[Fire Dragon & Neutron Star Bond] + [Medium Fire CP] + [Gyro Personification Writing] + [Hot-Blooded Combat Style]
(Source of inspiration: Super Yehaojun, the up owner of Station B, explains the "Super Hot-Blooded Beyblade Competition")
Reborn in the world of tops, I became an explosive armor battle top.
I don't remember what I was called in my previous life, what I experienced, and why I was reborn.
But in the world of tops, I have a resounding new name, the league's number one attacker—Fire Dragon!
Neutron Star: "It turns out... Dragons really can fly!"
Cuishen: "Red-headed boy, let's retire and form the strongest team."
Storm: "Fire Dragon, I will definitely defeat you in the next game!"
Firefly: "Master Fire Dragon, just accept me, this light and cute disciple~"
Black King Kong: "Fight the fire dragon! After the upgrade, I am indestructible~~!"
Fire Dragon: "I am born for competition and fight for glory!"
Reader comments
Come for the Fire Dragon Neutron Star!
After reading a few chapters, the writing is really good! [Read carefully] However, the author recommends that you add some daily plots or other battle plots when writing. Otherwise, if you directly describe the plot of the top eight battles, there is a high probability that the writing will not last long. At present, if there are less than eight pictures, it will already be the second session.
You can find some fan stories from the comment area of the video and add them to it, which will make it more interesting. You can also add some special rules. For example, the previous champion can directly participate in the quarterfinals, or you can start over. This can make the plot unexpected and flexible.
Then there is no need to start from the basics. You can create an original plot for the top 16, but for newcomers like Black King Kong and Firefly, you can give some plot points from the novice competition, and then smoothly transition to the top eight.
Furthermore, most readers have watched the video and know the results clearly. Although they will still be emotional, it should not be too big after all. Adding some original plots or daily life or battles will make the pace of this book better. The current pace is too fast.
In fact, I think that most of the readers who come to watch are more concerned about the daily interactions between Fire Dragon and the others outside the game, thinking about their disputes, talking and laughing, playing around... These plots will always make people smile.
Just like the short fan stories below the video, the relationships and personalities of the characters are actually already clear. Just make some slight changes, but it is not recommended to add romance plots, even if I cough about fire dragons and neutron stars... [Smile] [smile] [smile] Ahem, after all, those plots are not suitable for these.
Of course, the above are all my suggestions. What you wrote, author, is really good! Come on! Come early to the 80,000 Words spot, recommended!
Well, that's it for now, I'll add more later when I think of it.
It's a good thing that I didn't read enough of Jun Top Luo so I came to Tomato to search for books. Before I read it, I thought it was just bad food. But after reading it, I didn't think so. You really know how to write [laughs]
The author's writing style is still very good. I finished two sessions in less than 10 chapters at the beginning. I thought it would be fast-paced. However, looking at it, the third session has obviously slowed down, and a lot of details have been written, as well as some other original plots. But one thing I hope is that the results of the competition should be written strictly according to the results in the video. Never change a certain result because of some personal reasons. As for other aspects, the author's writing skills can be appropriately used. According to the current progress, 10 sessions + the final battle is enough for the author to write about 50-1 million words. I believe that anyone who likes this series will definitely fall in love with the author's writing style. As for the CP, I am still disappointed that I can write a mid-fire CP. In fact, Firefly can also have a secondary CP with others. It depends on the author's imagination. Come on, try to update to the final battle, the chapter of the fire dragon becoming a god.
There is no need to wear any colored glasses, the Gyro Contest itself is an excellent script, and even the characters are preset. The author only needs to bring in the world view and fill in the stories outside the competition. This is a relatively easy subject compared to original novels. I hope the author can maintain his status and not stop updating.
Sister Crystal's setting is great!
Finally we see the eldest lady of Neutron Star on the stage, looking forward to her interaction with the fire dragon! ! !
Come on, author! ! !
I strongly request the CP of Neutron Star and Fire Dragon. Fire Dragon and Firefly are not impossible, but it seems that Firefly is not that interesting.
It's still very interesting, but according to the original plot progress, there is too little that can be written. I hope to add more small theaters, or stories about individual tops, which can be enriched. For example, spinners within the top eight can tell certain stories. Finally, I hope the author will get better and better
The battle scenes are rich and the characters' emotions are delicately portrayed. At the same time, it also has a funny side, which keeps people from being bored, makes people ignited, and makes them laugh. There is no such thing as those "one-of-a-kind" high combat effectiveness. The story of the fire dragon and the neutron star is very exciting and talented! Nice!
It's a very good fan book. Please hurry up and publish it for me. I can't wait to fight the fire dragon and the neutron star [eating melon]
Okay, okay, I look forward to the fifth Fire Dragon returning to win the championship.
