I Was Deceived by Shuangwen. There Is No Good Thing in Zerg.

It's great. I'm really looking forward to Crematorium, west and Xiao, and I still like Xivier better. I feel that Bai needs an emotionally stable and gentle partner in this world. He seems to be lonely and tense. When I see Xivier, I can't help but think of my friend's Bian Collie. Sorry, I can't help but sculpt the dog again, but I love Bian Collie very much. I also like Xivier and Bai Bai very much. It's really hard not to prefer characters with a stable core and a tough heart. Da Da's writing is super good. It's very good to write at your own pace. I ate a lot at the crematorium. Hahaha, I'm sorry I'm a bit aggressive. Now I'm so happy to see Bai's suffering finally come to an end. I hope Bai will always be happy in the future✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧. Come on Da Da, I'll keep up with the updates. Will Bai be allowed to go home in the end? Well, it was very different from what I expected. Bai and Xiao just talked about love and reluctant to let go, hero, don't let me go, and then Mei Meihe. The crematorium is to let the protagonist feel happy, the readers feel good, and everyone feels good together, but is anyone enjoying this crematorium? Anyway, I didn't notice that Bai no longer looked like Bai after he grew up and turned black. The original tough and tenacious background did not look more brilliant after being polished. This made me feel that Bai's hard work and transformation for so long was just to fall in love with Xiao again. Maybe it's been too long since I've been able to catch up. Bai is no longer the Bai I like. Best wishes on the end, see you soon. Xavier is doing well and I hope he can stay well.

Personally, in the early stage, Bai Zhan was a bit unlike Gong, the writing style was a bit immature, and the plot was a little embarrassing, but in the later stage, Bai Zhan was really super handsome! ! ! Chasing the Husband in the Crematorium starts from about sixty chapters, and the point is that this book won't make you forgive after just a few words of coaxing (probably, I still hope the torture lasts longer)! ! ! Overall it's very beautiful! Personally, I really like the protagonist who is indifferent on the surface. I was so excited when the protagonist swallowed the core. I really like this kind of description! ! ! The male author of the video is very good at learning, very tasteful ha [blowing kiss] the little cup rules the world so handsomely~~~ It's over, it's over! This book is truly amazing! Even if they reconcile, they won't go back to the way they got along before the breakup. I am the protagonist, but I am happy with it anyway. Xiao Gui is really strong in the later stage. I like the way he gets along a little better in the later stage hehehe Don't read this book with stereotypes in mind. Some plots really make me want to give up on how they will develop. In fact, the crematorium for chasing husbands is really full! ! ! The author will update the extras soon! ! ! The extra episode really makes me feel good. Who knows how good I feel? ! ! [Shy][shy][shy]

So far it seems that the writing is good and the plot is interesting. But I really don't like Shou's character, violence + coercion + PUA + condescension + unscrupulous words + unscrupulous means. The beginning of this relationship is wrong in itself. A wrong start can only lead to the wrong result. The status of the two people in the relationship is not equal at all. When Shou said you are not worthy, I felt a little want to die. It's not like the acting voice.,,. Now it has only been updated to Gong who chose to die after being hurt by words (?). I'm so angry. I hope the crematorium can be written better. I rewatched it again, and when I saw Xivier's part, I really couldn't stand it. Come on, two people just caught a worm. It promotes emotions. Even if it is not there, it still promotes emotions inexplicably. The same goes for Xivier. I won't say whether he volunteered. I can only say that living in a majestic world, heroes saving beauties are easy to use.,,

It's quite interesting, but I was so frustrated watching the protagonist in the early stages. I breathed a sigh of relief and finally saw the darkening. If you want to watch the darkening, I recommend starting from the end of Chapter 64.

Beautiful 👀, I especially like Xiver It's that feeling of tenacity, affection, and loyalty In other words, can Xiao Zhuifu really not be cremated? If it's Xivier, I'll eat a lot [give my heart]

I was tricked into entering by someone inside the square. It was so old-fashioned that it made me dream back to the 2018 The Overbearing President and the Explosive Little White Flower.

