Jian Jingchen

The plot is good, but the writing is not great and the logic is lacking. Overall it looks good so far

Yaowanggu is very difficult to write. After writing and writing, it turns out that the male protagonist is a clone?

It's very interesting. Come on, author, don't stop.

The relationship between the male and female protagonists is very similar to early female fantasy novels. In a classic, if the female protagonist is in trouble and the male protagonist comes to save her, it just looks good. I can't find it now if I try to find it [laughing]

Fortunately, the male protagonist's role is a little less.

The plot is okay, but the character of the protagonist is a bit too vigilant. Never trust others ( ' - ' * )

Fantasy version of the domineering president. . .

Overall, it suits my taste. Good luck to the author.

Give yourself a five-star secretly_(:зゝ∠)_

I feel that the details are not polished well enough, but considering this is the author's first book, I'd better give it five stars to support it.

The content is novel and colorful, and it's great to watch. The protagonist is full of aura, the characters in the book are equally brilliant, and the brothers and sisters with different personalities all add richness to the story.

It's not very pretty, but it's addictive [face covering] Boss, what's your big size? Your type is so addictive. It's not enough.

The writing is pretty good [laughs] worth reading

The writing is not good at all, but some of it is confusing and some of it is clear, just like the Tai Chi diagram, which has no solution.

The title of the book attracted me, and the more I listened to it, the better it became.

It's not bad. I suggest the author do a better job of segmenting into more paragraphs. The current segmentation looks a bit uncomfortable. I don't know if it's my problem [rolls eyes]

It feels like a female channel

Come on, I like it very much

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

There are many descriptions of other items, which makes the book look very long.

Poor Ah Li, call me, record me, keep him and me

It's okay, but the plot is a bit rushed

Does it look good? Love it. Love it. Love it. Love it.

It's quite interesting, but there's a transition in the middle that's a bit confusing. It's the Yaowang Valley chapter. I'm confused and don't understand what it means.

I haven't had this novel feeling for a long time. I hope the author will speed up the update! ! I also want to see [adoration][adoration]

I feel that the fantasy content cannot withstand scrutiny, but the overall story direction and emotional line are quite good. Mo Chen and the protagonist are quite sweet, but I don't know that there is no knife behind it.

The writing style in front is too delicate, isn't it [adoration][adoration][adoration]