Blue Lock: The Return

The writing is great, I finally read an article about Jie Shiyi's rebirth, but can I improve Jie Shiyi's physical fitness in the later stage? It's a bit like watching him become a slut in the arena and abuse others.

Nice! Originally, I thought it would be like a rebirth novel, such as the crushing strength of the protagonist, the unwillingness to flatten the characters, the same as the original work, etc., But the author did not write it like this at all! You can feel that the author takes each character seriously. Here, each character has its own reasonable behavioral logic, past, thinking, emotions and respective highlights. Just like the goalkeeper of team Z, few authors would write about his highlights, right? The ending of the game with Rin really made me feel unexpected and reasonable. Of course, this game is also one of the best games I have seen so far. Here, the entire Z team is really highlighted... The original work is originally a highly competitive sports series, so it is difficult to write a fanfic, because it is inevitable that you will feel uncomfortable after losing to your favorite character, but the author handled it very well! Even if your favorite character loses, you won't have negative feelings, because the character has its own thoughts, actions, etc., Created by a series of previous developments. Is losing a training? Although he lost, it feels like the character has grown and become more three-dimensional. The game is really exciting... What I think is the highest praise for fan fiction: it can make people who have never read the original work fall into the original work. Of course there are still shortcomings, but I don't think they are anything.

It's very interesting. There aren't many Blue Lock fanfics with Jie as the main character, and Shi Yi is also relatively strong. It's been a long time since I've seen an article that suits my taste. Teacher, please keep up the good work, and look forward to the follow-up development 😳[sending heartfelt wishes]

Good luck, I finally see that Ge Jie is a fan of the protagonist.

It doesn't completely follow the development of the original work, mainly because Kira has not been eliminated! Chestnut head was eliminated! The author added his own ideas and changed the competition system, just to see if it can come back later. It is very interesting and interesting. Even if Jie is reborn, he is not invincible. He is limited by his original physical ability. In addition, Jie further awakened his vision and became stronger bit by bit. Overall, it is recommended to try [Learned] After seeing the back, Jie Shiyi no longer suppresses his true nature, he is reborn after all, it's really great! Urgent reminder [laughing]

The feeling of pleasure is not very strong at the moment, and the dominance of Jie Shi Yi Stadium has been reduced, but the quality is super good, and the author will give it a big boost.

It's really fun, the quality is also very high, I love it (if it's not bad)

My favorite is the story about the protagonist traveling through time and being reborn, but I'm not a comic fan, so I don't know what's wrong with the original work, but this article written by the teacher is full of brains, in short, the teacher is amazing\^O^/

Ahhhhhh!!! So pretty!! First time seeing this type!! It's so cool!! Come on, author!

The protagonist is the reborn Jie Shiyi, who has twice the experience and more sophisticated skills than others. Personally, I think it's still very interesting, but the tyrant behavior of the protagonist Jie Shiyi has been somewhat reduced. Looking forward to the follow-up works