Very nice to look at. For the first time, I realized how important an outline is to readers. I was always worried about Bai Bian Shou, Xi Shang Wei (personal The author is super clever and easy to connect with. Very interesting

People who watched it in the early stage were sore at the beginning, but they have already started to awaken. The author wrote it very well. The protagonist was oppressed by the original world, so after traveling, he still put himself in the lowest position. Because of despair of feelings and use, he awakened in this situation. Three years of death escape can help Bai calm down, and it can also make Xiao face up to his feelings again and despair. In short, come on, the author, the writing is really beautiful [Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

Finally, I read this book very well. I can also see Bai Bao growing up little by little. Bai Bao is a very good person. He values ​​​​others' kindness to him. I also like him in the article. Sister Wu is really handsome. When Bai Bao falls into emotional internal conflict, the points he points out are also very essential. [Blowing Kiss] [Blowing Kiss] is also a good baby. And the author's update speed is really fast [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart] Finally, I hope the author will keep his physical and mental health [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] happy [shy] Bai Bao and someone can make peace [punch out] [punch out] Otherwise, I will beat someone up [punch out] [punch out]

It's very good-looking. I really like the character of the protagonist. It's very real. It's not like the shaky character in other novels. It's the reaction that ordinary people should have when they stray into a different world. It's very real. I really like it. [Adoration] [Adoration] Da Da, don't give up on what you like because of other people's comments. Come on, I believe in you

Great author, come on, it's super cool! [Sending Hearts] Many people say that Bai Bai is very aggrieved, but I think his character was like this at first, and then his transformation was excessive, and the improvement and breakthrough of his personality was very natural, and the transition was really good. No one is right or wrong, there is no absolute right or wrong. When you bring into their characters and personalities, the things they do are really natural, and it feels like they should do this. (Oh, it's an indescribable feeling.) Anyway, the author has written it so well. The characters are very full and layered, unlike some novels that have a dry feeling. The author who will keep chasing me loves you so much [Blow kiss] [Top post] Hey, the author insisted on finishing it. It was very good and the ending was perfect. There was no bad ending. I love you. You are already reading another book, and I have also caught up to the latest chapter of the other one. I love the author's great writing [Bird Food Masterwork] [Sending Hearts]

It looks good. In the early stage, Gong really lived a humble life, but he is also very charming. He is charming without knowing it. At first, I couldn't accept the short attack. The more I watched it, the more I watched it. The transfer station scene was so exciting and numb. I think it was the turning point of World War II. [Blowing a kiss] Later, Sirius appeared. I think he is really good. Let's rise, Gong. I can't wait to see the husband's crematorium.

The writing is very good and the main character is cute. The supporting characters are so interesting, I want to eat the sub-CP. The writing is smooth and emotional, and the emotional and career lines are particularly awesome. It really feels like a man-blood-woman story. Highly recommended to watch, there is absolutely no mess about Mary Sue. The protagonist's rants are also very funny and cute. The chase should be almost over, and the overall feeling is to drive high and go low. "The energetic feeling given by the author's character in the early stage" later became a stable story development. After watching it for a long time, I got used to it. I cried all the time when I first watched it, and then laughed and felt happy. Later on, it became a bit dull. But overall, nine points upward should be fine.

It's very nice to read. It can be seen that the author is indeed a bit jerky, but there is no such thing as making up without an outline. The overall mood and plot transformation are relatively natural. The character creation is very good. Xivier labor loves you [admiration]. When I read it, I was really attracted by Bai Zhan and Xiao Jin. The characters and characters are very distinct. It is a very good book. The low rating is probably because it has just been published. The author is really Wan Geng, so the number of words is large, and it is a big one! ! !

