Not a Game? Why Is It Really the End of the World?

Overall, it looks very good. It is a very novel theme. It is the first time that I see a female protagonist acting as the official of the game and being assigned tasks by the players. The writing is fresh and smooth, and the storyline unfolds slowly with the progress of the players. There is a sense of joy (?). The fact that the protagonist camp is a zombie is also very cute. It is the fourth natural disaster that I especially like. Let's happily upgrade and build a team together~ [Blowing Kiss] And you can get some jokes, such as villagers, mouth and teeth, and edgewalkers. It feels like you have found someone with the same interests, and I am very happy [Sending Hearts] Next, let me talk about my selfishness. I hope that the author's wife can add more female supporting characters and highlights. After all, this is a female channel, and I still hope that the female characters will be more outstanding. Just like Lin Jing and Wang Qiushui at the beginning. Later, their presence is not very high. Among the active characters, Xiao Ma, Xiao Chen, and Wula Nai are female characters (in one breath) I'm sorry if I didn't think of it at first after reading it), Diver, Daobubu and Passing Water, as well as Hanshan, Koi, etc. All of them are male characters. Is there a slight gender imbalance? (It may also be because there are indeed more male players in online games? But after all the novels are written by women, I still want to see more outstanding girls). It can be seen that the author is aware of some aspects, such as national mom~ and so on, but some swear words are still used to insult women. Can it be changed to dad or something else? (Of course, it may be because I have read a lot of articles about strong women recently, qwq, I suddenly felt a little sensitive when I saw these.) I hope the author's wife can reply to me [please pay attention], but I also want to know your views here! (Please don't scold QWQ)

The writing is mediocre, the plot has some flaws, and the setting details are uninteresting. I just glanced at them all and skipped them all () There are more than half male players, there are many scenes, and the world background is more male-oriented. From this perspective, the reading experience is not good. A slightly better point is that there are a relatively high proportion of female characters among the main characters. After overcoming the above reading difficulties, you can enjoy a medium-length novel completed by a female channel:) *The above is my personal subjective reading experience* In order to comment more objectively, I manually counted the characters up to the time when the human NPC Chen Wei appeared. (Detailed statistics are from the fourth paragraph onwards) Disclaimer: In fact, there are not more than half male characters (7/17, slightly more than 40%). My misconception may be due to the fact that male players seem to have more roles, and players account for a larger proportion of the roles. No change in rating. Reason: According to my two reading experiences, this book has the characteristics of immature writing, unsmooth plot, flat and rough character creation, and there are only half male characters, but it still belongs to too many types for me (about 40%) Details: Female(10) ##Vase (0) ##General (4) Particularly mentioned in Chapter 27 of Ma Jiao; - Ma Jiao's voice is a natural soft girly voice, no matter how hard she presses her voice, it is still soft and cute. Coming from the mouth of a man with a serious face, there was no slight sense of inconsistency. Another official, Xiaozhao run quickly Ula Ula (milk) Uchiha meow ##more important (6) Protagonist Lin Yi Cousin Lin Jing Lin Jing's friend Wang Qiushui/call me Qiuqiu We are little bastards (Chapter 23) The girl who received Lin Jing was a police officer. Her surname was Ma and her name was Ma Xunyan. Human NPC Chen Wei Male(7) ##Vase (0) ##General (4) Official Mr. Izumi on active duty in the Navy Official Researcher Big Koi Fish Official [Old Uncle Zhou] engages in the breeding of fine seeds. - Uncle Zhou's voice sounds like he is extremely virtuous, scholarly, and wise. Aba Aba (grandson) ##more important (3) (Chapter 9) Wang Qiushui's brother Wang Hanshan, a well-known professional game anchor Ghost Show Thirteen Senior diver [didn't say] ##General (7+) Number of players, including ids: Ham flavored pomegranate The young and estranged eldest son (Uchiha's friend) Wang Hanshan's group of friends/fans, those with IDs include: leaf flat Shovel General red rice fruit Different ways Years pass by ##more important (1) system

