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I can only say that the story of rebirth is well written, and please pay attention. This is not a cool novel, it is the kind where the protagonist is very aggrieved. In this situation, the protagonist joins the master (one of the strongest in the world) in this world. My sister was molested by Han people and almost injured after being molested. She didn't even dare to fart. Then when they met for the second time, the Han people directly stated that they wanted to use the sister on the main interface as a trap, but the protagonist still didn't dare to say anything or make a move and left directly. Later, he was provoked by the Han people, and he was as obedient as the Han people. He listened to whatever he said and agreed to fight. During the competition, the Han people tried to kill the protagonist with a hidden weapon, and the protagonist responded in kind. He didn't attack the Han people, but just knocked him unconscious. There was no way he could call the Han people the father of the protagonist. After waking up later, the protagonist still wanted to join forces with his father Han to fight against the enemy. In the end, there is just one sentence, the protagonist belongs to the Han people. He hurt his sister and dared not say a word. He wanted to use his sister as a trap to insult her, but the protagonist did not dare to do it. Finally, the Han people wanted to kill the protagonist, but the protagonist did not dare to do anything serious to his father Han. Such a filial son deserves a five-star rating! ! ! Everyone can watch it together

It's so beautiful. Every simulation has a perfect ending. The master's little junior sister fucks her sister and she has to eat it. Brothers and sisters, come and read it. It's a cool and refreshing article. The protagonist is powerful and domineering and does things neatly. It's a good article. Come and read it. Come and have a look. Come and have a look. Show them all to me. Hahahaha. Here comes the chicken soup.

Reminds me of the Holy Sword User's Forbidden Spell Chanting

The writing of this book is excellent, the content is fascinating, and the plot is touching. Sorry, I can't edit it anymore [laughing]

Don't be dissuaded, this is the best book I've ever read. After keeping it for a few months, I came back to watch it again. It was a pleasure to watch it all at once.

In fact, it's not bad. It's pretty much the same as other simulation novels. The male protagonist simulates suffering, and then the simulated female protagonist chases her out of the Shura field. It's not too bad, but the protagonist's upgrade is a bit sloppy. It's like drinking water. It may be a little difficult to drink water.

It is a common problem in the current Tomato simulation novels that one must die every time and then wait until the next generation to have a soft meal. It can be said that the subject itself is easy for people to dislike. The detailed depiction and emotional transmission are a bit unfamiliar to me at the moment. (I would personally recommend the book about the Female Sword Fairy. It is at least bright and it can be seen that the author has some literary skills. The characters are not too single and there are more deconstructions of reality.) This book The heroines in the current three worlds in the book all tend to be facial-looking. The established template (Silly Baitian ➡️ Designed ➡️ Regretful/Awakening ➡️ Traveling through the present world) brings a certain degree of fatigue. I felt it in the first world, but it started to repeat in subsequent times. But at least the plot advancement is reasonable, and the author of this book has done a good job in this regard. The themes are quite varied, which I personally prefer. The three worlds I have watched include Eastern Fantasy, Western Fantasy and Apocalypse. The richness of the world makes up for the singleness of the main plot to a certain extent. Secondly, the balance between the simulation and the main world is still good, with causes, effects and cars🚗. It is not easy to read articles nowadays. There are very few good articles. This book is still good. Maybe I am a bit harsh personally. I would like to encourage the author with four stars. After all, it is not easy for everyone. I hope that the world will be different in the future. If it is still the same routine, I will drop the star [smile].

I think it's a great book. It would be better if you could be more subtle in the emotional part of your real-life plot. Of course, we must also keep the simulation story exciting and heart-rending.

It's okay, it's just that the author is a bit too sleight of hand, the plot isn't delicate enough and the characters' emotions need to be polished, but it's quite interesting, not bad and fun.

I said it smells like a female video [laughs] It turns out the author is a woman [laughs]

I remembered that a lot of recent novels were of this type, and then I searched for them, because I always felt that I had seen this anime before, the Japanese "The Life of a Magical Swordsman", and I felt that they all borrowed from this.

Five stars in the early stage and three stars in the later stage. From the time I wrote the story to Sha Ye, I can only say that the emotional line was not a big problem. The problem became bigger as it went on. When it came to Qin Xiaoya, I thought I was reading a Gongdou novel. Several female protagonists began to scheming around the male protagonist. Not everyone likes Shura Chang. You have always been in Shura Chang, or you have always written about the heroine feeling sad for the male protagonist and feeling guilty. You feel guilty and still do this. This is not a pure beast. The harem part is still poorly written. If you can't handle so many emotional lines, just write a few less and add more female characters. The problem is that except for the beginning, the subsequent characters are not likeable. Full of self-pity, guilt and other emotions. The final result seems to be that the female protagonists are okay with what they say and are tolerant in what they do. In contrast, the male protagonist is like a stallion. He can never do what he says and always talks about how guilty he is. Doesn't it reflect that the male protagonist is not good at what he does and the author's portrayal is not good? Of course, it doesn't rule out that the author deliberately wanted to write such a male protagonist, but I don't like it anyway. The writing in the front is really good. Luo Zhiqing, Elena, Yu Changli, and Kujo Saya are all very well written in terms of simulation and real-life emotional lines. I can only say that Xiaoya, my sister, is well written in the dungeon, but the emotional line in reality is a mess, so I think you might as well enlarge the length of the simulation, but there is also a problem that the heroine cannot follow, which will lead to a low appearance rate of the heroine. I really like your book. The first part is really good, but the second part of Shura Field is still lacking in shortcomings. Come on [like]

