A Lolita Fan? No, No, She's Just a Lolita

I have read many chapters. The author's descriptions and writing style are excellent. It can be said that he has captured a lot of warm little details. From the initial unfamiliarity to the later familiarity, the coquettish transition is natural. It is worthy of praise. It feels like falling in love with a sweet and soft little loli. It is quite good as a daily sweet article. But only daily sweet articles Having said the advantages, here are some disadvantages. First of all, the logical connection is too far-fetched and can even be said to be illogical. Especially when the time loop begins, it makes people uncomfortable to watch. Secondly, the slavery at the beginning made me feel a little disconnected from the world view. It is very biased that slavery in the agricultural era will still exist in the future federation where rationality and human rights are paramount. Then there is the issue of worldview. Although it is a federal tag, the description in the article is hard not to bring people into a medieval perspective. To sum up, aren't the people who read this novel just those miscellaneous lolita fans who want to fall in love with sweet and soft little lolita? Even though there are many flaws, I will still give a score of 7.5. I hope that the author can abandon time travel, power struggles and so on in future updates, and only need to describe the happy daily life of the male protagonist and little Aurora (personally, I prefer the cheerful and cute Aurora at the end) That's not right, I just found out that it's over. Then I hope the author can write a pure daily sweet story in the next one. Come on, Loli Saigao!

It's okay, but it's just too short. The style of painting changes suddenly in the later part, and the author's writing style is not good. He is a new author after all, but the later part focuses on the plot of little Aurora (Rolin), which creates an inexplicable sense of separation from the previous part. I also hope to see better writing style in the author's next work. Come on, lolicon author!

It's very interesting. Good luck to the author. It's not poisonous and has a single female protagonist.

It's a good read. I highly recommend the author. Come on.