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As a pure new author, there are many things that I didn't consider well. For example, there is no way that there will be no reaction from the sudden appearance of an empty island force, the navy, the revolutionary army, and the four emperors. Also, it's a bit weird to suddenly change the person's pronoun sometimes. Secondly, the plot is too short, and many aspects could be expanded, as well as the emotional aspects (but this is a male video, so you don't have to worry too much about not being toxic. It would be a good thing to improve it if possible). Five-star support. Come on

There was no more behind. When everyone helped Xia Qi move the tables and chairs, they saw Rayleigh at the door holding Jianing with one hand with a murderous look. Now Jianing's face was bruised, one tooth was missing, and his eyes were swollen. It was obvious that Rayleigh was very angry when he was angry. Are you enjoying it? No, you are still a cow and horse, and you are still licking a dog. You have just changed to a different track. You are not licking women, but licking some strong men.

I didn't want to read it when I saw the rating of 5. I read some comments and some questions from the author. I was a little curious, so I read 50 pictures. I also feel that the rating is indeed a bit low, with a rating of 7:7, for now, I think it is okay. This book is still readable, but I don't think it has any highlights. As for Nami and Robin's issues, I feel like the author wrote them this way because they were afraid of spoiling the plot. Their personalities play a large part in their likability. I don't think it's necessary to depict them with ordinary looks. After all, there are ordinary-looking characters in One Piece. What I feel is that the beauty of Nami and others was suppressed for the integrity of the Straw Hats.

The Empress plays a role in promoting the plot. Luffy and the Empress advance into the city. And you, won't anyone refuse you anything you say? The strong will become the strong, will they always listen to you? Definitely go if invited

This is the most direct "flat article" I've seen among One Piece fans. Overall it's pretty good, but there are some issues with the "first person" aspect. Of course, the author is still alive, and sometimes he can make changes very quickly. Come on👏👏

I have read dozens of Pirates books, and this book is really a farming and development story, with various plots interspersed in the middle. The author's writing style is good, and the finishing touch is the author's complaints about various comments after viewing, allowing readers to look at the reasonable and unreasonable settings of the Pirates world from another angle, especially the part where the author analyzes the Eight Treasure Navy is particularly reasonable!

The author should be a novice and even a 10-year-old book fan like me might be able to read it.

It can be viewed as an outline.

Passing line, vomiting blood, fever, Xiti system, Tongyi, come out, yoyo, onions, once, once, too dazzling, too hurriedly, lift the drawer, Tacitus, pay it entry, this question is God-given, the results are too detailed, the picture is washed today into Tongxi Tongxi architecture, New Tixi Machinery, continue to lose weight, lose weight in a small room, weight loss entry

It is very consistent with the mentality of an ordinary person after becoming a pirate. I think it is a very good angle.

Although the writing style is not very good, it is very beautiful.

Support the new author. What needs improvement most is not the plot but the writing style. There is still room for improvement

It's very realistic. Nowadays, novels are constantly dominated by people who are invincible at the beginning and have extraordinary talents. It's true that ordinary people who travel through time die much faster than aborigines.

Nice. This is my first time reading this type of pirate novel, and the author is awesome.

Not bad, I want to enjoy this life too

I don't know why the rating is so low. This is what I read. It's written more in line with the logic of ordinary people. It's not so universalistic and a little bit selfish.

The concept and setting are pretty good, but the writing needs more practice

It's pretty good, quite realistic, but there are no cheats for the protagonist!

The appearance of the female characters in One Piece is very well described.

The writing is okay, and the details are relatively realistic. There is nothing wrong with the protagonist. After all, he is an ordinary person, and it is normal to have some emotions. After all, not everyone is Long Aotian [Thinking]

It's a pity that I let so many beauties go.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Not bad. I didn't feel sick to my stomach after watching it for the first time.

It's more practical, there is no second, second or second. I feel that from the perspective of ordinary people, most people are not as good as the protagonist!

Pirate farming is quite novel.

Not bad! Personal feeling

It's my favorite plot

OK. I like this kind of protagonist

The author is from the otherworldly world and still counts beauty according to the real world. Please support her.

This is what I like.