This is my first work, so I’d be grateful for your feedback.
The main story begins in Chapter Four.
Even in the 22nd century, the world has never truly known peace. This is the story of a half-mechanical boy (or so he believes) and a young lady who suffers from a psychological disorder and is afraid of interacting with people.
“Chuang Jie, come over and play!”
“Let go of the young lady! Or you’ll be scrapped, and that’ll be the least of your problems.”
I’d rather work others to death than suffer myself. (Really?)
“I hear you’re strong. Come play with me.”
No one knows about the training that lasted dozens of days. One punch at the limit shocks the world!
Maybe I really will die here today... but I’ll never give up without a fight!
The protagonist isn’t invincible, but pretends to be for others.
He levels up using special substances.
He’s a little weak at first, but gradually grows stronger.
He uses every means at his disposal to defeat his enemies in battle.
He’s excellent at learning and imitation.
He can be a bit airheaded, but he also has a pure exterior and a scheming side.
The protagonist hates trouble, but sometimes goes out of his way to get involved for his friends and even other people.
He has to figure out many of his skills and techniques on his own, while watching all kinds of older movies and shows.
My plan is to have Chuang Jie gain the power to transmigrate between worlds after I’ve mostly finished telling his story in his own world. He won’t go to another world, but to other anime universes.
Where should he go first? You get to decide.
Stay tuned. Thank you!
Give your first work five stars. I hope you can give me more suggestions.