced very well, so naturally, Zhuhe is the best! ! I just don't know what kind of Shura field Apollo, Brother He and Shen Qingzhu will be in the future. Hehe, look forward to it.

I really like the protagonist in this book. His character is also very unique and contradictory. Yunhe grew up surrounded by love in his new life. He is kind and smart. But when Yunhe recalls the past, he feels that the whole person is very bad and rotten. These contradictions have created Yunhe. Yunhe has begun to have blood, spirit, and flesh. He really likes Yunhe. This is the third number to chase Yunhe.

The author really wrote a somewhat meaty Zhao Yunhe! I really like it, but it's already tied 💕 I hope there will be more updates [crying][crying][crying] Little pearls really dropped when I secretly got married with Shen Qingzhu on my back. Several times I thought it was An Qingyu's medicine that would be effective. It would be great if Brother Yan could wake up. I hope Brother Yan would know later. Everything Yunhe did, [crying] [crying] [crying] I really feel sorry for Yunhe, every time he demeans himself to set off Qingzhu, he himself is obviously very kind at heart. I have read the novel for many years and this is the first time I write a book review [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] I hope the author will give you a lot of support [send heartfelt] [send heartfelt]

Not bad, the protagonist's god is quite attractive to me, I just hope that Yunhe's second skill will appear soon. I am also looking forward to the story of Brother Shen and Military Advisor He, and the subsequent plot.

It's really good-looking, but this was supposed to be a two-male protagonist, right? A bit like Shuangwen. Hope it won't be interrupted. [Eat melon]

It's a fairy tale, the characters are great, two straight men fall in love with each other, the group portraits are passionate, the characters are three-dimensional, the writing is not awkward, the plot is not completely according to the original work, the author added some of his own ingenious plots, and some self-created characters, the excitement is comparable to the original work, it will definitely not be a loss to invest in it!

I can't handle it. Author Da Da, you are so awesome. It's so good. I can't read other books at all now. I'm so obsessed with it that I directly read the chapters updated by the author Da Da over and over again. It's not enough. More, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, please🙏

As the two accounts are chasing updates together, I can only say that the matter is over Zhuhe99 He is really a very vivid character. Everyone who has read it has fallen in love with Brother He🥰🥰You can feel the high-spirited and real emotions between the lines. There is a feeling that the plot line and the emotional line are blended together, which is really comfortable. Moreover, the author did not deliberately write the emotional line. It was a friend who said "how do you write more and more gay" did the author react. After all, the author is mostly a man (?) This is the first time I've fallen in love with an original character, and I'm looking forward to the follow-up development.

The author's idea is quite good. I basically thought about some of the content before. It is a relatively innovative fanfic. The content is just not readable enough, I hope the author will work hard to update it.

Zhao Yunhe has such a good personality. He is very charming. Shen Qingzhu did not go undercover, and there were no vicissitudes later. He is still a high-spirited young man. And if he flirts with Zhao Yunhe in return, he is also very easy to flirt with.