The pinnacle of the fourth natural disaster article that Tomato has seen so far, the perspective of players transforming into zombies is really strange, and the related logic is also very thorough. What I like very much is that the heroine is biased but not a virgin at all. She is kind to the players, and her cooperation with the authorities is profit-oriented rather than emotion-oriented. The heroine is not tied down by emotions. She wants to be strong and get out of control. This setting really pokes me. This kind of independent, self-improving and non-CP female protagonist is really great, great, great! I hope the author can continue writing. If I am not on this platform, I can also go to other platforms to catch up [cry][cry] The content starts with the heroine falling out of the game. Because her father has cancer, the game opens a series of backdoors and cooperates with the first world to treat her father. What follows is the falling out of the game to varying degrees. I understand that it is difficult to hide the appearance and origin of the heroine, but why can't she fabricate an identity like a spokesperson? The heroine's body and parents are the weak points that the first world can control. Wouldn't it be easy for the heroine to be controlled by others if she reveals her true identity as the alien queen? But if it were a spokesperson or even a clone, a first-world slingshot, in order not to face the wrath of the alien queen, he would treat the heroine with courtesy. Wouldn't this be more reasonable? Moreover, the heroine's social network seems to be very poor. She doesn't have any trustworthy friends except her family. Otherwise, she would not have thought of only looking for her cousin to join the game at the beginning. But if the heroine had a relatively normal life before, how could she not have a single trusted friend? I think it would be more appropriate if the role of cousin was replaced by a friend, because family is a forced relationship that implies control, while friends are more free and equal. All in all, I feel like it started high and went low. If there are any changes in the subsequent plot, I will review it again.

Maybe it's because of playing the game that the ratio of men to women is relatively unbalanced. I hope it can be adjusted in the future🤔The characters have their own characteristics and everyone has their own rules and standards of action. The protagonist is biased towards justice, but he is not a virgin and will also look at personal selfishness. Player conflicts are not common. Overall, it is pretty good. I look forward to future development. After all, it is a new book. Let me give you a five-star encouragement first.

I haven't read much, but when I read it, I realized that this book is different from those templates of The Fourth Natural Disaster. It is not a solo show of the protagonist. The distribution of group portraits is very reasonable, and the logic is smooth. It can all be connected. This beats 90% of the garbage novels on this website. Although the infrastructure content is very ordinary, the focus of the description is on the characters, making the whole story not boring. Moreover, the players have distinct personalities. Although the creation of some characters is still a bit flat, it does not affect the look and feel. It is even very graphic, and you can naturally imagine it when listening to the book. PS: Let me make a digression. I couldn't stop reading it. When I opened the book details, I found that the author's name looked very familiar. Then I opened it a little bit and hhhh, it turned out to be the author of the book "Crane King" (this is fate!!!). As expected, no matter which book the author is awesome, no matter how ordinary the subject matter is, it can be interesting and exciting.

Recommend! Overall it looks pretty good, but in the later stages it is basically not related to the structure of the Fourth Natural Disaster. The world view is very interesting, the plot design is very coherent, and the later stage is about saving the world. The plot is also quite interesting, I like my grandma hahaha However, I don't know how to explain the negotiation between the heroine and the officials. Maybe it was a little too early to negotiate with the officials, plus there were parents, relatives and friends. So it feels a bit like being checked and balanced 🤔 Overall it's not a super cool article

It's cool,,,, the setting is cool, the plot is cool, the fourth natural disaster is cool,, the only thing that's not so cool is that there are more women than men. Thank you, why does the heroine have so many highlights? There are also a bunch of men, eh, eh, anyway, I like to watch all girls.

Like it very much! Some of the humorous elements in it also really poked me. Overall, there are no surprises. It is one of the few female videos I have ever watched that made me feel comfortable. The heroine is not a tool in it. Most of the highlights and shining points are female characters. This is a female channel~ I like it~

