[Fire Dragon and Neutron Star’s Bond]+ [Neutron Star x Fire Dragon]+ [Anthropomorphic Beyblades]+ [Fiery Battle Style]
(Inspired by Bilibili creator Super Ye Hao Jun’s commentary on “The Super-Hot Beyblade Tournament”)
Reborn in a world of Beyblades, I become an armor-bursting battle Beyblade.
I can’t remember my name in my previous life, what I went through, or why I was reborn.
But in this world of Beyblades, I have a new name that rings out loud and clear: the Alliance’s top attack specialist, Fire Dragon!
Neutron Star: “So… dragons really can fly!”
Green God: “Hey, redhead, when we retire, let’s form the strongest team.”
Storm: “Fire Dragon, I’ll beat you in the next match!”
Firefly: “Master Fire Dragon, please take me on as your nimble and adorable apprentice~”
Black King Kong: “Let’s battle, Fire Dragon! Now that I’ve powered up, I’m indestructible~~!”
Fire Dragon: “I was born for competition, and I fight for glory!”
Come for the Fire Dragon Neutron Star! After reading a few chapters, the writing is really good! [Read carefully] However, the author recommends that you add some daily plots or other battle plots when writing. Otherwise, if you directly describe the plot of the top eight battles, there is a high probability that the writing will not last long. At present, if there are less than eight pictures, it will already be the second session. You can find some fan stories from the comment area of the video and add them to it, which will make it more interesting. You can also add some special rules. For example, the previous champion can directly participate in the quarterfinals, or you can start over. This can make the plot unexpected and flexible. Then there is no need to start from the basics. You can create an original plot for the top 16, but for newcomers like Black King Kong and Firefly, you can give some plot points from the novice competition, and then smoothly transition to the top eight. Furthermore, most readers have watched the video and know the results clearly. Although they will still be emotional, it should not be too big after all. Adding some original plots or daily life or battles will make the pace of this book better. The current pace is too fast. In fact, I think that most of the readers who come to watch are more concerned about the daily interactions between Fire Dragon and the others outside the game, thinking about their disputes, talking and laughing, playing around... These plots will always make people smile. Just like the short fan stories below the video, the relationships and personalities of the characters are actually already clear. Just make some slight changes, but it is not recommended to add romance plots, even if I cough about fire dragons and neutron stars... [Smile] [smile] [smile] Ahem, after all, those plots are not suitable for these. Of course, the above are all my suggestions. What you wrote, author, is really good! Come on! Come early to the 80,000 Words spot, recommended! Well, that's it for now, I'll add more later when I think of it.
It's a good thing that I didn't read enough of Jun Top Luo so I came to Tomato to search for books. Before I read it, I thought it was just bad food. But after reading it, I didn't think so. You really know how to write [laughs]
The author's writing style is still very good. I finished two sessions in less than 10 chapters at the beginning. I thought it would be fast-paced. However, looking at it, the third session has obviously slowed down, and a lot of details have been written, as well as some other original plots. But one thing I hope is that the results of the competition should be written strictly according to the results in the video. Never change a certain result because of some personal reasons. As for other aspects, the author's writing skills can be appropriately used. According to the current progress, 10 sessions + the final battle is enough for the author to write about 50-1 million words. I believe that anyone who likes this series will definitely fall in love with the author's writing style. As for the CP, I am still disappointed that I can write a mid-fire CP. In fact, Firefly can also have a secondary CP with others. It depends on the author's imagination. Come on, try to update to the final battle, the chapter of the fire dragon becoming a god.
There is no need to wear any colored glasses, the Gyro Contest itself is an excellent script, and even the characters are preset. The author only needs to bring in the world view and fill in the stories outside the competition. This is a relatively easy subject compared to original novels. I hope the author can maintain his status and not stop updating.
Sister Crystal's setting is great! Finally we see the eldest lady of Neutron Star on the stage, looking forward to her interaction with the fire dragon!!! Come on, author!!!
I strongly request the CP of Neutron Star and Fire Dragon. Fire Dragon and Firefly are not impossible, but it seems that Firefly is not that interesting.
It's still very interesting, but according to the original plot progress, there is too little that can be written. I hope to add more small theaters, or stories about individual tops, which can be enriched. For example, spinners within the top eight can tell certain stories. Finally, I hope the author will get better and better
The battle scenes are rich and the characters' emotions are delicately portrayed. At the same time, it also has a funny side, which keeps people from being bored, makes people ignited, and makes them laugh. There is no such thing as those "one-of-a-kind" high combat effectiveness. The story of the fire dragon and the neutron star is very exciting and talented! Nice!
It's a very good fan book. Please hurry up and publish it for me. I can't wait to fight the fire dragon and the neutron star 🍉
Okay, okay, I look forward to the fifth Fire Dragon returning to win the championship.