First of all, you can clearly feel the progress of the author's writing. It is very smooth in the early stage, and the language skills and literary quality in the later stage are constantly increasing. The plot development rhythm is also relatively relaxed and moderate, and the overall reading feeling is very good. Secondly, it is different from the general time-travel novels on the market that rely on good character to redeem or attract female insects. The anti-routine point of this novel is that rather than depicting the emotions between the two protagonists, it focuses more on the growth and breakthrough of the male insects in the distorted society of the Zerg. The most amazing thing among them is Bai Zhan's awakening of self-awareness and breakthrough in ability after his death escape. From here on, it is a pure and refreshing novel. There is also Bai Zhan's later analysis of the relationship between himself and Xiao Jin. It is really fuller and deeper than the pure love, hate, likes and dislikes in other novels. That is, you can feel that Bai Zhan's soul has completely stood up, completely independent from other time-traveling attackers who were treated differently by the female insect due to some politeness and good intentions. For readers, this kind of emotional entanglement is more memorable, more satisfying and more profound. Also, about the husband-chasing crematorium. To be honest, the pursuit of a husband in this book is the best I have ever seen. The kind of pure hatred and pure torture is another story. Two people each sacrifice their lives for each other. You must know that life is the most precious and priceless thing in the world. The moment he is willing to sacrifice his life for the other person, no one is qualified to evaluate the purity of this love. After all, love and hate are not opposite parallel lines, but two intersecting circles. Pure love or hate are too weak. The entanglement of love and hate is the norm and what makes people impressed, isn't it? In addition, although the author said that attack and control should not be entered, as long as you are sensible and not extreme, you can still try this fine chaff. After all, the biggest highlight of this article is Gong's growth and transformation, and if you don't want to be offended by some imbecile and underage comments, or be affected by other people's passionate emotions, it's best to turn off paragraph comments and read. Why is this not a long review?

It's quite interesting, different from other sweet stories. I'm looking forward to the day when the protagonist wakes up.

After reading it, I can only say that everyone's acceptance level is different. I don't think this article can make people give negative comments or insults. It is very novel among Zerg articles. I don't really like brainless sweetness, so this article is very suitable to my appetite. I read it when it was finished. Maybe the author changed some of the content. For me, the early stage was not all about sadism, but more of a flirtation. Although there were a few chapters that were a little rough in description, it was visible to the naked eye that the author's writing was getting better and better. I think the author is a talented player, which is really great. Next, I want to praise the author. I looked at the table of contents and found that the author has been updating very frequently. I can't believe that he is a new author at this speed. The author loves us so much. When the author created this book, there was a lot of controversy and he was not limited to critical opinions. It is great that the author can persist in updating. I think new authors should be more tolerant and encouraged. If you really don't like it, just leave it. Sometimes it's just not to your liking. There's nothing wrong with that. Don't insult them. This not only hurts the author, but also the readers who like the book. Well, I wish the author three happy times^ω^ good things happen

In the early stage, Bai Zhan's personality was relatively weak. Later, I personally felt that the change in personality was a bit too sudden. Although he transformed in three years of pain, as the saying goes, it is easy to change the situation, but it is hard to change the nature. Later, I felt that Bai Zhan suddenly took the path of being aloof and cold, instead of the soft bottom. The look is cold, of course, it doesn't mean that his character has collapsed in the later period, but I personally feel that the rendering is not as good as it is. The plot is okay. In the early stage, Lu Wuzhao is really strong. It can be said that the golden finger given to her is very awesome. Neither the two protagonists can fuck her, and they can't fuck her later either. I barely managed to type it with some help, and she changed her name. She was originally called Wu Weifei (it seems to be this, right?). Many things were not changed. In the early stage, the author herself said that she just wrote whatever came to her mind, and she just wrote it not long ago. Her writing style is a bit immature but not bad, and my personal feeling is that It's not cruel, and it's a bit boring to watch later, but this plot is a breath of fresh air among the Zerg novels that are a bit stereotyped nowadays. It is no longer the mode of time travel, love at first sight, and falling in love. I also think Xivier in it is very cute hahaha. It all depends on his peers. This sentence is very true.

The good-looking things are really good to me, and the sadistic things are okay in my opinion. They are indispensable in the male protagonist's growth experience. Although my face is no longer hot, my heart has stopped beating, and my whole person is calm, but the later stage is really good. Baby Bai Zhan is really growing up and I really like it. I like this one. I wasn't planning to read this one, but I've read all the author's first two books. I really like the author's writing style, so I came to read this one. I probably didn't have high hopes, but it's really good. The author is great, I like you [love], come on! (⑉• •⑉)♡ (As an aside, does the author have any groups? I found three and all are full. I want to join the group [cry] [cry])

