[Travel to before the Demon God War] [One cup of light daily + two spoons of fighting pleasure] [True power (power derived from Bengtie)] [Female protagonist: Xianyun + (currently single, considering whether to add more)]
If you don't want to write an introduction, just throw in a panel (updated at any time)
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[Name]: Qing'an (Single Karabi/True Demon God)
[Power]: [True Self]
[Derivative powers]: [Guard], [Remember], [Changle], [Eternal]
[Strength]: Four Shadows
[Personality]: detachment
[Talent]: Excellent in all martial arts, control the power of seven elements, unify all methods,...
[Methods/Skills]: Immortal magic, elemental power, Taoism, hundreds of schools of thought (Confucianism, Mohism, Taoism, Dharma, Ming, Yin and Yang), swordsmanship, chess skills (main function, sealing skills, etc.), Medical skills (small success)...
[Equipment]: Whatever, Tianlu Xuanqiongjian (magical weapon), Guizang Taisu Wufeng (sword), Wanxiang Guiyuan Yi (bow), Hunyuandong Xuanshu (gun)
[Rare Treasures]: Cave Heaven, Jade Seal of Immortal Lord, Soul Crown, Brilliant Uncut Diamond ×n, Light Cone ×n, Di'e, Green Jade...
This book was once titled "Original God: The Leisurely Life of Immortal Lord Liyue"
"I was in the original god, and was picked up by Xianyun at the beginning"
(Anything that personally feels does not conform to the setting will be regarded as the author's private setting)
Reader comments
The mountains are covered with light clouds, the sky is covered with fading grass, and the sound of the horns cutting off the Qiao gate. Suspension of the expedition, chatting together to lead away from respect. How many old events in Penglai can only be looked back in vain, filled with mist. Outside the setting sun, there are thousands of jackdaws, and flowing water surrounds the isolated village.
At this moment of ecstasy, the sachet is secretly dissolved, and the belt is lightly divided. He won the brothel but survived in name only. When will we see you here? There are traces of crying on the sleeves. From the injured place, Gaocheng can be seen, and the lights are already dusk.
——Qin Guan Man Tingfang
Since there is no long comment, let me make the first long comment!
The character setting is very interesting. Although it is the true power, it really appeared relatively late. It gave rise to some types of Honkai Impact, such as the power to protect memories. The calligraphy has some aspects of traditional culture, and I feel that the author wanted everything but was a little unsure about it. However, the panel I made with Alicia later was very useful in sorting out these, at least it was much clearer.
The setting of the portable cave is also quite interesting. The library meets my vision for a library, but I don't seem to have much to write about later. I suggest you give this a try!
The content of the article is mainly about daily writing, but the battle chapter is also very enjoyable to watch. Tianli is not a big boss and seems to belong to the friendly camp. Also, in the early stage, Gui Zhong and A Ping were acceptable, but the author still changed it later. There are no other poisonous points. Although the score is not high, it is still acceptable!
Although the writing was not very smooth in the early stage, you can indeed see some progress from the author later on.
All I can say is keep working hard and don't stop updating. Although the rating is low, I look forward to the follow-up!
It feels very good, I like this style, cheers for the author!
The characters are vivid, non-toxic and harmless. The author is good at liberal arts. I can trust the author's writing skills [I learned it]
Hao Kan, Taiwan Hao Kan
Send me a follow-up review
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
This novel is still very good and quite interesting. Come on, author, don't stop updating! ! !
It feels good, looking forward to the follow-up
Very exciting, keep creating
Good-looking (◍>◡<◍), no poisonous spots,
Full marks, very well written [laughing]
Come on, keep it up
I feel like very few people have read this book.
I don't have any good literary talent, so I can only say that this article is countless times better than 4.8 Xiahuo [Thinking][Thinking]
Not to mention too much, it's just very generous.
I just realized I didn't comment, but it's really beautiful
Must support, good plot development
Good article, no obvious poisonous points
Does this book have a female protagonist?
It's pretty good-looking, but shouldn't Zhong Li and Guizhi be a couple?
Very good [admiration], please support me!
It's a good-looking package. Good luck to the author.
It's interesting, I like to see it [shy]
The plot is quite good
I don't feel well at all [smile] Just look at it and it'll be gone [smile]
Is this a change in the introduction? If I remember correctly, it used to be about Xianyun and Daci Shuwang as the two main characters, but now Egoria looks like the heroine [what]
The mountains are covered with light clouds, the sky is covered with fading grass, and the sound of the horns cutting off the Qiao gate. Suspension of the expedition, chatting together to lead away from respect. How many old events in Penglai can only be looked back in vain, filled with mist. Outside the setting sun, there are thousands of jackdaws, and flowing water surrounds the isolated village. At this moment of ecstasy, the sachet is secretly dissolved, and the belt is lightly divided. He won the brothel but survived in name only. When will we see you here? There are traces of crying on the sleeves. From the injured place, Gaocheng can be seen, and the lights are already dusk. ——Qin Guan Man Tingfang
Since there is no long comment, let me make the first long comment! The character setting is very interesting. Although it is the true power, it really appeared relatively late. It gave rise to some types of Honkai Impact, such as the power to protect memories. The calligraphy has some aspects of traditional culture, and I feel that the author wanted everything but was a little unsure about it. However, the panel I made with Alicia later was very useful in sorting out these, at least it was much clearer. The setting of the portable cave is also quite interesting. The library meets my vision for a library, but I don't seem to have much to write about later. I suggest you give this a try! The content of the article is mainly about daily writing, but the battle chapter is also very enjoyable to watch. Tianli is not a big boss and seems to belong to the friendly camp. Also, in the early stage, Gui Zhong and A Ping were acceptable, but the author still changed it later. There are no other poisonous points. Although the score is not high, it is still acceptable! Although the writing was not very smooth in the early stage, you can indeed see some progress from the author later on. All I can say is keep working hard and don't stop updating. Although the rating is low, I look forward to the follow-up!
It feels very good, I like this style, cheers for the author!
The characters are vivid, non-toxic and harmless. The author is good at liberal arts. I can trust the author's writing skills [I learned it]
Hao Kan, Taiwan Hao Kan Send me a follow-up review
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
This novel is still very good and quite interesting. Come on, author, don't stop updating! ! !
It feels good, looking forward to the follow-up
Very exciting, keep creating
Good-looking (◍>◡<◍), no poisonous spots,
Full marks, very well written [laughing]
Come on, keep it up
I feel like very few people have read this book.
I don't have any good literary talent, so I can only say that this article is countless times better than 4.8 Xiahuo [Thinking][Thinking]
Not to mention too much, it's just very generous.
I just realized I didn't comment, but it's really beautiful
Must support, good plot development
Good article, no obvious poisonous points
Does this book have a female protagonist?
It's pretty good-looking, but shouldn't Zhong Li and Guizhi be a couple?
Very good [admiration], please support me!
It's a good-looking package. Good luck to the author.
It's interesting, I like to see it [shy]
The plot is quite good
I don't feel well at all [smile] Just look at it and it'll be gone [smile]
Is this a change in the introduction? If I remember correctly, it used to be about Xianyun and Daci Shuwang as the two main characters, but now Egoria looks like the heroine [what]
The content is very good
You can write well, come on
Beautiful and interesting
The plot is good, keep up the good work.