HP Transsexual Peter's Self-Help Guide

When I reviewed Chapter 71 Shanshan, I felt that the writing of this book was very poignant to me. The heroine is not the kind of girl who shines brightly from the beginning. She is a thunderous start to those who are interested in beauty. However, if you ignore these, you will see the sparkling character of the heroine. Whether it is her straightforwardness to everyone, or her resistance to all kinds of unfair treatment and never giving up on herself, it makes people feel that everything she gets is a reward she has earned. Unlike previous HP novels where the main character is good-looking and has a good family background, by lowering the heroine's appearance, we can see the value of personality, and those loves become more precious. It's not that you don't deserve friends if you're not good-looking. Although this is a world based on appearance, there will always be people who will be friends with you because of your personality. It's really not easy to persist in exercising. It's a frustration that can't be expressed in words even after dieting so hard in two months and only losing 10 pounds. I also lost 40 pounds and learned to dress myself up before I felt the benefits of beauty. I deeply agree with the heroine's words that I will be happy when I look in the mirror, but I still admire the protagonist's personality and optimism. I really like the heroine who is as warm as a little sun. She has a sense of self-improvement. I will continue to follow this book. The author's writing style is also pretty good! Come on, update soon! Sirius, the male protagonist of other generations, lacks the sharpness and arrogance highlighted in other articles, and has a lot more warmth and freedom unique to Gryffindor. When the protagonist is isolated and helpless, the young master comes to her and uses jokes to dispel her initial uneasiness when she comes here. The sun shining on Sirius's back also dissipates the female protagonist's confusion, so it is really good that the author magnifies his advantages. Slytherin and Gryffindor each have their own strengths and weaknesses, and there is no way to classify them into the same type. Although Slytherin is arrogant, he is also arrogant and cute, Hufflepuff's friendship is also warm and touching, Ravenclaw is not just a group of nerds. Their tacit understanding and unity in playing Quidditch is touching even if they lose. Gryffindor (the school where the protagonist stays) is reckless but straightforward and sincere. The author's use of Quidditch as an anchor not only allowed me to see the charm of this sport, but also the unique youthful spirit of each team member. It's pretty good. The article poked me very hard [Love] No one's character is blank. Everyone shines in their own field. It would be a big loss if the article was abandoned because the heroine didn't have a perfect start [laughing]

Two words - curiosity. It is recommended not to pay too much attention to the appearance of the heroine when reading (the first dozens of chapters). Please also ask the author to make the heroine more beautiful quickly. Please! ! ! Huanghu~The heroine becomes more beautiful in Chapter 73! The days are getting more and more promising [blowing kiss]

I like Travers' line very much. Their college teams are rivals, but among all the players, he can see Petra's excellent skills and efforts the most. He knows that everyone underestimates her when others don't, and he is proud of her when she amazes everyone. I was attracted by Petra's skills and soul even before she lost weight. She is both a friend and foe. She is really a good person.

It's really beautiful! ! I'm not that interested in Quidditch in Harry Potter, but your writing is really good. The more I read it, the more interesting it becomes! The rendering of the entire game scene and the descriptions of various moves are particularly vivid! 💪🏻 Moreover, the characters are especially created with the high-spirited flavor of teenagers. The heroine is also a very tough person. She is very different from the heroines presented by most HP fans. It feels very novel to watch! Moreover, the process of the protagonist's own transformation and the transformation of others towards her does not feel too stiff when watching it. Anyway, it is very beautiful and suits my taste! ! ^ ^ Hope to see the finale of this book! I will always support you! 💪🏻💪🏻

It's beautiful. I just love watching the [shy] heroine play Quidditch. It doesn't matter if she looks ordinary. Her charisma when playing will conquer others. Support Travers and Lupin!

This book is really beautiful! ! ! The passage where the heroine is playing Quidditch is straight out of a hot-blooded teenage comic! The interaction between Travers (not sure if this line exists yet) and the heroine is really cute, and the heroine didn't become prettier when he had a crush on her. There is a section in the middle where Slytherin is good at missing the one he loves. If the male protagonist was him, it would feel a bit be. All in all, I highly recommend this book, it's superb! My wife's writing is excellent! This is the best pro-generation article I have ever read!

