The Amazing Two-Legged Sheep

In terms of language, there is not too much nonsense on the whole. The language is concise and well-organized. As soon as you read the article, you can tell that it is not a simple article. The paragraphs and story transitions are not abrupt and the connection is not abrupt. It is rated as the best in Tomato novels based solely on the novel elements and language and rhetorical expression. The only shortcoming is that the author is deficient in the description of facial expressions. "Red face" appears too much in the article. Thanks to the combination of facial expressions and language to describe the characters, it is more prominent. I have to say that the author's description of the characters is very three-dimensional and can express the characters' personality characteristics in multiple dimensions. The characters are shown to be flesh and blood, not just stereotyped novel characters. In terms of the story, I feel that the pace is already very fast, but after all, it is a business article, and the author has to lay the groundwork as soon as possible for the pleasure of leaving a truckload of goods.

Novels and TV series about the Five Dynasties and Ten Kingdoms are rare, so it's great that the author is willing to choose this subject.

The book is still very well written, with good writing style and good writing skills. I have read more than 99% of Tomato novels so far. Thumbs up for the author and raises hopes: 1. Continue to speak straightforwardly and carry forward the traditional writing style 2. Continue to be truthful and don't be mysterious 3. Don't write the protagonist as a superman, the protagonist is just an ordinary person and down-to-earth 4. It's better to add some shortcomings to the protagonist, write about ordinary things, and write about helplessness. It doesn't have to be cool. 5. If there is a female protagonist, the love story should be more subtle. You can refer to Jin Yong's works in this regard. 6. In addition, many authors are eunuchs. It is said that the total reward is only a few hundred meters. Please pay attention to this early and don't say much. I wish the author to keep up the good work and publish good articles. 1. The official article can be simpler, so as not to have too many clues and tire the readers. For this, please refer to The Deer and the Cauldron. 2. Modern science and technology are introduced into ancient times, and you can write part of it. To avoid too many details, the protagonist is omnipotent. 3. In modern and ancient times, only human emotions and desires remain unchanged, so you can write more about this. 4. I welcome corrections for immature opinions, for reference only.

The protagonist is neither handsome nor fierce, he is just an ordinary science and engineering man with a good heart. However, the time travel is very realistic, the plot is not delayed, and the rating is not high. I guess it's because the male readers didn't find the story interesting enough, while the female readers didn't think the male protagonist was handsome enough. But I can feel that the author is trying hard to write a story that is close to history. I hope the author will not be swayed by the comments and stick to the construction in his heart. Come on! We will be with you.

The author is too modest, this book is very well written! This book tells the story of a modern man, Li Xiaoming, traveling through the Five Hus and Sixteen Kingdoms, the darkest moment of China. There are no mindless tricks, only survival in troubled times, and every step of the way is startling. It not only lays out the vivid plot, but also meticulously depicts various characters, depicting all kinds of vivid and interesting souls, leaving a deep impression on people. The author writes about the chaos of the Sixteen Kingdoms in a clear and unambiguous way. The disputes between Hu and Han, regime changes, battlefield killings, and the suffering of refugees are all very real. The protagonist sticks to the bottom line and seeks a way to survive in the killings and cracks. It has both a sense of history and the struggle and growth of a small character. The more I pursue it, the more I can appreciate the cruelty and tenacity of that era; the more I pursue it, the more I can realize that the truest undertone of human nature under desperate circumstances is the survival instinct: half of it is perseverance, and half of it is glimmer of light. The plot of this book is compact, both dramatic and humorous, and the wars and political intrigues are all online. It is a rare good book about traveling through the Sixteen Kingdoms, and you will not lose money if you follow it. A new journey, new expectations! Effort! Come on! 👍👍👍

A good book is a good book, but the protagonist is too twisted, doing half the big things and always hesitating. It is difficult to distinguish between righteousness and love between children. There is a small romance but no big meaning, but the writing is indeed good, and the timeline is also long, highlighting the growth of the protagonist. I just hope that when you grow up, you won't hesitate anymore.

This is very well written! This book tells the story of a modern man, Li Xiaoming, traveling through the Five Hus and Sixteen Kingdoms, the darkest moment of China. There are no mindless tricks, only survival in troubled times, and every step of the way is startling. It not only lays out the vivid plot, but also meticulously depicts various characters, depicting all kinds of vivid and interesting souls, leaving a deep impression on people. The author writes about the chaos of the Sixteen Kingdoms in a clear and unambiguous way. The disputes between Hu and Han, regime changes, battlefield killings, and the suffering of refugees are all very real. The protagonist sticks to the bottom line and seeks a way to survive in the killings and cracks. It has both a sense of history and the struggle and growth of a small character. The more I pursue it, the more I can appreciate the cruelty and tenacity of that era; the more I pursue it, the more I can realize that the truest undertone of human nature under desperate circumstances is the survival instinct: half of it is perseverance, and half of it is glimmer of light. The plot of this book is compact, both dramatic and humorous, and the wars and political intrigues are all online. It is a rare good book about traveling through the Sixteen Kingdoms, and you will not lose money if you follow it. A new journey, new expectations! Effort! Come on! 👍👍👍

This is my first time writing a book review. This is really the best book I have seen on Tomato and the book that suits my taste the most. The author is very good at foreshadowing, and the plot is full of ups and downs, thrilling, and addictive. The description of the fight is excellent. There is almost no author who can write the fight scenes so excitingly. It is the only book that I don't skip the fight scenes (Tomato authors are generally too good at it, and the fight scenes are lethargic, which is far worse than this book). Especially the plots of shaping Duan Wenyang are very emotional. I hope the author can give a good ending. The writing style can be seen as the shadow of Jin Yong. The protagonist is a character with clear advantages and disadvantages, so it shows the charm of the protagonist (indecisive, extremely loyal, impulsive, greedy for money, a master tactician). There are some shadows of Zhang Wuji. I simply can't put down books with such flawed protagonists. Authors of tomato historical novels generally write the protagonists very perfectly and do not allow any mistakes. Therefore, the writing style falls into a cliché and you can easily guess the next chapter. This book has very advanced narrative techniques. I hope you can read it patiently and get better after passing the Chenghan period. Really highly recommended highly recommended highly recommended!

A novel about traveling through ancient times. It has no system and no space. It is not a mind-blowing novel. It is the time travel of an ordinary person. It travels to that period of time that no history book wants to write about. It is the darkest era of China. It has gone through hardships and obstacles. The story is ups and downs and exciting. It is like watching a TV series. It is super beautiful!

The characters have distinct personalities, and the supporting cast also shines. The protagonist is portrayed in a very three-dimensional way. I personally think that a complete person can be brave and timid, has selfishness and kindness, and continues to grow through the world. Compared with those stereotyped characters with a label, the author has experience. It's just a pity that the writing is slow to develop, and there are no superpowers/magic/systems/beautiful girls that young people like. It's very difficult in 🍅🔥 Come on! The book will get better as it gets written. Readers will also grow