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The author may want to distinguish himself from the situation where the Bone King is the master of power from the beginning, but he doesn't want to do everything himself. In the end, the final solution was to rub the hands, which is a bit abstract. I suggested that all the hands be alive, or use some magical props to make it more interesting [Thinking]

The writing is okay, but after this battle, the protagonist can no longer hide. The Duke before was able to detect that something was wrong with the protagonist. After the war, various countries will find out that thousands of powerful adventurers suddenly appeared in this city. Some of them protected Viscount Greene's safe return, some protected the safety of the Viscount's territory, and some took the lead in guarding the city. Their strength is resounding. With such strength, they should have become famous. There may even be smart people who have connected the group of bandits who rejected Zhao'an with these adventurers.

Read 32 books. There are 71 books to be read in the future. 160 Fantasy books. Technology (Fantasy) 38 books. 26 Books of mythology. City (high martial arts/superpowers/immortal cultivation) 158 copies. 66 Books of different worlds. Thriller/Rules 27. 35 Books daily. 55 Books in ancient times/Republic of China/modern times (imaginary). 62 Live broadcasts. 104 Volumes of female deities. Zongwu 20 copies. Villain 97. Weird 48 books. Weird 40 books. 35 Volumes of alien (animal) transformations. Urban 71. 32 Movies/TV series. 45 Comprehensive comics. 72 Volumes of animation (painting). 36 Books in the entertainment industry. 32 Adventure/wilderness/survival books. 32 Copies of Acting/National Destiny. 31 Game fanfics. 18 Games (production/esports/fusion). 45 (Serious) books. 43 Copies have been removed from the shelves. It's a pity (it was discontinued for various reasons and it was a good book that was finished) 72 books. There are 37 female videos. 23 Local Sese texts (I can just bear this kind of thing myself) ૮₍ ¬ ᴗ ¬₎ა

The plot is very smooth, the characters are complete, and the overall story is full-level daily life. The behind-the-scenes strategies and personal costumes are very beautiful. The world is biased toward medieval swords and magic, but the protagonist's subordinates can actually build artillery. There is also a bit of love in the story (I like this part the most [aunt laughs]). I look forward to the follow-up. The whole book is more of a "different world" game story, so you may be a little disappointed. When I first came in, I wanted to see the protagonist getting all kinds of bizarre game props, but halfway through I found out that there were none. However, the author's daily writing is good, and there are no poisonous points behind the scenes. However, I hope the author will find opportunities to improve the world view and combat power system. Three suggestions. Introduction of the protagonist (recalling the reading part, etc.) Chapter appendix explanation (() does not count the number of words in the chapter, but it affects the smoothness of reading) Open a separate chapter for discussion (doesn't affect reading flow) Finally, too little! ! More updates! ! [Make faces]

Original text: "Everyone present only heard a roar in their ears, and dust mist rolled up where Strong and Rhodes were, and electric current spread around from time to time. It's over. This move is my strongest martial skill. It's impossible for mediocre people to dodge it, let alone guard against it. Strong thought. However, as the hot blood in his brain gradually cooled, he suddenly realized the seriousness of the matter. He killed someone, and he killed a nobleman. According to the king's law, no one can kill nobles without permission. And with this move, Rhodes will die or not. The exclamations from the audience gradually subsided. "Tsk... The life of a mere mediocre person is not as important as my reputation. His father is just a viscount anyway. "He comforted himself like this, but could not hide his panic. "And this is a duel, and it is very common for death to occur in a duel..." The words stopped abruptly, and he discovered that the blade of the sword was not as stained with blood as he imagined. The next moment, a silver arc cut through the dust and fog. "Cang! " Strong clutched his right shoulder, his heavy sword dropped to the ground, and there was a look of pain on his face. Rhodes emerged from the morning mist unscathed, and then struck Strong on the left wrist with another straight blow. "Impossible! How could a mediocre person escape..." The pain on Strong's face turned into horror, and he quickly let the fighting energy flow to his arms to restore their strength. He reluctantly raised the heavy sword and slashed across the waist. The sword light dispersed the dust and fog. Rhodes just rolled to avoid the slashing range of the sword light, and then swung his sword to hit Strong's left leg. The latter knelt down on the ground and quickly used his heavy sword to support his body. Rhodes stood up and put his sword on the back of his neck. The referee immediately announced loudly: "The duel is over! Winner: Rod Green! " After a while, the auditorium exploded. The audience whispered among themselves, and although Rhodes couldn't hear clearly, he could roughly guess what they were talking about. "Impossible, this is impossible..." Realizing that the result of the duel had been settled, Strong was still kneeling on the ground, murmuring in a low voice. "If this was a life and death battle, you would have died several times. " Rhodes said calmly. "You are obviously a mediocre person, how can you possibly defeat me? ! "Hearing this, Strong raised his head, his eyes filled with dissatisfaction. "How can a mediocre person defeat a cultivator? ! You must be cheating! " "Cheating? Rhodes sneered, "It's just that there's no need to use grudge against people like you." " As he finished speaking, Strong suddenly felt that his body could not move, as if an invisible boulder was pressing on his back. "You..." Are you hiding your strength from beginning to end? ! Strong wanted to continue, but the words were lost. Under the pressure emanating from Rhodes, his right leg immediately knelt down, his hand removed from the hilt of the sword, struggling to support the ground. The audience screamed again and again, but the reason was different from before. Although he was still dissatisfied, there was one thing that Strong knew very well, that was, he couldn't afford to offend this boy who was almost the same age. Strong fell silent. Rhodes returned his sword to its sheath and turned towards the exit of the arena. Winning this duel took some effort. In fact, there was absolutely no need to do this, but killing with one hit was still too bluffing, so he let it go a little bit. "You..." Stasi came to greet her with a complicated expression, "... Forget it, let's talk about it when we get back. " Rhodes could roughly guess what she wanted to say, because everyone present saw him using his fighting spirit. Revealing a little bit of strength can not only get rid of trouble, but also"

Although the world level and power are not clearly introduced, you can still see

The content is okay, but no one reads it because of the name [thinking]?

At present, it has great potential, and I am also looking forward to it. I hope more people will read the author's update soon.

It's so beautiful, cheers for the author [laughs]

To be honest, I really like this type

It has great potential, as long as you don't use cheats and just be the invincible behind-the-scenes BOSS, don't take advantage of your love.

Not bad, a lot in daily life

Come on, it looks pretty good

Not bad, but not enough

Love, move more, move more

So-so. There are no big shortcomings, but there is nothing attractive either.

The book is good and comfortable to read.

It's very common, but you can have the desire to watch it.

The content can be richer. There are too many themes in the western fantasy world. You can write more [Chigua]