Unlucky, I Want to Go Home

You are also awesome. I don't think it's a big deal if Zhuge Cunfu uses it. The problem is that the clothes the protagonist wore in the first chapter are too vulgar. First of all, there is nothing wrong with you writing cool articles. Secondly, most of Tomato is female-oriented, so even if you write like this, you won't get much traffic. Also, the plot is too inexplicable. If you want to write about the Immortal Cultivation style, you have to write clearly about the law of the jungle and the strong. If it were you, you would go to a world of cultivation and you could just say a few words and people would believe you. Who knows? The ancients paid attention to concepts such as invasion by outsiders and seizing one's body. Although you have cheats, I still felt that it was too cliché, because many of them have already been written, so I didn't have the slightest desire to read on. Then, remember to mark more punctuation marks, otherwise readers will not be able to read smoothly. Also, as far as the plot is concerned, it's still okay, but it just needs some settling in. Another thing is that the two words "Reba" have been changed. Although the name can be used by many people, after all, it is famous there. If you write it like this, it will make people feel like you care about others.

Yes, you are doing well in cultivating immortals.