My personal feeling is that from a top person to a top, each top is different, divided by attributes, here are a few examples (personal feeling)
Fire Dragon: Wrapped in flames, then transformed into a top
The Goddess of Emerald, turned into little green light spots, turned into a top
Storm: Create a tornado covering itself at its own location, and it will turn into a gyro tornado and disappear.
I imagine the top player to be humanoid, with shoulder armor that symbolizes an attack ring, similar to the Mingguang Armor, and clothes of their own color. During the game, the player hits the chest to summon tops and other accessories. The shoulder armor detaches from the body and transforms into an attack ring that merges into a complete top. The main body then becomes a launcher to launch the top. After being launched, it turns into light particles in the air and enters the top, becoming an elf-like existence.
Hope it helps with imagining battles. It may not be what everyone imagines, thank you.
I love it so much, I love watching it, but I don't know when the next season will be released by Yehaojun, who is a monthly watcher?
The writing is very good, and I seem to have the same passion as when I started reading novels.
Although our subject matter is niche, I still hope that this book has a beginning and an end. It would be better if it were longer and it would be perfect [Like]
Very good, although I haven't read the original work. But I like to watch it
All I can say is that it's great. No need to say more. Come on, author, I'll finish it more [crying]
It's great to see such a passionate top team playing Marseille again. I just didn't watch enough of the video. [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] Neutron Star Fire Dragon Two of my favorite tops.
Now that Firefly has won the championship in the latest season, Laohei still maintains the character of only losing to the champion. It's just that Neutron Star was eliminated in the first game, and Fire Dragon was gone if he wasn't in good condition.
Very interesting top novel
In addition, it will take a long time for various small theaters to retire until the fire dragon is retired.
I'm successful and recommended. Come on, author.
Because the author writes very seriously. It's not that empty-handed writing style. So I want to give you some advice. I hope the author can take a look.
One is that the current battle scenes are more realistic. Although I have tried my best to write it, it still feels a bit dry. I suggest that the author can add some fantasy elements. The battle scene can be gradually upgraded. It also looks better this way.
The second is that you don't have to be too demanding about being the same as the original video. Although I don't quite understand it now. But since the author has added the element of time travel. Then it shouldn't be exactly the same as the result in the original world. Some of the more important fateful battles can still be written as they were originally written, but considering logic, the results of some games can also be adjusted appropriately.
The third one is my personal hobby. Open a harem Open a harem. Whether it's a neutron star or a firefly, whether it's a girl transforming into a green god, a girl transforming into a storm, or a girl transforming into obsidian. Everyone can enter the harem. (
I hope the author can write better and better.
Awesome! I didn't expect that a book would actually be published. It is still the most popular CP that I want to see [laughing]
Not bad, quite restored
I've always wanted to read it, it's very well written!
How shameless! [Praise]
Marvelous! I like
Yes, I like fire dragons very much.
The requirements are not too high, it would be great if it can be completed
Do you know that only those who have watched the game will know the value of this book?
Great book! I hope the author will stick to it and finish it.
Not only because of the sentiment, but also because it is indeed a good story
Come for the Fire Dragon Neutron Star! After reading a few chapters, the writing is really good! [Read carefully] However, the author recommends that you add some daily plots or other battle plots when writing. Otherwise, if you directly describe the plot of the top eight battles, there is a high probability that the writing will not last long. At present, if there are less than eight pictures, it will already be the second session. You can find some fan stories from the comment area of the video and add them to it, which will make it more interesting. You can also add some special rules. For example, the previous champion can directly participate in the quarterfinals, or you can start over. This can make the plot unexpected and flexible. Then there is no need to start from the basics. You can create an original plot for the top 16, but for newcomers like Black King Kong and Firefly, you can give some plot points from the novice competition, and then smoothly transition to the top eight. Furthermore, most readers have watched the video and know the results clearly. Although they will still be emotional, it should not be too big after all. Adding some original plots or daily life or battles will make the pace of this book better. The current pace is too fast. In fact, I think that most of the readers who come to watch are more concerned about the daily interactions between Fire Dragon and the others outside the game, thinking about their disputes, talking and laughing, playing around... These plots will always make people smile. Just like the short fan stories below the video, the relationships and personalities of the characters are actually already clear. Just make some slight changes, but it is not recommended to add romance plots, even if I cough about fire dragons and neutron stars... [Smile] [smile] [smile] Ahem, after all, those plots are not suitable for these. Of course, the above are all my suggestions. What you wrote, author, is really good! Come on! Come early to the 80,000 Words spot, recommended! Well, that's it for now, I'll add more later when I think of it.
