This is my first work, please give me feedback.
The main plot begins in Chapter 4.
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In the 22nd century, the world has never been truly peaceful. This is a story about a cyborg boy (in his heart) and a young lady (who suffers from mental illness and is afraid of contact with humans).
"Chuangjie, come over and play!"
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"Let go of the eldest lady! Otherwise it won't be as simple as scrapping it."
I would rather tire others to death than let myself suffer. (Really?)
I heard you are very strong. Come play with me.
After dozens of days of training, no one knew, and the ultimate punch shocked the world!
Maybe I will really die here today... But I will never give up easily!
The protagonist is not invincible, but he pretends to be invincible for others.
Rely on special substances to upgrade.
The protagonist is a little weak in the early stage, but gradually becomes stronger in the later stage.
Use all means to defeat the enemy in battle.
Strong learning and imitation abilities.
Some are naturally dull, but they are white and black.
The protagonist is a person who is very afraid of trouble, but sometimes he will cause trouble for his friends and even other people.
Many of the protagonist's skills and moves require you to slowly explore and watch many previous film and television works.
My idea is to roughly tell the story of Chuangjie's own world, and then let Chuangjie gain the power to travel across the world, not to another world, but to other anime universes.
Where is the first stop? You decide.
Stay tuned. Thanks!
Reader comments
Give your first work five stars.
I hope you can give me more suggestions.
Give your first work five stars. I hope you can give me more suggestions.