I didn't expect this book to be so short. I think the rating would be a nine. It's so good that I'll give it five stars! The protagonist traveled through the system and came to the alien brood (Zombie Queen?). I originally thought that it would be a big promotional video, but I didn't expect that the player would directly transform into a small zombie. It seems that the description of "The player rubbed his eyes in disbelief, but when he lowered his head and saw that his hands were full of broken eye fragments" left me. I thought there would be a very cool expansion pack for players to see, but it turned out that the little zombies were just carrying bricks and building infrastructure for the protagonist and slowly growing up, but the writing was very interesting. I don't play PVP games, but the team battles and battle fields made me laugh out loud. This game (the protagonist) does not hide its unscientific nature, with a holographic experience and twice the time flow rate. Seeing the latest progress, the protagonist has already planned to exchange gold and officialdom for daily necessities. The author set the time very strictly and even made tables. I feel that the fun part of this book lies in the infrastructure and slow career opening. Anyway, I like the description of the current career placement of the two PCs and the expansion of farming and moving bricks. There was also a conflict between players. I remember it seemed like the conflict between the two parties was over whether gold (the game currency) was forced to trade. Because I have never seen this kind of plot in a novel, I was so panicked at the time that I thought the protagonist would come out to mediate the video evidence... In short, it can be seen that the author is very good at writing. I also like to see the various small forces that the players have divided into! But one thing to be clear is that if you like to see the mastermind behind the scenes pretending to be a big fan, etc., This type of article is not suitable for you. (I usually read this type of game, so part of the plot in this book: For example, the first player is the biological sister who the protagonist calls to play. Later, someone from the country comes to ask the sister and directly confesses the protagonist. I didn't like it at the time. However, in the subsequent plot, a very weak survivor suffering from some disease was seen by the official infiltration player. It seemed that he went offline directly and gave the special medicine to the protagonist. Although this sentence was mentioned in one sentence, it was very refreshing. It was a little bit more exciting after being poisoned). There is no place that is too dark, and the system's cheats are limited. The protagonist has tried his best to maintain the order of the game and the placement of civilian NPCs. After reading 100 chapters, the number of players is still the limit of 100. I am particularly looking forward to more players in the later stage who will violate the plot. How many places will be available next time? Three hundred people, five hundred people, or a thousand people? Urgent, urgent, please update me.

The protagonist disguises another real world as a holographic virtual game to attract humans from the first world, and rescues himself while completing game tasks. He does not join forces with the official to give hope to the second world. The game develops bit by bit, and the huge world view gradually unfolds. It is full of details and focuses on reality. The reactions of the players are also very interesting. In short, this book is logically logical but exciting and interesting. It is really well written. I am currently following the update, and I am really sorry to hear that the author is going to discontinue the update and plan to speed up the progress. However, it is true that the style of tomato novels is gradually being limited. There are fewer and fewer novel novels, which are either discontinued or unfinished. Many readers cannot maintain a rational attitude when facing novels whose settings do not meet their needs but whose plots are attractive. I hope that the author will not be affected by some unreasonable negative comments, and I also hope that I can try my best to give a complete ending. Finally, I wish the author a happy three-dimensional life ヾ(✿ﾟ▽ﾟ)ノ

The plot is very novel and attractive, the writing is also very good, there are funny parts and touching parts, there are also many female characters who are not three-dimensional but very powerful, and the world view is also very good. Some of the plots are a bit confusing. They have been teasing male players with wives in the first world to fall in love and kill each other. Love is a bit uncomfortable.

It's a book with a very novel setting. Because the subject matter was too novel, I planned to abandon it at first, but I still couldn't stand the freshness and the blessing of the writing, so I continued reading. Well, the more I follow it, the more I catch up. But it's a new book (uncomfortable). After I finished it, I was itching to see the development of the story below. I think books with similar settings should not have meal replacements. There are currently no big problems with character portrayal. This may be because there are very few apocalyptic stories with this setting, so there is a slight logic bug. Full of expectations (≧▽≦) Hmm... For example, there is a section in the middle where the loli character's voice used by Han Shan (the player) is the character's own, not his. But later it was said that the player's voice was his own, not the character's, which was a bit contradictory. But I can't find which chapter and chapter it is, I look forward to the correction (｡ò ∀ ó｡)

In the fourth day of the disaster story, the proportion of supporting roles is pretty normal, but I hope that the supporting female characters will have more highlights. The game planning is a bit weak, and will be filled in according to the player's route. I have cooperated with Guo Jia, and I think it has positive values. After the large-scale struggle, the first world did not expand on the style of the game. It would be better if it could be added. The content mainly focuses on the development of the second world content, which is generally good.

Oh my gosh! This book was not very good at the beginning, but as I read on, I found that it started to get deeper, and it doesn't matter if there are some minor flaws. Especially in the chapter about the cavemen, men are self-sufficient in having children, annihilating all other vulnerable groups. Although the process was gruesome, it did tell something and made me watch it. (Ps: I accidentally watched the related animation before, and that one look was so disgusting that I still have a psychological shadow after almost ten years) Very well combined with reality! I have read another book by the author before, but I didn't finish it. There is nothing wrong with the writing, but I lack the interest to read it. This book clearly feels like the writing has improved! And things with depth can be expressed better. Come on come on!