Looks good! The counterattack was very fast. From the beginning, the dark and vicious James Poison Wei (?) Transformed into a Quidditch master. The heroine used her own strength to shut up those who despised her and completely transformed; she will get better and better in the future. I like reading this kind of cool article [laughs] Keep up the good work, author [blowing kiss]

Apart from anything else, I didn't expect that when I read HP fan fiction, I felt like I was watching a passionate competitive sports show... To be honest, I have always had an indifferent attitude when reading the original work or occasionally mentioning it in the fan fiction, and I couldn't get the competitiveness and fun of it at all... But the description in this article really fills in some gaps W. All in all, it's pretty good, and some shortcomings can be ignored.

This book is very good, and the emotional line is well written. If you like watching Quidditch, it will be helpful. I have never seen such a good female-driven novel about Quidditch. But in the early stage, when the heroine first time traveled and became Peter Pettigrew, it was a bit bad (?), But in Chapter 70, the buff on the heroine was eliminated and it became better. And it's really good to watch. If you like watching Quidditch, don't miss it. The Quidditch match scenes were very well written. I'm looking forward to the Quidditch World Cup More than 200 chapters are really not enough (biting the handkerchief and crying)

It's really great. I was attracted to it at first by the setting of Peter's sexual transformation. As I read on slowly, I realized that the protagonist is very charming, and her hard work and unyielding courage make her more and more popular among everyone. Later, I also forgot about the setting of gender reversal. She was Petra and she was Li Xiao. The passion of Quidditch and the sweetness of daily interactions fascinated me deeply, especially the battle of sister Bao to clear her name. I was deeply in love, and I couldn't help but cheer for my sister, she did it! [Blowing a kiss][Blowing a kiss] But what followed was the "accidental" exit and outline explanation that was drawn to the end. On the one hand, I wanted to catch up on reading to see their interaction, and on the other hand, I was anxious about searching for how many unread chapters were left. Just like the potion of love makes people addicted, I want to spend more time with my sister, I want to watch her playing Quidditch more, I want to see more of her interaction with the predators and Lily. It's a pity that sister Bao's story is still going on, but we can no longer accompany her from the perspective of bystanders. Where we can't see, she is still transforming into a cheetah and rushing to score goals, still worrying about the endless spells homework, and still discussing with Lily whether to go to the library this weekend or Honeydukes to buy desserts. He was also still laughing and joking with James and Sirius. I hope that Mei Bao can live a life of his own, and I also hope that the author who created Mei Bao will live a happy life and be productive and produce food. (Ps: I saw that the author is writing a new protagonist in the child era. Can I wait until the book is finished to update the younger sister? Just looking at the outline, I feel that there are a lot of exciting contents that have not been written. Wadaxi, Wadasi can get gifts [cry][cry][cry]

Did you hear the author? ! ! ! ! Don't favor one over the other, everyone! All! Want! Have! Point! Knot! Game! ! ! ! ! It can be said that it is very beautiful. The writing of the sports is very enjoyable, and the character design is also very interesting. John Jack, etc., In short, it is very interesting and beautiful [laughs]

Merlin! It looks so good. Oh my god. I admit that I didn't want to watch this setting when I first saw it. The appearance of the heroine is "not outstanding", including the fact that I don't like watching movies from the pro-age period, and the rating is not high. Note: I think this rating is low! ! ! Continuing, the character setting in it is very good. The heroine is really a little sun. She is very hot-blooded in the early stage. She was mistaken for Voldemort's illegitimate daughter in the later stage and she also made good use of this aspect. Hahahahahaha. I just saw the heroine "capture" Lestrange. Oh my God, the dank smell came over right away. And, I like Travers, hahahahahahahaha. He is tough-talking. The settings of John and William are also very good! And Lily, Mary, Betty, wow~ Girls' friendship is the best~ The shortcoming is that the updates are not complete, more updates, quick updates, gogogo~

This is a great book. The heroine is exactly what I want to be. She accepts her own ordinaryness and grows up step by step. I really like the sincere friendship written by the author. The whole book is relaxed and interesting, and the competition is very exciting. If my sister wins, they will be happy together.

