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Dear Li Hua: Hello! By the time you read this review, I will have become a mature author. I think you should be happy about this, because the girl who used to code for many late nights and submit articles to many websites but was rejected again and again has now become a young author who is liked and praised. Please bless me. I want to tell you some good news. While writing this short story, I learned how to transition scenes, how to smoothly connect the characters' actions and dialogues, and how to write the character's own personality. But I have to say that I still have some unresolved problems. I had a big problem with the setting of supporting characters and did not play out the way this theme should be. Do you also regret this? It's okay, I've learned my lesson and will continue to improve. My comment section is very interesting. I have learned a lot in it, and there are many things I didn't know about, all from the suggestions given to me by readers. I sometimes feel sad because a young reader has posted a long paragraph expressing his anger towards that character. I feel very sorry because my mistake has hurt their emotions. There are a lot of cute emoticons in the comment area. You like them too, right? I have collected a lot. I will send them to you next time we chat. Li Hua, I have many stories in my mind that I want to share with you, and I have been working hard on this. I gave this little story a pretty good rating, four stars. It's snowing heavily tonight, if only that was money. Hope to meet you soon. Your most loyal friend, half pot

It's quite good to watch, but there are a lot of scenes in Wen Ning'an's plot at the beginning. If you skip it, you'd be afraid of missing out on the wonderful cooking. The heroine is constantly being controlled, which makes me feel particularly uncomfortable. If you don't mind, you can still watch it. I re-read the comment section, and I was really touched by the author's sincerity. Every comment has a reply, and the readers' opinions are listened to. I want to say that the writing is really beautiful, except for the characterization of the supporting characters. There are some shortcomings, but these are not achieved overnight. I believe that the writing will get better and better [Sending Hearts]

Boss, I want to follow you forever! ! ! The following is demining: 1. In the novel, there will be a person who steals the limelight from the heroine (there are not many scenes, and he is written to death in the third world-Yancheng), and the subsequent ending of that person is not physical and mental abuse, but a conscience discovery, and discovers the secret that the heroine is not the original heroine, and uses his own life to help the heroine (this preference depends on the individual, I am a female protagonist, I think it is okay, I can watch it) 2. The heroine will be a bit stupid, and you can even see the clear stupidity at the beginning (). This may be a minefield for some babies, but the author's writing style is also improving, and it will be much better later. However, because it is a soft beauty theme, you need to grasp a certain degree. If you want to see a strong and scheming heroine, you can avoid it 3. There is someone outside (snake). If you don't like this, you can skip the disaster. 4. Although it is a live broadcast, there are relatively few barrage parts. There is no way to watch the barrage in the following worlds. The worlds behind the assistant (system - Wuyan) have not followed up (the author has written reasons here). Those who want to watch the barrage interact with the assistant can choose as appropriate. 5. Love at first sight is an old joke, it's like getting married right away after just one glance. If you want to see the long-lasting love, you can avoid lightning. ⚡️Old⚡️big⚡️you⚡️write⚡️⚡️good⚡️good⚡️ah⚡️ But it's a pity that Wuyan can't follow him. By the way, does Wuyan's identity have anything to do with the subsequent plot? I feel that this horror game is not simple🤔There is also the main system And, no! Want! Exist! Word! Affection! Knock! Rotten! The relationship between Huang Mao and Xiao Luo is related to the subsequent plot, so don't talk about romance here (horror) Actually, I also want that Bible (cross out) Boss, I'll give you 520 words😋💪

Zundu looks great. I will check it out as soon as it is updated. The author needs to pay attention to rest. I like the heroine very much. She is so delicate and soft [adoration] [adoration] I just picked up this book today. I read it in one go and added it to my bookshelf. Cheers to the author [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

After reading the first copy, in general, the author's writing style is very delicate. The heroine is a kind of stupid beauty who is delicate and weak. She is taken advantage of by White Lotus and some people in the team. The chapters I have read so far are a bit cowardly and don't poke my xp. I hope I can understand the true face of those people and be smarter. But those barrages are very interesting and interesting [Chigua] This is my first time writing a book review, so I may be a little embarrassed. [Salute]

I'm a person who prefers to leave a few chapters and love to write. I never thought that I would finish reading this novel in one go. Oh my God, it's so beautiful [shy][shy][shy][shy][shy] Also, I see some comments are so unfriendly because they are stressed. I just don't understand what the author said. I'm so stupid [laughing awkwardly][laughing awkwardly]