There are too few post-apocalyptic games on female channels, so I can't bite the bullet and watch them. The plot at the beginning is too slow, making it a bit boring to watch, but I still insist on watching it. I can't help it. There are so few of these kinds of games. It's so pitiful.

Very nice! ! ! ! ! ! Why are there so few people? The current early development is very attractive. It does not dwell too much on the trivial details of the infrastructure. It focuses on the story that promotes the development of the plot. It is very fast and does not drag out. The advancement in the game world is also very fun. The settings of the player's attributes and talents are also normal and in line with the plot. There are not so many fancy and cool special skills hahaha Recommended recommended recommended (＾ω＾)👍🏻

Very novel subject matter, very rigorous logic, and NPCs who are often PUA'd by players and "cow horses". Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha group portrait with a lot of PUA players and "cowardly" NPCs. I really like it! Big update soon! Two more updates in the new year! [Laughing][laughing][laughing] After the national team ends, the interesting boss has all kinds of ideas. It's so real. Hahaha. In order to verify whether living creatures can be teleported, even rice bugs have to try it. Hahaha [laughing] [laughing] The heroine is speechless but can't say it. Hahahaha

It's almost the same outline as the one I read before (almost the same However, this book has fine-tuned some settings according to the author's preferences, and the subsequent plot should also be what the author wants to write. However, after listening to five chapters, it is not as readable compared to the one I followed before. I feel that the author has refined some settings but the macro structure is not very complete. I prefer group portraits, but the structure feels a bit loose. If you want to improve, I suggest you make a systematic adjustment and upgrade based on your own interests, or make it simpler and do more subtractions. If it was my first time reading this type of book, I would probably continue reading it, but compared to the last book I read, the double-crossing game about cultivating immortals, it wasn't that good.

Generally speaking, the relationship with the country is very poor, but the setting is good. In fact, I think I prefer to cooperate with the country, because I always feel uncomfortable with conspiracy theories about our country. It is normal to be tempted, but the author obviously did not grasp this degree. When it comes to the interaction between the heroine and the country. Talking about it has become very weird. I hope I can revise it in the future. These paragraphs are really affecting the senses, but the other content is quite interesting. Skipping these exchanges does not affect the overall situation. The progress is less than half of the progress. I think the star will be changed after reading it. Come on, please do it.

Good-looking and good-looking (*ᵒ̶̶̷̀ω˂̶́∗)੭₎₎̊₊♡ If the author changes the platform to write, please be sure to bring our group of readers who are waiting to be fed˃̣̣̥᷄⌓˂̣̣̥᷅ ˃̣̣̥᷄⌓˂̣̣̥᷅ Ah wow, I ate the mindless comments in one bite. (ノ_；＼( ｀ロ´)／Who dares to bully me! Let me lend you my cat to suck ฅ^•ﻌ•^ฅ I hope the author is happy and your loyal readers will always support you and love you (づ￣3￣)づ╭❤~

138. I think it's more serious and serious. The player's charade is quite funny, but every time the camera pulls back to the heroine, her style of painting changes. It's not easy to survive, and the situation is quite serious. It's a bit tiring to watch.

This is my favorite story in the Tomato software. I would give it 9.999999999 Out of 10 points... The point that was deducted is the feeling of loss after reading the entire story in one go. The story really gets more exciting as it goes on, whether it is the sailing team that keeps losing its memory during the sailing activities but finally manages to find its position by relying on unity and stacking up lives; Space and time are still chaotically folded. In the future, they keep returning to the past nodes, helping their past selves again and again, helping the koi reach the end, and get the reverse anchor point... And the system Yiyun approaches Zhu Zhechi, and is marked by the heroine Lin Yi step by step. Especially the alien body used by the heroine in the end, and the body of the heroine used by Yi Yun. The two looked at each other at this magical stroke! The players, including the humans in the second world, are not at all the stereotypes of the general fourth natural disaster novels. Each individual is endowed with their own charm. Xing Hui, who did not change his righteousness even after the belief in the cult was shattered, Feng Qi, who was anchored to protect his daughter but wanted to kill her daughter in the end, killed old people, children and women in order to survive, was eventually anchored by the evil god and had to survive by eating his own eggs, as well as Jiang Lu, an unexpected source of pollution, and the twisted mother-daughter relationship between her and Ms. Ji... The author writes with great care and detail, and the score of this article should definitely not be more than eight points. Among science fiction articles about future imagination, it is really outstanding! Just like the name of the game, "Law-abiding Little Zombies", players are having fun, relying on unity and fearlessness to save two worlds. I really like the author's ending. This story has no ending. Lin Yi, the game, and the players must be living happily in another parallel world.

