In This Dojo, the Stars Serve as Talismans, and All the Gods and Demons Retreat

The setting of the world is quite interesting, the plot has its own design, and the logic of the characters' actions and the development of events can also be scrutinized. Although the protagonist is a bit impulsive and reckless (such as the dispute in the tavern), his sense of justice and bravery are still developed. Some parts are a bit strange to read. If you think about it carefully, there should be logical loopholes. Overall, it is very good. However, the current strength of the female protagonist, including other teammates, cannot keep up with the progress of the male protagonist, and we look forward to the follow-up development; Bai Wu's image is very likable, but the proportion of the story currently feels very small, and the entire White City disaster is almost invisible, which is frustrating. Readers who prefer a single female protagonist should hope that the male and female protagonists will appear together for a long time. The author can consider this. In addition, I feel that it is necessary to pay attention to distinguishing the relationship and differences between the child Yiyi and her and the male protagonist, otherwise the female protagonist's intention will be biased. Five stars encourage it. There are many expression and input errors in the previous sentences. Too many times will affect the perception.

This is really not ordinary, it is strong. The characters are all well polished. The setting is also interesting. The pace is tight. Can Yiyi be cured? Is the heroine Bai Wu? Will you do some exercise? After all, Yiyi is well-shaped and the details are in place. I can interpret a lot of them. But I like this character very much because this character has stood up. I don't ask for a cure. The logic that good people are not rewarded is not logic in the end. The reverence for life is, honestly, very touching. Some small details, as well as the sentence, "Don't you want to live?" Have already come out of this character.

It's pretty good-looking, but these teammates all look like they're about to get stabbed [face covering]

Not bad, the pace feels a bit fast

Superpower + Wasteland, I feel pretty good, I hope the author can stick to it

Not bad, the world view is quite creative

It looks good, and the skill settings are very interesting.

It's well written. Except for Chapter 149, which is extremely abstract, the rest of it is pretty good.

The world view is grand and the plot is good! Worth recommending!