It's the most enjoyable HP article I've ever read! ! ! Feng Aotian is the heroine of the sports department, and the CP is Quidditch. (Although I currently like Slytherin's Xiaote and Ravenclaw's robot brother)

Definitely an underrated HP fanfic. Before reading it, I heard others say that there were some flaws in the beginning. Pedra is not good-looking, but later on she became very beautiful through her own efforts. In fact, it is not a highlight for me. The heroine is very sincere and hard-working, and she also puts a lot of enthusiasm and sweat into the sports she likes. Very enjoyable to watch

It's super good to read. I admit that I didn't like the loudness before, but this book is really good to read. If it wasn't hot, I would think the tomatoes 🍅 were overheating.

Super pretty! ! ! The plot is novel and interesting, and the characters are very vivid and three-dimensional. I have already fallen in love with my parents [blowing kiss] (big cheers to the author! The writing is superb, I look forward to it every day [shy]~)

Hahaha, that's enough. I've posted two long reviews but they didn't pass. Are you so sensitive? [Laughs] [laughs] I can't say. Anyway, it's very good-looking and exceeded my expectations. Even most of the competitions are so well written. If it had been for other games, I might have skipped it. . . Come on, my dear, many people will definitely like this book.

It looks good, I look forward to Petra beating everyone on the field [shy][shy] urge for more updates [shy][shy]

A super cool sports show! I like school life so much! Super pretty! Five stars! Ten stars! Ten stars praise!

It's quite interesting, and the most important thing is that the author has created several distinctive original characters (Ravenclaw of "Data Tennis", the gentle and kind Captain Hufflepuff, and Slytherin who loves his enemies). Very charming (ω< )★

The writing is so good, I play basketball and watch Harry Potter, and finally I got a copy of it. The competitive plot is vivid and contagious, and the emotional line is handled particularly well. I can't describe my feelings in words. In short, the author, please continue writing, I will keep up for more updates [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

It's awkward, but it's really fun. It's a classic. Many of the plots don't look too familiar. I want to steal the castle and laugh at the same time. New friends are welcome to try it. You will definitely lose your mind and the fun will skyrocket.

I really couldn't accept the appearance at first, but I think the author wrote it very well. It's really interesting if you continue reading. I hope the author will update it soon.

It's awkward to be brainless, but it's really fun! ! ! ! It's suitable to watch when you're relaxing, but there are too few of them. The writing is getting better and better! It's really good-looking. The heroine works hard to make progress. I really like it. She's very positive. HP fans should have some healthy and uplifting content. Personally, I think this kind of theme is quite rare among Tomato HP fans.

Good looking! So passionate! The heroine's personality is so charming!

It's so good to watch, I stayed up late to tie it, and the theme of Peter's sexual transformation + Quidditch star is particularly novel. I feel that the author usually likes watching sports games, otherwise how could he write such a wonderful game plot. I particularly like the tenacity of the heroine. Even when the world begins to collapse, she does not complain about others, but honestly upgrades and changes her fate. Although the plot has only reached the end of the fourth grade season, my expectations for the single if line are already full. When will Jack of Beauxbatons appear?

It can be seen that the author has devoted a lot of love to the heroine in his novel. There are many highlight moments of the heroine that I love to watch, especially her performance in the Quidditch match. At that moment, I really felt that she has a perseverance and unyielding energy to move forward in the luminous heroine. Even when I get hit, I don't give up but work harder. I don't feel sad because of other people's words. The heroine is really attractive to me and I like her personality very much. I think there are people with this kind of personality in reality who wouldn't like it. Flamboyant and enthusiastic

Who knew that the author had quit after reading the penultimate article [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying] It's obviously very good! The initial setting written in the last chapter is also very attractive! Why [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

It's a very good novel. Madam, please pick up the pen and continue writing. I look forward to spreading flowers when the book is finished. I'll leave it to you after that! ∧＿∧ (゜Д゜) / つ つ ~(＿⌒ヽ(⌒( )ノ`J≡≡(⌒;;≡ (⌒(⌒;;