[On the surface, the flower of the high mountain is actually a vinegar essence, dark and refreshing attack × The surface is sunny and cheerful, but the reality is the yandere loyal dog suffers]
After twelve years of searching for his childhood playmate brother to no avail, Su Mo Nian returned to the city where he started because of his family's business.
He transferred to another school as usual and went to the school's wall of honor on the recommendation of the principal. As soon as he looked up, he noticed the most beautiful and conspicuous one.
Unexpectedly, the name marked under the beautiful photo hanging high was Song Mo.
His brother's name.
At first, Su Mo Nian simply approached Song Mo with the idea of collecting evidence whether the Song Mo in front of him and his brother in the past were the same person.
But soon he discovered——
Why are there so many annoying people next to Song Mo?!
The first one, small green tea. Su Monian dismissed it and turned to make tea.
Second, admirers. Su Mo young smiled contemptuously and turned him into his little fanboy.
The third one is a former friend. Su Monian gritted his teeth uncharacteristically, and was bound to compare with him.
The fourth one is a muscle art student. He looked malicious... Wait, why did he come for me...
All in all, Young Master Su was dead.
However, things are not that simple.
When everything was settled and the two were about to achieve success, an accident completely exposed Su Mo Nian's original purpose.
It was a very ordinary night. Su Monian looked up at the moon and shed a tear.
This is their second separation.
Have you heard the story of the devil in the bottle?
[And this is a story that runs through the life of a devil.
Reader comments
If I have to say something, the first thing that comes to mind is that I feel sorry for the two children.
This is my first serialized novel. I often get stuck and feel physically nauseous. The data also made me go from being blindly confident at the beginning to being overly anxious now. Whenever I post and see others saying that the data is poor after reading thousands of times, I can only silently watch myself reading with difficulty and laugh at myself.
Of course, there's nothing you can do about it if you write poorly.
Many people's advice is to cut off the text if the data is not good. My idea is, ah, fortunately, I don't need to write a book to eat, I can just comfort myself and keep writing.
It's really frustrating when you realize how bad your writing is.
Su Mo Nian and Song Mo are the children with whom I have the deepest affection. I started imagining their stories very early. The reason why I feel sorry is because I was very persistent in placing them in the first book. There is no doubt that the first book is the least experienced and the easiest to be influenced. I did think, forget it, just end it. No one will read it anyway.
But today I figured it out. I created them and I should be responsible for them. In fact, how many people see it and whether they like it or not are not that important to me.
——Who gives birth to a child just to please others?
So I guess it's enough that I like them
Not only do I like them, I will always like them. Not only Su Mo Nian and Song Mo, I will treat every male and female protagonist in the future equally.
Isn't it just writing? If you write more, you will definitely make progress! When one day I feel that I have become more powerful, I may write this article again because this is where my dream begins.
Shamelessly give yourself five stars>ᴗoಣ
If I have any readers (if), I wish you a happy Year of the Snake, everything goes well and you get rich soon! !
I really like the characters, the writing is online, the plot is logical, and all the foreshadowing has echoes in the subsequent chapters.
Drama
through
Be cautious
enter
At first I was attracted to Su Mo Nian, and I felt crazy. After all, I wanted to see a yandere, but later on the character changed a bit, but the problem is not big, the young couple is very sweet, the contradiction is that Su Mo Nian is looking for "Song Mo", and Song Mo (really) doesn't remember what happened when he was a child, so Su thinks he is not. There is also a CP that takes up a relatively small proportion of the story, which is Song Mo's mother and another woman (disguised as Song He in the early stage), which can be considered a kind of redemption.
Some scenes are well described. I have always wanted to study how the author came up with such descriptions.
The author is also very cute, highly recommended!!
Year 99! I can only accompany my two children here. I hope that the two children will always be happy and grow up well in a place where I can't see them.
If I have to say something, the first thing that comes to mind is that I feel sorry for the two children. This is my first serialized novel. I often get stuck and feel physically nauseous. The data also made me go from being blindly confident at the beginning to being overly anxious now. Whenever I post and see others saying that the data is poor after reading thousands of times, I can only silently watch myself reading with difficulty and laugh at myself. Of course, there's nothing you can do about it if you write poorly. Many people's advice is to cut off the text if the data is not good. My idea is, ah, fortunately, I don't need to write a book to eat, I can just comfort myself and keep writing. It's really frustrating when you realize how bad your writing is. Su Mo Nian and Song Mo are the children with whom I have the deepest affection. I started imagining their stories very early. The reason why I feel sorry is because I was very persistent in placing them in the first book. There is no doubt that the first book is the least experienced and the easiest to be influenced. I did think, forget it, just end it. No one will read it anyway. But today I figured it out. I created them and I should be responsible for them. In fact, how many people see it and whether they like it or not are not that important to me. ——Who gives birth to a child just to please others? So I guess it's enough that I like them Not only do I like them, I will always like them. Not only Su Mo Nian and Song Mo, I will treat every male and female protagonist in the future equally. Isn't it just writing? If you write more, you will definitely make progress! When one day I feel that I have become more powerful, I may write this article again because this is where my dream begins. Shamelessly give yourself five stars>ᴗoಣ If I have any readers (if), I wish you a happy Year of the Snake, everything goes well and you get rich soon! !
I really like the characters, the writing is online, the plot is logical, and all the foreshadowing has echoes in the subsequent chapters. Drama through Be cautious enter At first I was attracted to Su Mo Nian, and I felt crazy. After all, I wanted to see a yandere, but later on the character changed a bit, but the problem is not big, the young couple is very sweet, the contradiction is that Su Mo Nian is looking for "Song Mo", and Song Mo (really) doesn't remember what happened when he was a child, so Su thinks he is not. There is also a CP that takes up a relatively small proportion of the story, which is Song Mo's mother and another woman (disguised as Song He in the early stage), which can be considered a kind of redemption. Some scenes are well described. I have always wanted to study how the author came up with such descriptions. The author is also very cute, highly recommended!!
Year 99! I can only accompany my two children here. I hope that the two children will always be happy and grow up well in a place where I can't see them.