Nice. In fact, I was a little bit disgusted with Seaver at the beginning, and I didn't mean to say anything bad about him. I am a staunch 1V1 player, and I really hated the sudden change of protagonist halfway through. Later, the author said that he might write his if line. To be honest, I felt very disconnected. But I really have to give her high marks for the author's subsequent descriptions. It was written directly that his feelings for Bai Zhan were just an ideal hero, and I didn't spend a lot of pen and ink writing about him. I think this is good. If the author really wrote it later, uh... I might still give it 5 stars, but I still feel that it is inappropriate [laughs], so that's fine. Does the author really know how to learn when he writes? Or as he said, readers can read their opinions, but don't be affected. Please keep your own pace. You can read the author's other books, they are all very good [Blow Kiss]. The Zerg she wrote is not an ordinary one, but a real two-powerful one. This kind of subject matter makes her stand out, and the genres are somewhat similar. If you like this book she wrote, you can read her other books. [Learned]

Five-star praise, must be five-star praise, the emotional line is well written, the direction of character development and personal growth are also free from the shackles of love, make your own rules, and become the master of your destiny. It's a cool article, a really cool article,

It's really complicated... I really hated Xiao Jin in the early stage, but later I felt relieved. Only when Xiao Jin dies can the crematorium be as strong as it should be. The extra is also very touching. I almost burst into tears several times. [Crying] Only I can understand myself... [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] [Crying]

Looks good. I want to see the white lamp turn black. I am being chased by my husband. I really like the protagonist. I can understand why he did this. Later on, he also pursued his husband desperately. He has a very good character design [love] [love] [love] [love]

It's very beautiful, the author is very good at writing, and it kept tugging at my heartstrings in the early stages. Then in the mid-term, I was a little nervous, because I knew I was going to write a sadistic article, and then when I saw that this was being updated, wow, it felt so good, my God, the author is so good at writing, but it's not very sadistic at all, it's just five or six pictures, it's pretty good, it's pretty good-looking, and the character of the protagonist is well shaped and has a sense of justice. I like it very much.

This is not cruel, but I accept it well. I can withstand the extreme "ψ(｀∇´)ψ" "ψ(｀∇´)ψ", which really hurts me. I like it very much. I lay under the quilt in the middle of the night wiping my tears. But I still watched it. The plot was really logical. The relationship between the two protagonists was not going smoothly, but the dark side came back. It was really fun to watch. I am the protagonist, and I lost all my money recently. I clicked on this and it immediately attracted me. Zhan Zhan is really cute. What kind of love is Jin, but he doesn't know what the right love is? Of course, this may be his experience. Anyway, I am relatively harmonious and never scold the characters. However, it depends on whether you can accept the emotions and abuse, but I really recommend watching it. (＞ｙ＜) (＞ｙ＜) (＞ｙ＜) If it doesn't work, you can skip to the darkening and watch again. The author is also very cute ヽ(*≧ω≦)ﾉOkay, I wish you all a happy reading. Ｏ(≧∇≦)ＯＯ(≧∇≦)Ｏ🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

Two beautiful words! The growth path of the protagonist is really beautiful! What's that woman's name? She's definitely a good player in promoting the plot. At first, I really thought she was a good person. She's so good-looking!

Damn, it's so beautiful. Please update soon! ! ! ! (Screaming) (distorting) (dark crawling) (convulsing) (splitting) (squirming) (eerie growling) Author, I have checked your household registration. Your mother is a girl and your father is a boy, right? If you are afraid, please update ten articles, otherwise this matter will not be finished. [Send heart][Send heart]

Oh my god, this is the only Zerg novel I've read recently that didn't live up to my expectations. After reading so many Zerg novels, I feel that the plots of all Zerg novels are almost the same, only the settings of each character are different. But this one is really very different and novel. I really hope that our little cup can take back everything that belongs to us and set up our own rules.

It's very beautiful. There are so many interesting personalities in each book [Adoration]

I saw it on Surfing. I briefly looked at it, but I haven't read it deeply. The author's writing is very good. Regarding the content, it is an ancient dog-blood crematorium routine. It has a sour feeling. As a God's perspective, we may not understand the emotional changes of the characters sometimes, but Gong and Shou are constantly growing in this process. Gong realizes that he must He must become stronger, Shou also realizes his mistake in chasing her husband at the crematorium, and learns how to love. If there is not a better ending to the ups and downs between the two, I personally think it is a pity, but in the final analysis, reading novels is to make yourself happy. If you are reading a book, don't read the comments, just play it alone.