In the era of national awakening, high school student Lin Yu awakened to a power that he had never heard of and did not sound domineering - totem. And when I was experimenting with my first skill after awakening, I accidentally summoned my best friend, which made the situation awkward... And then I discovered that my grandfather, who was just a librarian, was actually a hidden boss! Then grandpa said that his powers were the strongest conceptual level like his. Is Lin Yu going to reach the pinnacle of his life from now on? After that, Lin Yu discovered that his power was actually a large plug-in. Others' plug-ins only had an old man, but his own power contained the "grandpa" sleeping in the sky...
Reader comments
The first chapters are a bit short, but later chapters are longer. So far, the plot is okay, and the foreshadowing is pretty good, but it just feels like there's a knife in it. Moreover, there are not many battle scenes described, and the protagonist does level up very quickly, which is in line with the setting of Tomato Shuangwen, but there is not much fighting.
The content of each subsequent chapter has indeed increased, and there are also large chapters of 4,000 words.
The appearance of Star Lock is relatively sudden, and the description of various matters before awakening is not detailed enough. The big test only advances the description of the plot, and there are very few descriptions of combat power at each level. It jumps to the concept level in one go, which is a big jump. The protagonist is also less established before awakening. Novice authors still need to polish it more, come on.
The first chapters are a bit short, but later chapters are longer. So far, the plot is okay, and the foreshadowing is pretty good, but it just feels like there's a knife in it. Moreover, there are not many battle scenes described, and the protagonist does level up very quickly, which is in line with the setting of Tomato Shuangwen, but there is not much fighting. The content of each subsequent chapter has indeed increased, and there are also large chapters of 4,000 words.
The appearance of Star Lock is relatively sudden, and the description of various matters before awakening is not detailed enough. The big test only advances the description of the plot, and there are very few descriptions of combat power at each level. It jumps to the concept level in one go, which is a big jump. The protagonist is also less established before awakening. Novice authors still need to polish it more, come on.