The subject matter is quite interesting, but the heroine is too limited. She has family, friends, and relatives. I also understand why there are many orphan protagonists in this genre. It is even more difficult to explain in the official part. The main reason is that the foundation is too poor (the heroine directly speaks and lets others play the game. From that chapter on, everyone should be prepared for the heroine to fall off soon). However, for the fun of the second world, it is actually tolerable to close your eyes and skip the uncomfortable parts (currently seen in chapters 35-36, I will add more later) Oh, yes, there is another advantage. Compared to most articles on female channels, this book has more excellent female characters, although the majority are still male... Sigh The design of Father's Cancer in the first world is also quite bad. I don't understand why it is written like this. It has no meaning except to add trouble to the readers. If I have time, I might as well write more about the development of the second world. I hope the author can make things right later. Update: Chapter 62, Chapter 149 (what is written here is the first world, which is relatively poisonous compared to the second world) When I read it later, I felt that the part about my father might be to pave the way for him to enter the second world. Oh my God! ! ! The part about Koi in the latest updated world view is so shocking, but the bad thing is that he still doesn't seem to have chosen to side with the heroine this time. Maybe everything will be like the countless times before. Alas, I hope he can figure it out and make the right choice in the future.

This is the first novel of this type that I have come across. The setting is so magical, so novel, and simply amazing. I thought it was just a simple game at the end and saved the boss, but I didn't expect that the world view is so big. It has been very mysterious since the beginning of the Sky Tower. The world is entangled in a paradox cycle, and the truth appears. It is a shock like a sudden realization. After reading it, it is quite shocking. There are only more than 200 chapters. Such a large amount of books. The author perfectly creates a clear logical closed loop, which is also very awesome. Recommended!

It's really really good. I tried to find a similar book because of this book, but I couldn't find it for a long time. They were all ambiguous things without any CP. I'm the kind of person who won't want to read a book if I hear it repeated over and over again, but I couldn't bear to read this book. It's really good! So I won't listen in noisy places, and I will enjoy it slowly when I'm at home.

The setting is very interesting. It's rare to see a book with a normal female supporting character in a Tomato heroine without CP. I give it a thumbs up. Nowadays, there are female characters with special characteristics and they are very normal. [Crying] I am so touched. Finally, it is not a novel about a boy and a boy.

Long live! ! ! I finally finished reading it. I feel it is a very novel subject. I originally thought it was about turning into a zombie. Why is it called a mutant? Then after thinking about it for a long time, I thought, maybe it's just a name. Result! ! ! ! ? ? ? So you told me that game invasion is a reality? ? ? ! ! ! It feels like the players are all shocked, hahahahaha There are no flaws in the creation and foreshadowing of the protagonist. How should I put it, I can only praise the author constantly [send heartfelt] Each character has his own purpose, his own position, and his own reasons. They are all tenable and clear [Adoration] [Adoration] Like it! ! ! ! !

Beautiful and interesting. I have long wanted to read a book about the heroine + the fourth natural disaster + another world.

It's even interesting, and good-looking. In a sense, it's a group portrait (?). Every character is quite likable. I can't go into the details, but it's generally good-looking (there are no flaws, so it's worth watching).

I've seen more than 60 chapters so far, and it's so interesting to see the game world and players causing trouble! ! The only bad thing is that she felt a little aggrieved when she contacted the authorities. In the apocalyptic world, she was the queen. When she returned to the real world, she was monitored and threatened again... But I still can't stand the world view, the players, and the various plots of the female editor-in-chief. It's so interesting! After reading Chapter 270, there is nothing serious about it. The situation of being suppressed by the official uniform mentioned earlier is gone. The heroine exposed her identity to a few ordinary players. The later part of the time loop is quite brain-burning and has a suspenseful feel.