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(Single heroine Hermione + system + private setting)
What will happen when another Dumbledore shows up at Hogwarts?
"Damn it, why is there another Dumbledore!" Voldemort was furious and incompetent.
"Kerr! Listen to your sister!" Hermione said dotingly (please read the text if the introduction is not available)
Reader comments
Support the author, I still prefer this setting, and I like Professor Snape very much. I hope the author can feel more sorry for us and teach him a good ending [crying] Although he hates chattering students, he has not neglected his duty in teaching. He is neither patient nor gentle, even mean, but he still shows a kind of awkward and pure persistence at certain moments. This is the professor we like [full]
The author has some suggestions. When describing people's language, they can be more concise and do not need to add too many modal particles. Sometimes, some short words can also depict delicate emotions.
Finally found another book that I love about Chimin Granger
The setting of the book is good, and the writing style is average among HP fans. However, the paragraphs are too long, and each chapter is a long paragraph. It is a bit tiring to read, and I hope to improve it. Overall, it is a fan novel that can be supported.
Dumbledore is so wronged [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]
Support the author, I still prefer this setting, and I like Professor Snape very much. I hope the author can feel more sorry for us and teach him a good ending [crying] Although he hates chattering students, he has not neglected his duty in teaching. He is neither patient nor gentle, even mean, but he still shows a kind of awkward and pure persistence at certain moments. This is the professor we like [full] The author has some suggestions. When describing people's language, they can be more concise and do not need to add too many modal particles. Sometimes, some short words can also depict delicate emotions.
Finally found another book that I love about Chimin Granger
The setting of the book is good, and the writing style is average among HP fans. However, the paragraphs are too long, and each chapter is a long paragraph. It is a bit tiring to read, and I hope to improve it. Overall, it is a fan novel that can be supported.
Dumbledore is so wronged [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]