Walking the Path of the Wizard

Very interesting novel! The development history of wizards! Chapter 41 is a little bit poisonous. Although it is to advance the plot, this method is not an easy one for readers. She accepted the other party even though she knew there was a problem, and the "peculiarity" that she had been hiding before was also exposed to her. Then she just happened to spread the news, and the guard just didn't notice [awkward laugh] The protagonist and his party entered the view of the cult directly from behind the scenes, and all kinds of troubles are inevitable in the future 🤦 The plot is too contrived, and there are even deaths. Is the next step going to be about discovering the special characteristics of the "Devil"? Then search vigorously

It was well written, but I discovered it too early. I want to raise him but I'm afraid of raising him to death 🥺

Unfortunately, it is not the orthodox wizard I wanted to read. When I saw the magic broom flying, it changed from a basic research article to a folk article. At least my first impression of flying was wings, feathers, and wind, not a broom.

As far as the current progress of the previous dozens of chapters is concerned, it is very exciting. This feeling of exploring the road ahead, opening up the future, and building the wizard system step by step from scratch is very good. The current rhythm is very good, and I hope to maintain it. The current overall evaluation, if the pace and quality of writing are maintained, I will classify this book as one of the best in this genre. The only thing I have doubts about is that I personally feel that the title and introduction of the book are not very clear. At first, I thought it was just an ordinary wizard novel, and I wasn't very interested. Fortunately, I came in and took a look. It is a very excellent work. The writing style is immature, there is too little foreshadowing, the characterization is thin, and the conflict seems too deliberate, which has the opposite effect. Reckless Ellie and her pendant licking dog Jeff are very annoying. The former gives people a bad look, and the latter exists purely for the purpose of licking the former. The later scenes of getting on the ship and quarreling were poisonous, especially the latter, which even made people feel disgusted with all the members. In addition, the wizard system lacks rigor. In terms of magic development, it is reasonable for the protagonist to have inspiration and plug-ins, but the development of other supporting characters seems a bit haphazard, which lowers expectations for the creation of the wizard system. Why do I still give a five-star follow-up review despite so many criticisms? There are two main reasons: 1. I have a filter for this type of novels 2. There is actually nothing wrong with the overall plot of the novel. In fact, most of my criticisms stem from two points, writing experience and immature writing style. Finally, to summarize, I am optimistic about this book, but it is still not ready for success at this stage.

The author's own thoughts about creating a path for magic wizards are so wonderful. This book currently seems to have many flaws, especially in the early "recruiting" stage. It is easy to dissuade some people. The disadvantage of the independent development system is that it is frustrating in the early stage and takes a long time to explore. It takes a long time, which means it takes a long time to develop. The protagonist's past life is that he can see the past of an item. This passive skill is mainly used for touching books in the early stage, but I feel that this skill is integrated into the development of magic, such as touching something and suddenly having some inspiration. In my opinion, the work is not for daily leisure. It has a sense of urgency. The world is too repulsive to wizards. It may take a long time to adapt or rule to have the right to speak and be valued. I still hope that all the little wizards will do well 😄 Looking forward to the true history of this continent

At present, it is tied. The early escape journey is still okay. Books about the origin of wizards are not common. That is, if there is a war with the church in the middle and late stages, it would be better to build an academy 🍉 There should also be magic props to detect the location of wizards (such as the Book of Access), otherwise it will be difficult to expand the team. The population base is here. It should not be a problem to build a wizard army of at least several thousand people [laughing] It's still very good so far, please click like it faster

Tears came to my eyes. A rare good book with a 5,000-word chapter in Tomato, I thought, why is it so long-lasting? When I saw the 5,000-word catalog, I burst into tears.

This novel is very likely to be a hit. As a Western fantasy novel, it witnesses the creation and origin of magic by the protagonist. I hope there will be things like astrology, crystal balls and other things later. After all, this novel is quite good. Although there are some minor shortcomings, this is a good novel.

It's a bit like the wizard version of the Middle Ages. Wizards are explorers who pursue the truth and discover the world.

A very good novel, better than most of Tomato's novels.