It's so beautiful~ Soft and beautiful, the plot of the copy is also great, please give it a boost, the author~

Invincible is so good-looking, the heroine is sometimes clumsy, sometimes cute and lovable, and she doesn't let up at all at critical moments. The characters are described and portrayed in detail. I really like watching it. Big support for the author! [Love][love][love]

In fact, when I saw the memories of Lu Feng's death, I was really sorry. Two people who were obviously in love ended up because of a talent. . . Maybe it was the last "I'm sorry" that made me cry. My tears were so low. . . . (Personal opinion) This book is still very interesting, I recommend reading it [laughing]

New readers must read on. It feels so ordinary at first, but the further you read, the better it gets! ! The heroine is constantly improving and getting stronger. Especially the life background of Wan Qiwang (Mo Hope) written in the back, the large writing style really surprised me! [Adoration][Adoration]

Although this is the book I have read in this genre that I want to read the most. The heroine is cute and charming throughout the whole process. Apart from anything else, I give it full marks. The story is compact and I basically read it in one sitting. I hope the author will continue to work hard. In some books, I found that the heroine changed and the story was not that exciting after reading it. I also like the type of male protagonist designed by the author👅

So pretty! ! ! ! Our Lulu is also a kind of beautiful, but a little fishing-type beauty who is a bit unaware. Our Wanye brother is also six years old. How should we put it? To the outside world, he is a bit cool and fierce, but to me, Luoluo, he is a bit silly. I can only say that the temperament of a cool guy disappears in front of me, Luoluo. And the recent Bailiyan is also a very good-looking handsome guy. Don't ask me why I use "good looks" to describe a handsome guy. If you want to know, you can come and take a look.

It's super good-looking, and I can see that the heroine is growing up all the time. The setting of the male protagonist is super good-looking, with a sense of astringency and pulling, the hero falls, and the heroine is unmoved. Moreover, the horror game's imagination is also very good, and the plot is smooth. I don't understand why the rating is so low?

The sunlight shines on the table through the gaps in the trees in the courtyard, making the apples on the table seem to be plated with gold, rendering them expensive and beautiful, just like the golden apples that the three goddesses competed for. ! One sentence, oh! This book is super good, super good-looking, I can read it any time I want, it will be a heart-throb, a heart-throb!

That female supporting character really annoyed me. Fortunately, the control was later released. Overall, the rice is quite delicious. Several male protagonists like it very much

I like this novel very much. The heroine is delicate, soft and beautiful, and the storyline is also in line with my taste. I hope the author can update more [flying kisses] [flying kisses] [flying kisses], I cheer you up [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart]

Very nice! ! ! ! The heroine is delicate, but she uses men's feelings for her to plan for herself. She thinks she is passive but is actually dominant. It's really delicious. The author must not stop updating and abandoning the article. I will always support you! ! ! ! ! ! ! Many of my favorite articles have either been discontinued or abandoned, and their mentality has collapsed due to pressure and evaluation, and they can no longer write. I will always support the teacher! ! ! ! ! Come on! ! ! ! !

It's very beautiful, the characters are very vivid, I especially like the heroine's setting, she's cute and smart, and the article is very interesting and novel. I will follow you, my wife, for the rest of my life [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]

It's really super pretty!

It's very exciting. Reading it in one sitting is not enough.

It's so beautiful. I like the author's portrayal of the character's appearance and personality [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

This is my most favorite book. It's so beautiful.

The writing is not stupid at all, and the plot is very interesting. I originally wanted to watch it to gain weight, but every time I see an update, I can't help but want to click in. Alas. The heroine is a growth type, and the whole process is very natural, very! Very comfortable to read!

Teacher I will always follow you. I was so happy to see the transformation of the heroine from the early stage to the later stage. Ahhhhhh, the black sesame glutinous rice balls are really delicious. After reading several copies, I can see the heroine's little changes. She is growing in each copy. It's so cool.

It's super, super good-looking, and the writing is very good. The plot twists and turns again and again. It's very exciting. The characters are also very detailed. I love it so much [Adore][Adore]

It's very beautiful. I hope there will be a worm mother literature [send my heart][send my heart][send my heart]

It really suits my sense of reading.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking [admiration]

Very nice! I really like the heroine's character and the various male protagonists!

Look good, look good, look good