A Pack of Love Potions at the Beginning to Help Me Get Out of Trouble and Cultivate Immortality

There are many loopholes in the logic of chance and practice, and the routine is a bit stiff. There is simply no lengthy explanation, so I can barely read it without going into details. However, this book has a lot of descriptions of the human world and the ways of cultivating immortals. The mechanical writing of cultivating immortals can make me fall asleep, and there are no weak points in the writing so I can read it carefully, which is quite exciting. It's not easy to find human literature that you can read. Although there are many shortcomings, I still give it five stars. [Like] As time went on, the Spring and Autumn style of writing became more and more common, and the plot was basically covered in one stroke, and it no longer had that flavor [face covering]

Very good, a recent spiritual novel, but there is one thing worth noting. The main thing for the protagonist to enter the sect is to gain knowledge and break through to build a foundation. Don't get stuck in it at the expense of the basics. You can leave the sect when necessary, and don't create a bunch of bloody plots here. I haven't read it for a long time, and I feel that this book has bigger problems. So I read the foundation building chapter. This chapter is full of deceptions from the underworld. The meaning of staying in this broken sect is actually not very big. The risk is extremely high. It feels like Old Demon Han, which is lacking but cannot be compared. The reality is not realistic enough, and the cool writing is not cool enough. To be honest, in this sect's environment, the Five Spiritual Roots are not worthy of building a foundation, and they are not worthy of this cultivation level. The protagonist must have a chance, and it is normal for the sect leader to join forces with Di Chunfeng to kill and seize the treasure. You have to set up those chances and coincidences without flipping the table. The main character has a big problem, but the author seems to have no idea how to write a book unless he joins a sect.

Why is it 6.3 Points? Obviously there are many five-star reviews. The evaluation is a solid article on cultivating immortality.

The writing is very good, keep reading! Reading the book fluently is better than most losers. I hope I won't be a eunuch. As you write, why do you imitate mortals in cultivating immortality? The writing was pretty good at the beginning, but how come the rest of the plot is just like a story about a mortal cultivating immortality?

I just saw the front. It's okay. Many things are similar to what ordinary people think. For example, there are spiritual insects, others only learn one skill, and he learns multiple skills. Mortals have small green bottles, and he has cauldrons. I've already read half of it... Anyone who has read the Mortal Cultivation Biography knows... This book is just an imitation. It's basically the same. Even "Chaotic Star Sea" has two characters added.

Very beautiful, a special angle to cultivate immortality, interesting!

Tao passes through yin and yang, and is godless and formless. Immortal will die, stiff but not dead. The ghost soul is food, secretly nourishing Tiangang. Thousands of souls are the guide, thousands of calamities are the pulp Yin condenses and Yang gathers, death leads to rebirth. Evil accumulates into a sea, and the golden body lasts forever Diamond Corpse, the method of sacrifice.

The plot is compact, the characters' IQs are online, and it has received great reviews.

The beginning is not very attractive, a bit mediocre, but after I went to become a disciple of Changsheng Sect, it became very interesting, good food, excellent product

It is one of the few works in recent years that is comparable to ordinary people. The rating should not be so low, at least 9.5

A nice book

Bye bye, if you have nothing to do, come and pretend to be a man, that's awesome

As long as the male protagonist is not a eunuch, it will be fine

Being decisive in killing may be a bit inappropriate. Huang Feng should not be let go. If he offends, he should be killed to avoid further trouble. Otherwise, when he comes back and leaks information to you, he will be in trouble again and even be killed.

Well written, I hope my five stars can raise your rating. Also, have you stopped updating?

Although the plot of Little Mortal is very similar to that of Mortal, it would be nice to continue writing it.

Absolutely above the standard, support support

It's a really good book. I'm a 20-year-old bookworm. If I add some discussion between men and women, it will be perfect [laughing]

Good book. Really good book, worth reading

It's really good. I hope I can continue writing it, not to be a eunuch, and the protagonist must have a harem [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

It smells like a mortal. There is no poisonous point at the moment. Come on, go, go, go, go, go.

Overall it's very good, it feels a bit like a mortal cultivating immortality.

Be innovative and don't be confused. I hope you don't dive later

An unsystematic and chance-oriented novel about cultivating immortals, with a compact plot and worth reading.

A standard article on cultivating immortality, the writing is smooth and not verbose. You can read it in one sitting and wait for the next chapter.

The plot rhythm of the novel is in line with the normal setting. I personally think it is well written. Come on!

The writing is much better than many books with higher ratings. Why? The rating is so low

It's been a long time since I've been able to read a novel from beginning to end. So far, it's pretty good. I hope the author will persevere.

Very exciting, I hope the author can stick with it

Not bad, but the rating is a bit low Big cheers for the author