Every time I see this kind of reincarnation article, I feel very funny. After tens of thousands of years, how can I become a super yandere and hate to be separated when I see the person I miss the most? Apart from anything else, I died on the spot in front of you, because you killed me, and the loss, recovery, and guilt made the heroine explode on the spot, so I feel like every reincarnation story makes me want to laugh when I see a yandere. So can the male protagonist die tragically at the hands of the female protagonist? That's so interesting, man [laughs evilly]

The part I saw earlier is a bit toxic for the time being, but as long as you don't read the comments, read faster, and clear your mind a bit, it won't affect your reading, and it won't be poisonous to death. It's just that the routine is relatively retro [grievance] It's bad. I saw someone saying that there was a heroine in the back who was looked at by another man. I had to run away. I didn't use this part of my resistance [crying]

I think it is still a very good book. I don't understand why so many people criticize it. Although there are some poisonous points, it is normal in the book. It is not so exaggerated and the flaws are not hidden. In the fourth and fifth simulations, I see that the emotional lines are very delicate and very satisfying. Come on, author.

There is no other reason. I just like to read simulation novels, and the author is not procrastinating. Basically, they met in the last few chapters after writing the simulation. I really like this, and I give it five stars [Chigua][Chigua]

Too few, even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this [angry] [angry] [angry] [angry] [angry] [angry] [angry] [angry] [sending my heart] [sending my heart]

After the content was rated 5 stars in the early stage, there is a common problem with novels with multiple world views, and it starts to become lengthy and protracted. It is understandable that after all, it is easy to write a wonderful story, but it is more difficult to write multiple stories and put them together. Overall, it can still reach 4 stars, but the author is very hard-working, and there are still 5 stars after 2 updates every day.

I met the genius Tomato author by chance. He has so many jokes and is so talented that he can't defeat him even if he tries his best. The plot doesn't drag on and it's very enjoyable to watch.

It looks good. It's much better than the macho pictures and pictures written by men's channels, which are stingy. Many articles written by men's channels are too resentful.

Four or five Xiaodu are okay and make sense. It's okay, you can take a look

Sugar bowl, magic wand, paper flowers, numbered cards, magic tool book. [Sinister smile]

Great book, makes my brain spin [laughs]

It's a good book. It has some minor flaws but they don't hide its flaws, and there aren't many. The only problem is that there are a lot of commentators in the paragraphs who are arrogant and arrogant without reading the rest of the text. They are too violent. Although I understand it, I don't agree with it. Don't read too many paragraphs and comments. They are only for reference. Turning off the paragraphs and comments will make reading a lot more comfortable.

Five-star praise, come to Akaishi, especially starting from the third chapter

It's so good. I thought it was a cliché story about being betrayed in my past life when I read the title. But after reading it, I realized it's about pure love in my past life and a harem in this life.

It's quite interesting. The plot is mostly about battles, daily battles with the country. Of course, there are very few battles and battles with the country nowadays. The battles are more about battles from the past in the simulation. Most of them are daily and daily life with the heroines in the simulation. I feel that there are too many chapters in this simulation, but the writing is quite delicate. I can't say much about the emotional line. Overall, it's pretty good.

The writing is very good, but can the heroine not have too much? [Sending my heart]

Ok, I have also finished listening to another book, this one, how should I put it, overall the book is quite good. Well, the simulation is also written very carefully, the reality is relatively connected, the overall logic is not problematic, it is very good, and the characters' emotions are also written relatively delicately. It didn't end well in the end Oh, yes, maybe the author writes about simulation - anyway, there are some places where the plot is average and attractive, but how can I put it, it is indeed successful, but the plot feels like oh, forget it, it is above average, um, in fact, overall this book is quite good If you have never read the simulation novel, you can read it as a newbie. You may think it is relatively top-notch. Ah, if you have read it, but the quality is not that high, you can also read it. The quality of this book is medium to high. If you have read a lot and are tired of it, don't read it. The plot is almost the same, innovative, but not enough to attract too much.

The brothers couldn't bear it anymore and died of poison in Chapter 11