The 3s-Rank Guide Returns: Seven Powerhouses Fight to Pamper Me

After reading it, the character setting and plot content of the novel are quite good. I can see the growth process of the heroine. The details of the interaction between the heroine and Jin Yu and Bai Xu are quite pricking to me. The other five male protagonists are dispensable, because the relationship in the later period is all about completing tasks (there is no emotion, it is all skills). In fact, the plot lines of Qilin, Si Yan, and Lu Xian can be expanded a bit, as there are too few of them! Qilin is a killer but has a baby face, which is quite a contrast. I thought there would be interesting interactions with the heroine later on after they got to know each other, but there was no such thing. Si Yan has a life of immortality for ten thousand years, and the previous articles are pretty good. I thought that he would gradually develop feelings for the heroine later on because he is immortal and has endless life. I think he should be slow to treat relationships. The process of getting to know each other and falling in love needs to be described in detail, but there is no description except after it appears in the strategy... The appearance of Lu Xian, a yandere, is also quite unique, and he basically does not appear in the rest of the article. I feel that a lot of details have been omitted... And the further you read, the more you look at it, it feels a bit confusing. Some plots are simply abbreviated or skipped, which makes it difficult to connect with the plot when reading. The ending is too hasty, and the character behind the heroine is not very stand-alone. Without the extra, it looks like it is an open ending... Summary: Not bad, that's all.

I like this kind of realistic story about conspiracy, evil in human nature, and profit maximization. There is a kind of candy that is eaten inside glass slag. In the previous life, it was controlled by bad men. In this life, I have to clean up my innocence and conquer the bad men.

After reading the whole book, I give it an 8 for the characters, but I can only give it a 6 for the plot. When I read the first half of the story, each character in the story had its own personality, and I formed an impression of them in my mind. Unfortunately, in the second half of the article, she/he changed a little, and I actually felt that it was not her/him. It just gives people a very strange feeling, and it doesn't feel like something she/he would do. I agree with some writers that their characters, after they are first conceived, will play out their stories on their own, as if they were real people. In the writing process, I think it would be better not to try too hard to control the characters you write, but to let them make choices with their own personalities and let the story develop. The story background of the entire article is attractive, but the author's handling of the timeline and the continuity of the context is not good enough, resulting in jumps and breaks in many chapters. In the second half of the article, the time travel appears to accompany each male protagonist. The plot is written very suddenly, a bit like it is written just for the sake of it. There is less foreshadowing in the previous chapter and it is not particularly coherent. It feels like the male protagonists at the end of the guide are like separate little stories and have little to do with the main plot. In general, the concept of the article is unique and the characters are also unique. It would be better if the author based on the childhood background of each character at the beginning, polished the character of each character and what choices they would make in the development of the story. Don't ignore the characteristics of the story characters themselves in order to write a certain plot. The article would be particularly good if it were revised, but the amount of work would be huge. This is also very difficult to accomplish when writing a novel, as once the article is finished it is difficult to make revisions. I hope the author can hone his logic and writing style more and bring us better articles. (I feel that the author is more suitable for writing fast-travel novels. This kind of novel does not require the coherence of short stories before and after as well as full-length novels. You can also use this to practice your skills. Come on~

Please don't replace Jin Yao 😢 I want to see a cold-blooded superior chasing his wife in the crematorium in the later stage, and making amends for the heroine. It would be too cheap to simply replace him.

Oh my god, it looks good. Although the jump seems a bit confusing, I can understand it. The heroine is a very good person. She is sincere and sincere. She also has a good outlook on life and works hard to become stronger. She has a good relationship with the two main male protagonists currently appearing (Crane and Wolf). There is a lot of foreshadowing. I look forward to the follow-up story of each male protagonist regaining his memory and the heroine's growth and reunion with her parents. There are so many foreshadowings, so remember to fill in the holes and don't give up [Blow kiss]

I think it's very interesting. It really hit my XP. I didn't get into it at first, but then I got better and better. It felt very good. Although the plot may not be that complete, the writing is pretty good. I can at least give it an 8.5. Great cheers to the author! 💕💕

It's so pretty, not a traditional whistle, but pretty much the same. The heroine needs to conquer seven people, regain everything that belongs to her, and slowly become stronger. The current progress is: Boyfriend——Bai He🦩 No status but competition - gray wolf🐺 ... Looking forward to the follow-up

Very good-looking, very good-looking, wonderful Xiang Shaowen The heroine always insisted on her freedom and never gave up her freedom because of love. Then I originally thought that the role of Jin Yao was the heroine's one-sided love. Later I found out that they were going in both directions, but Jin Yao was too self-interested. I regretted losing her [and almost cried]. The hurt the heroine suffered because of him was also real, so this wife-chasing crematorium will definitely not catch up. Ahhhhh, it was so well written, I don't know what to say. This book has been recommended many times on the recommendation page, but I have never read it. I regret not reading it earlier 😘[Flowing Kiss] It's so good and beautiful.

The plot is very attractive, and Bai Xu is my favorite so far. So far, I feel that Edward and Lu Xian are pure bad guys, and the strategy is okay. I hope they won't be whitewashed later, and they won't be the male protagonist.

It's a very nice book. The heroine is great. I give it a five-star recommendation. Please keep reading~ 😘