Blue Prison Returns

The writing is great, I finally read an article about Jie Shiyi's rebirth, but can I improve Jie Shiyi's physical fitness in the later stage? It's a bit like watching him become a slut in the arena and abuse others.

Nice! Originally, I thought it would be like a rebirth novel, such as the crushing strength of the protagonist, the unwillingness to flatten the characters, the same as the original work, etc., But the author did not write it like this at all! You can feel that the author takes each character seriously. Here, each character has its own reasonable behavioral logic, past, thinking, emotions and respective highlights. Just like the goalkeeper of team Z, few authors would write about his highlights, right? The ending of the game with Rin really made me feel unexpected and reasonable. Of course, this game is also one of the best games I have seen so far. Here, the entire Z team is really highlighted... The original work is originally a highly competitive sports series, so it is difficult to write a fanfic, because it is inevitable that you will feel uncomfortable after losing to your favorite character, but the author handled it very well! Even if your favorite character loses, you won't have negative feelings, because the character has its own thoughts, actions, etc., Created by a series of previous developments. Is losing a training? Although he lost, it feels like the character has grown and become more three-dimensional. The game is really exciting... What I think is the highest praise for fan fiction: it can make people who have never read the original work fall into the original work. Of course there are still shortcomings, but I don't think they are anything.

Good luck, I finally see that Ge Jie is a fan of the protagonist.

It's very interesting. There aren't many Blue Lock fanfics with Jie as the main character, and Shi Yi is also relatively strong. It's been a long time since I've seen an article that suits my taste. Teacher, please keep up the good work, and look forward to the follow-up development [shy][sending heartfelt wishes]

It doesn't completely follow the development of the original work, mainly because Kira has not been eliminated! Chestnut head was eliminated! The author added his own ideas and changed the competition system, just to see if it can come back later. It is very interesting and interesting. Even if Jie is reborn, he is not invincible. He is limited by his original physical ability. In addition, Jie further awakened his vision and became stronger bit by bit. Overall, it is recommended to try [Learned] After seeing the back, Jie Shiyi no longer suppresses his true nature, he is reborn after all, it's really great! Urgent reminder [laughing]

The feeling of pleasure is not very strong at the moment, and the dominance of Jie Shi Yi Stadium has been reduced, but the quality is super good, and the author will give it a big boost.

It's really fun, the quality is also very high, I love it (if it's not bad)

My favorite is the story about the protagonist traveling through time and being reborn, but I'm not a comic fan, so I don't know what's wrong with the original work, but this article written by the teacher is full of brains, in short, the teacher is amazing\^O^/

Ahhhhhh! ! ! So pretty! ! First time seeing this type! ! It's so cool! ! Come on, author!

Is there more? I can't see enough [laughing]

Okay, okay, okay But we really need to strengthen Wo Jie's dominance, wear it all back, and be so advanced, so that we won't be taught how to be a human being by the childish Lin.

Let's just say, it's really hard to find this kind of book in Tomato. I think this kind of development is quite good [love] [love]

I can only say that your update is a bit slow, but I really enjoyed watching it. Personally, it looks very good. Please continue to update. Hurry up.

God, I am so happy. I am so good at writing. Madam, I will always follow you!

It's very beautiful, keep updating, don't stop updating [I'm about to cry]

Many places are close to the original novel, and the author has also made great innovations in some places. The psychological description of the characters is very detailed, real, and rich. It can be seen that the author is writing seriously. The language and writing are very beautiful and the brushstrokes are very delicate. A different Jieshiyi is shown in front of us. It can be seen that the author is writing seriously. This is the best fanfic I've ever seen. I hope the author will continue to work hard for the next issue! ! ୧⍢⃝୨Keep your door clean forever

The protagonist is the reborn Jie Shiyi, who has twice the experience and more sophisticated skills than others. Personally, I think it's still very interesting, but the tyrant behavior of the protagonist Jie Shiyi has been somewhat reduced. Looking forward to the follow-up works

Very nice. I will keep chasing this book until the end [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Nice looking [laughing] The blue lock has a strong smell and cleans the door!

Shiyi's potential can never be predicted, Jiemen🙏🏻

It's so good, I feel like I watched one more episode, it's so right [Cool][Cool][Cool]

So cool, so cool

The writing is okay, let's wait and see first

Wow, it's really beautiful

Cleaning the door feels so good [blowing kiss]

Not bad, not bad, quite interesting.

Blue Prison looks great on Tomato

Oh my god, Jue Juezi.

It's pretty good, five stars for encouragement. The author also noticed the previous problem and changed it later to show his true strength. This kind of fandom is quite rare. I don't want to die suddenly on the way. The author said to take a few days off, but a week passed [Start]

Sure enough, the Blue Prison with Jie Shiyi as the main character is still good-looking😭😭It can't be replaced by adding other OCs mainly🙀