It's a good thing that I didn't read enough of Jun Top Luo so I came to Tomato to search for books. Before I read it, I thought it was just bad food. But after reading it, I didn't think so. You really know how to write [laughs]
The author's writing style is still very good. I finished two sessions in less than 10 chapters at the beginning. I thought it would be fast-paced. However, looking at it, the third session has obviously slowed down, and a lot of details have been written, as well as some other original plots. But one thing I hope is that the results of the competition should be written strictly according to the results in the video. Never change a certain result because of some personal reasons. As for other aspects, the author's writing skills can be appropriately used. According to the current progress, 10 sessions + the final battle is enough for the author to write about 50-1 million words. I believe that anyone who likes this series will definitely fall in love with the author's writing style. As for the CP, I am still disappointed that I can write a mid-fire CP. In fact, Firefly can also have a secondary CP with others. It depends on the author's imagination. Come on, try to update to the final battle, the chapter of the fire dragon becoming a god.
There is no need to wear any colored glasses, the Gyro Contest itself is an excellent script, and even the characters are preset. The author only needs to bring in the world view and fill in the stories outside the competition. This is a relatively easy subject compared to original novels. I hope the author can maintain his status and not stop updating.
Sister Crystal's setting is great! Finally we see the eldest lady of Neutron Star on the stage, looking forward to her interaction with the fire dragon! ! ! Come on, author! ! !
I strongly request the CP of Neutron Star and Fire Dragon. Fire Dragon and Firefly are not impossible, but it seems that Firefly is not that interesting.
It's still very interesting, but according to the original plot progress, there is too little that can be written. I hope to add more small theaters, or stories about individual tops, which can be enriched. For example, spinners within the top eight can tell certain stories. Finally, I hope the author will get better and better
The battle scenes are rich and the characters' emotions are delicately portrayed. At the same time, it also has a funny side, which keeps people from being bored, makes people ignited, and makes them laugh. There is no such thing as those "one-of-a-kind" high combat effectiveness. The story of the fire dragon and the neutron star is very exciting and talented! Nice!
It's a very good fan book. Please hurry up and publish it for me. I can't wait to fight the fire dragon and the neutron star [eating melon]
Okay, okay, I look forward to the fifth Fire Dragon returning to win the championship.
My personal feeling is that from a top person to a top, each top is different, divided by attributes, here are a few examples (personal feeling) Fire Dragon: Wrapped in flames, then transformed into a top The Goddess of Emerald, turned into little green light spots, turned into a top Storm: Create a tornado covering itself at its own location, and it will turn into a gyro tornado and disappear.
I imagine the top player to be humanoid, with shoulder armor that symbolizes an attack ring, similar to the Mingguang Armor, and clothes of their own color. During the game, the player hits the chest to summon tops and other accessories. The shoulder armor detaches from the body and transforms into an attack ring that merges into a complete top. The main body then becomes a launcher to launch the top. After being launched, it turns into light particles in the air and enters the top, becoming an elf-like existence. Hope it helps with imagining battles. It may not be what everyone imagines, thank you.
I love it so much, I love watching it, but I don't know when the next season will be released by Yehaojun, who is a monthly watcher?
The writing is very good, and I seem to have the same passion as when I started reading novels. Although our subject matter is niche, I still hope that this book has a beginning and an end. It would be better if it were longer and it would be perfect [Like]
Very good, although I haven't read the original work. But I like to watch it
All I can say is that it's great. No need to say more. Come on, author, I'll finish it more [crying]
It's great to see such a passionate top team playing Marseille again. I just didn't watch enough of the video. [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] Neutron Star Fire Dragon Two of my favorite tops.
Now that Firefly has won the championship in the latest season, Laohei still maintains the character of only losing to the champion. It's just that Neutron Star was eliminated in the first game, and Fire Dragon was gone if he wasn't in good condition.
Very interesting top novel
In addition, it will take a long time for various small theaters to retire until the fire dragon is retired.
I'm successful and recommended. Come on, author. Because the author writes very seriously. It's not that empty-handed writing style. So I want to give you some advice. I hope the author can take a look. One is that the current battle scenes are more realistic. Although I have tried my best to write it, it still feels a bit dry. I suggest that the author can add some fantasy elements. The battle scene can be gradually upgraded. It also looks better this way. The second is that you don't have to be too demanding about being the same as the original video. Although I don't quite understand it now. But since the author has added the element of time travel. Then it shouldn't be exactly the same as the result in the original world. Some of the more important fateful battles can still be written as they were originally written, but considering logic, the results of some games can also be adjusted appropriately. The third one is my personal hobby. Open a harem Open a harem. Whether it's a neutron star or a firefly, whether it's a girl transforming into a green god, a girl transforming into a storm, or a girl transforming into obsidian. Everyone can enter the harem. ( I hope the author can write better and better.
Awesome! I didn't expect that a book would actually be published. It is still the most popular CP that I want to see [laughing]
Not bad, quite restored
I've always wanted to read it, it's very well written! How shameless! [Praise]
Marvelous! I like
Yes, I like fire dragons very much.
The requirements are not too high, it would be great if it can be completed
Do you know that only those who have watched the game will know the value of this book?
Great book! I hope the author will stick to it and finish it.
Not only because of the sentiment, but also because it is indeed a good story