[Two Female Leads] + [Adventure] + [Plot-Driven] (Damn, what else can I add?) As you can see, this is an adventure novel with a weird title, all because the author had a meltdown. I originally wanted to call it Notes from an AI Girl and a Sword Maiden (that sounds even weirder).
I'm a new writer, so I'd love to hear your opinions, like how to fix my crappy synopsis.
In this world of swords and magic, every sword houses a sword spirit. When the wielder and the spirit become one in mind, they can unleash the sword's full power.
"That means you have to become one with me in mind to use me properly. Get it?"
"Establishing optimal attack route. Coordinate system complete. Planning actions. Beginning action..."
"Huh? How did you..." The sword spirit was on the verge of tears. Why did this girl understand its own body even better than it did?
She only had to look at someone once to learn their swordsmanship. It was hard to believe... Wait, why was that hard to believe? She was its master, after all!
A girl of unknown identity and a sword spirit longing to be impressive. Together, one girl and one sword will stir up a storm across this otherworldly continent.
Nice!!! However, in the last few chapters, the characters' speeches have been a bit confusing and jumpy.
It's really great to watch. The ideas, writing style, plot and content are really great.